@athelstone
Active 12 hours, 21 minutes ago-
-
Knicks replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 1 month ago
Happiness Is An Old Slut
Y’know, there were a time – before the Great Dark – when I would chase Happiness. Relentless in my pursuit, I would pin her with a heated stare onto the walls of my life, undress her slow and vulgar, dry fingerin’ the places where she kept her best secrets. But even when I caught her, had my way with her, I knew Happine…[Read more]
-
Kate replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 1 month ago
Teddy was lost.
Teddy’s owner, Joe, was inconsolable. His face red and blotchy, his screams ringing through the house. How could Joe and Teddy survive apart.
Teddy himself was having a nice time. He’d been left on the bus, propped up next to the window where he could see the world go by. Life with Joe was nice, but sometimes a bit boring. Teddy…[Read more]
-
Knicks replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
Ath! Ath! I got sumthing!! Had real worries about it but a slight thing came to me this morning. So I’ll see where it takes me 😃✨
-
Libby started the topic Short stories, flash and micro-fiction in the forum
Beta Reading 4 years, 2 months agoI’m very happy to beta read short stories, flash and micro-fiction.
I generally print out anything longer than a couple of pages as my reading skills engage better with hard copy. Therefore if you send me your work please number the pages. Thank you!
-
-
Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
I lied.
Summer of sixty-one – when Percy Faith’s ‘Theme for a Summer Place’ persistently played along the telegraph wires, exhaling hauntingly into the ether – was one of much excitement and promise for the girls of the small Hertfordshire village where I lived, thanks to a recent influx into the village of no fewer than eight new males, mos…[Read more]
-
Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
The glow of embers in the fireplace, warm and comforting
Shadows chased by the sudden flare of a match
A candle flickering in a steamed-up window
The bob of a rescuer’s headlamp on a snowy mountain
A lighthouse in a stormy sea, guiding, reassuring
Sunlight slicing through dark curtains
A beam of torchlight on an unlit path
In the darkness, i…[Read more] -
Knicks replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
Lols, oh dear. I’m happy. I am. Happy happy happy. Tinking the happiest of thoughts. And not failing whatsoever. *goes off to see what big, fat li-, I mean what I can do* 😬😬 haha
-
Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
Each of the entries for February was so evocative, provocative and moody; it was a great selection of theme from @Raine, and great flow of words from everyone who participated. Congrats as always, Ath, can’t wait to go peek and see what you have in store for March 😊✨
-
Libby replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
I love this story, Ath @athelstone. Congratulations!
Sandra and Knicks’ stories are fabulous too.
-
Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
Congratulations Ath, an intriguing tale and well-deserved top place. And thank you Raine for providing me with a very useful opportunity to work out a scene in my current wip as well as inspire others to provide entertaining tales.
-
Raine replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
Thank you guys for entering! And for writing such fun pieces – they all have something special to them, I think.
@athelstone I love the details and voice of yours, the small touches that make each character so recognisable.
@sandradavies well, naked men wrestling, what more can anyone ask for really?? Love the balance of violence and tenderness…[Read more] -
Libby replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
The Mooring (325 words)
The two sisters were in their twenties. They stood on the kyle’s shore in their Puffa jackets and looked at a small yacht moored to a buoy, hatches closed. The yacht floated as calmly as a swan.
Although the sisters were dressed in similar clothes their personalities were opposites.
“They were lucky,” said Lena, about…[Read more]
-
Raine posted an update 4 years, 2 months ago
Just a couple more days to get your monthly comp entries in. If it helps with motivation, I’ve just had a recent one accepted for publication! So write them words, they might end up earning you money!
-
Daedalus posted an update 4 years, 3 months ago
Have you seen this @thea? https://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/2022/feb/22/lavish-roman-mosaic-is-biggest-found-in-london-for-50-years
-
Thanks so much for the link, Daeds! I have read about several interesting finds recently along the HS2 route, but I hadn’t heard about this mosaic in London. What a wonderful find, and in good condition too 🙂
-
No problem. I was astonished that there’s still stuff like that left to find!
-
Yes, there have been amazing finds. They certainly built stuff to last 🙂
-
-
-
-
Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Sarita
Clouds thicker than Peruvian fog, vaporous specters rising across the shifting mirror of the sky. The day’s restlessness calms my peregrine heart, part of the patterning and paradox of life I’ve come to cherish. Chilling drops of rain splatter like surprises on my upturned face, not unpleasant, like a birthday party you didn’t expect but a…[Read more]
-
-
-
Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
A question of perception
After, naked, panting; towelling stinging sweat from our eyelids, we stepped outside through the open French windows into the still-warm August night. A quick sideways glance: he as relieved as I to no longer be the focus of intense female attention. Relieved it had ended – honourably? Yes. That could honestly be said.…[Read more]
- Load More
