You know, since I read that cover letter earlier this afternoon, a memory has resurfaced, and it’s of familiarity with your work. I think, quite some time ago, I read an opening chapter about a Tube crash and a young girl that could have been Jess or Nancy.
I can’t remember when, or the circumstances, or the writing site. It might have been in the earlier days of the Cloud when it was simply the WW forum.
I also don’t remember if I said anything to you after I’d read it.
Of course, if your novel is recent, I’m mistaken, and confusing it with another story.
Btw, dual povs are the best – mine’s like this.