Athelstone

  • Hi @Athelstone, sorry – no I don’t think there is a delete option currently either, it was just that I could delete it off the main wall, but not in the forum which seemed like it might cause confusion. It would be good to be able to delete your own comments though, particularly for the monthly comps & publication rights issues, but it’s not critical.

  • It does look much improved @athelstone. Thank you for all the hard work. I love that copy/pasting from word works better & that reply threads won’t vanish. Also love the chat – I commented in there that I almost didn’t spot it though – is there a way of making it more prominent? Or listed on the ‘Activity’ drop down menu at the top?
    THe other…[Read more]

  • I’ve popped over and had a look. It all seems great and the looks is fine as far as I’m concerned.

    How one goes about getting more punters is a bit of a head-scratcher.

  • Let me be the first to give you a huge thank you for all the hard work you’ve obviously put in.

    The new navigation is a huge improvement over the old impenetrable one. I think you’ve addressed all the concerns I raised. I particularly like the little explanation boxes that pop up when you hover over a heading. Finding your way around the site…[Read more]

    • I too spent some time checking out the new improved site and, without any IT knowledge as to what and how achieved, found it easy and intuitive. (My commenting on it was delayed by my rediscovery of a blog about the narrative arc which, having read Seagreen’s 7 ‘C’s I spent much of the rest of the day trying to apply to my current wip, before…[Read more]

  • Failed on the basics.
    I’d been riding pillion on a BSA since my teens. Clandestinely to start, because my parents forbade me, but by 2004 I was well past that, and three years past my first BSA rally, which had taken us to Australia. Being one of 200 bikes wending our way across rolling golden hills an unforgettable experience. Even so, that…[Read more]

  • Hi Ath, I’ve got my thinking cap on so hopefully something will light up.

  • Janette posted an update 4 years, 6 months ago

    Can anyone help me with my book research? I’ve come across a fatal flaw in my book and need to age up a character a little (otherwise it’s a full book rewrite, which I’m trying to avoid).
    Did anyone (or anyone you know) leave school in Summer when you could have/were due to leave in the Easter break?
    My MC leaves at Summer, but I need to add…[Read more]

    • I can’t think leaving at Easter would’ve been that likely, because of ‘O’levels.

      • Hi, Sandra,
        I was one of the ones who had to stay on an extra year and leave aged 16 (in June 1974 – oops, showing my age!), which I was pleased about because I wanted to sit exams and my parents wanted me to leave to earn a wage. It was a common thing then, that some kids were expected to leave the earliest opportunity to ‘bring home a wage’, and…[Read more]

        • I was 16 at Easter 1963, so can’t help you there, sorry.

          • Steve says school leaving age was 15, but you could stay on. Also see wikipedia Raising_of_school_leaving_age_in_England_and_Wales

            • Thanks, Sandra. I’m trying to find someone who could have or did leave at Easter. Better still, someone who remembers if it was mandatory or whether there were exceptions. My MC wants to stop on, but her parents are insistent she leaves asap. However, if something meant she couldn’t or shouldn’t leave at Easter …

              It’s a long shot, and I’m fast…[Read more]

    • I don’t think it’s ever been mandatory to leave at Easter – short of expulsion. You are required to choose your subjects for a full year well in advance of Easter, so that staying on is the default position, even if it’s obvious to all that a specific student is going to leave. In theory, I could have left school at Easter in 1972, but at that…[Read more]

      • Thanks, Ath, that’s very helpful. My MC is being pressured by her parents to leave school and earn a wage, but the employer/employment route might be the way to go. Pity I didn’t think of this when I drafted the book.

  • I really enjoyed your story too, Newbie!

    Thank you Raine, for being a wonderful comp host, it was funfunfun like I knew it would be 😃🦇🎃👻

    Couldn’t agree with Ath more, we duh best 🥳✨

  • Daedalus posted an update 4 years, 6 months ago

    Recovering from Covid. It’s no joke. Be careful out there people, the risk is real

  • Congratulations, Athelstone. A well deserved win. 🙂

    Love your story too, Knicks. xx

    Thank you Raine for organising the comp. xx

  • Hi all! Thank you so much for entering this month – sorry I’m not the actual winner of last month but I’ve had fun being undeserved organiser anyway!

    @knickylaurelle, I loved the dark, shadowy atmosphere to this. Lost boys and forests and witches – *chefs kiss* Some utterly beautiful imagery in here, my favourite has got to be ‘a cackle can be…[Read more]

    • Thank you Raine for so topically filling the breach, setting and judging (always the hardest part) the monthly comp. I am making good progress after stroke + surgery so hope to be back to full-strength participation soon

      • *giant hugs*

      • Oh my goodness, Sandra, I had no idea you were going through such a hard time. Pleased to hear you’re making good progress. Take it easy. Best wishes to you and yours. xxx

        • Thanks, Newbie. I count myself lucky to have come through it with minimal side effects – and a huge warm glow from the quantity and breadth of caring messages which have come my way from friends and family.

  • On the phone so I’ll keep this short…

    I’m not the same person I was ten years ago (or even five years ago) and the things that impacted me then are not the things that impact me now.
    I see it as growth ☺️

  • Interesting. I’ve used writing as a way to process the emotions linked to some pretty unpleasant episodes in my past. I know that a lot of therapists advise one to write a letter (never meaning to send, a la Nights in White Satin). I’ve tried that, though the letter format doesn’t work for me, whereas more of a blog style recounting does.

    I’ve…[Read more]

  • Great! I’d love to read some blogs from ten years ago – before all the nonsenses that started in 2016, and when there were busy Writers Forums full of blogs, shallow or profound but always fascinating…

    Please post an example…

  • Raine posted an update 4 years, 7 months ago

    One week left to get your spooky flashes in for the October comp. Come unnerve and delight me. 🙂

  • Ath that creepy as hell, man 😭😭

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    I’ve spent the last 17 months recovering from a particularly horrific Halloween party and I’m reluctant to accept this invitation to another one.
    Still, if you have to face your fears, where better to do it than with a group of thrill seekers who think nothing of taking ‘daring’ to its limit?
    Yes, I know it…[Read more]

  • All done! Lost the ending I wanted to word count woes lols, but this was very fun none the less 👻🐱‍👤

    Lost

    Tall pines creak in the eeriness of night, blown by a sudden, fierce gale. It tears through the forest like a spectral fox hounded by wild and ghostly dogs, and the darkness feels alive with power and invocation. Two, small boys stop running…[Read more]

  • oooOoOoooooh!! I love it. This is going to be funfunfun 🎃👻🦇

  • Done! and lol! 😀

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