Reply To: As an opening… About › Forums › Den of Writers › Critiques › As an opening… › Reply To: As an opening… September 12, 2018 at 1:31 pm #1127 Mad IguanaParticipant Yep, that was the thinking. The rest of it is quite close 3rd person, so it’s sort of cheating to know that she’s going to succeed this time. But, that presupposes something (on my part) about the rest of the book and the audience, I think.
