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  • I asked it about limits and it recommended breaking text into chunks, so I divided the input into blocks of chapters, but as I was about to do the final block I hit an error, which I think was the limit of my free access: there was a message about that soon afterwards. Annoyingly inconclusive! Some chapters were summarised in full, others were…[Read more]

  • I tried a 500 word synopsis. It was curiously like a “bad” synopsis that an inexperienced writer might try, too much detail at the outset and then broad generalisations for the middle and end. It always concludes by asking whether you want any refinements, so I asked for more detail about the conclusion and it invented a character and several plot…[Read more]

  • This is very interesting, Ath. Have you tried giving it a word count, e.g. to produce a 300-word synopsis?

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    ODDS AND ENDINGS IN MY LIFE, INCLUDING THE STICKY ONES. .

    For me the phrase ‘the end’ invokes a variety of feelings.

    Some, such as the end of a candle or bit of soap are not memorable. Those endings flash out of existence in a blink of thoughtlessness, never to be recalled again.

    However, dancing along the polar opposite to that, there are…[Read more]

  • As we are in imminent peril of being swamped with things-AI if Mr Starmer and our present government are to be believed, I thought I’d bite the bullet and give ChatGPT a whirl. As an experiment, I thought I’d try for a summary of my WIP. Since that’s something I will have to wrestle with when I come to submit, I wondered whether it might be…[Read more]

  • My offering was much  the same  Richard.

    I thought about all the things  that cause me difficulty  – didn’t know how to start  writing about it  and  ended up  making myself smile with a bit of  fun.

  • Hmm… this time of year tends to call to mind themes of new beginnings and fresh starts, but that’s a bit of a cliché, and I wouldn’t be surprised if it’s been done before. So let’s look at it the other way. New Year also marks the end of the old year, so please give me up to 500 words on whatever the phrase ‘the end’ calls to your mind.

  • Thanks, Ath. I should maybe point out that ‘the protagonist’ is in fact me. The brief didn’t say it had to be fiction, and my effort isn’t. I really am building, slowly and very carefully, a huge model car.

  • Oh Lord. Two entries. Both very different from what I expected. Not that I expected anything in particular, but I know what I mean. Both excellent. Richard’s engrossed me, as the protagonist was engrossed in the model. Terrie’s made me laugh out loud. There’s no winner or loser here, because it was a virtual toss of the coin. Richard, choose us a…[Read more]

  • Just in case you don’t already have a reading list as long as several arms end to end, here are more books — courtesy of the BBC programme Between the Covers.

    Does anyone feel like picking one of them on behalf of the rest of us — the rest of us being anyone who’s interested — so we can have a bit of a book-group type discussion about it on…[Read more]

  • Libby replied to the topic One Christmas in the forum Coffee Shop 1 year, 3 months ago

    Thank you for posting this, Ath. Christmas has been so busy I’ve only just read it. It’s a touching story.

  • <p style=”text-align: center;”>DEGREES OF DIFFICULTY IN MY LIFE</p>
    <p style=”text-align: center;”>(when it gets difficult  – make it  rhyme )</p>
    I find it difficult to hide the truth, or say things that are untrue.

    I can’t fit inside a kayak, or paddle a canoe.

    I can’t crochet anything or mend my pushbike brake

    and bouncing on a tramp…[Read more]

  • Athelstone posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago

    Anybody thinking of entering the last Monthly Competition of 2024? Still plenty of time for a few hundred words, but it’s getting closer.

  • RichardB posted an update 1 year, 3 months ago

    Christmas spirit was alive and well at our ‘local’ this morning when we turned up for a drink on the house ‘as a thank you to our regulars.’ The landlord (yes, really: it’s a free house) was wearing a teeshirt saying ‘You scumbag’ and the landlady one saying ‘You maggot.’ Pity I didn’t catch them side by side…

    Merry Christmas, all, what’s left of it.

    • And to you. We’ve just waived 14 guests away after hosting a Boxing Day buffet. I enjoyed it, mainly, but glad it’s done.

  • Athelstone started the topic One Christmas in the forum Coffee Shop 1 year, 3 months ago

    Back on the WordCloud I started a group called Advent for Christmas-related posts. It was slightly popular, but back then we had an active wall and plenty of other groups, so it never flew especially high.

    I posted a short children’s story. It needs a good edit that I might give it one day, but i think it’s quite fun, so if you’re in need of some…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic Happy Christmas in the forum Coffee Shop 1 year, 4 months ago

    And many thanks to you, Libby, and to the other happy few who make this place worth keeping. A very happy Christmas to us all.

  • Libby started the topic Happy Christmas in the forum Coffee Shop 1 year, 4 months ago

    Happy Christmas, all, and best wishes for 2025. Thank you, Ath, for keeping the site going for another year and for organising the challenge.

  • I salute you, Ath. The last time we had a kitchen makeover we had it done professionally, though to be fair to myself that was an intregal part of the deal. To show my respect I am actually responding to your prompt, for a change.

    Modelling Therapy

    I’ve always been a sucker for a nice model. In my youth I used to build plastic kits (Airfix and…[Read more]

    • Aha! Yes, having it done professionally was always part of my view of things as well. Then we both agreed to spend more than we probably should on the various bits and pieces. The chap in the shop said, in confidence, our fitting is expensive and you might want to get your own fitter. He hit some keys and offered us in excess of £4.5k for…[Read more]

      • My God, i salute you again. Fitting tiny bits together that are already the right size, as in my entry piece, is one thing, but I’ve never had the skill to do DIY to such fine tolerances. Now I’m old and can usually find the money to pay for work to be done professionally I try to avoid DIY altogether, though I did manage the other day to mend a…[Read more]

        • I think it was the number of surprises that wore me down. We looked at finished units in a showroom and it never occurred to me that the various pieces wouldn’t be supplied ready to fit. So when the parts arrived it was a shock to see several 4 metre lengths of aluminium lying amongst them, together with endless bags of anonymous and unexplained…[Read more]

          • You are right Ath, paying for installation is rather expensive so I’ve opted for Christmas at daughters and have been gutting the kitchen myself. Also sourced some of the new items myself, although, like you, have gone for integral fridge and dishwasher.
            So far I’ve emptied the cupboards and removed all the upper ones the extractor fan…[Read more]

  • This links to a short piece in The Bookseller:

    The Bookseller – News – Society of Authors calls for change to ‘acknowledge all writers involved’ in celebrity-written books

    The main message is:

    “The SoA is asking publishers, celebrities, booksellers, festival organisers, agents and all involved in the industry to recognise and reward all…[Read more]

  • Janette posted an update 1 year, 4 months ago

    Phew, Winter comp story posted. Hope it may be forgiven that this is an old monthly comp entry that I have torn apart, expanded and reassembled. It is all I could come up with given my other obligations, and I now hope errors and amends don’t leap out at me!

    • I hope you may be forgiven too, because my entry was conceived in a similar way. I don’t even have your excuse of being too busy, but the story asked to be written and so I wrote it.

      • I look forward to reading yours, Richard.

      • Me too to a large extent. My entry very much a side/back story of two or three other comp entries all of which stemmed from one or more of my ‘Love triangles with murder series. I did hope for something different but the characters have taken up permanent residence in my head.

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