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JaneShuff
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Ha, Kaz! Have you snuck into my house and been reading over my shoulder? That’s pretty much where I’d got to – thanks in no small part to this thread. I was avoiding the scene and the complicated POV didn’t help. However I think, by making it somehow trigger a flashback to the earlier scene where she is beaten up by her husband and making her feel all the rage she should have felt then but couldn’t, it will, I hope, become a turning point for her that will feed into the getting out of the river scene. Plus it does need a bit of fleshing out anyway. I love beta readers!