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RichardB replied to the topic CAS longlist in the forum Podium 3 years, 11 months ago
And congratulations to you too, Ath. Which story is yours? It did strike me that at least one of the titles had your ring to it, but I might have been completely off-beam so I ain’t sayin’.
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Athelstone replied to the topic CAS longlist in the forum Podium 3 years, 11 months ago
Congratulations, Richard. It’s a powerful story that deserves recognition.
I see from the website that my entry has been longlisted, too, which feels rather good. I didn’t recognise any of the other titles.
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RichardB started the topic CAS longlist in the forum Podium 3 years, 12 months ago
A slightly longer version of the story I entered for last winter’s challenge, The Girl Who Came to Stay, has been longlisted in the CAS Short Story Competition, wot Daedalus alerted us to a couple of months ago. Only the longlist (and of course I have no idea how many entries there were), but since this is effectively the first recognition of any…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition July 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 3 years, 12 months ago
Andrew, 1975
It’s February, and evening is upon us. Andrew goes unnoticed. Pedestrians streaming by the Palace Theatre barely even see a youth leaning against the wall. Some look towards him, but they are peering through the glass doors. Maybe they are wondering whether Jesus Christ Superstar is worth the ticket price. The traffic sweeping a…[Read more]
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Raine replied to the topic The Future of the Den (again) in the forum Blogs 3 years, 12 months ago
Yeah, I think recruiting people to a Discord group is much easier than to a website, tbh. I spend more time in my discord group than I do any online group, mainly because it’s an app & I can do it easily when I’m away from my laptop. Partly because it facilitates chat in a way websites, however well constructed, just don’t. And where I am now, I’m…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic The Future of the Den (again) in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
There’s a lot to be said for Discord. There are a number of pages I visit regularly. I don’t imagine it would suit some of our members, but there may be no alternative in a year’s time.
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Raine posted an update 4 years ago
Wanted to let anyone know who remembers my Bathymetry story from one of the winter challenges … it’s been shortlisted for a British Fantasy Award! Very surprised by that, but proves how far our wee stories born in here can roam!
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Raine replied to the topic The Future of the Den (again) in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
Just wanted to extend my appreciation to Ath and Jules for starting & maintaining/updating/supporting this place. I’m afraid I have very much drifted off, largely just because of the other demands on my writing time. It’s nice to know this place is here & I look forward to the annual challenges, but I honestly don’t spend enough time here to be…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic I've seen fiction written in present tense described as potentially static in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
I too fail to understand what ‘static’ is supposed to mean in this context, or why it should apply to present tense. I have no problem whatever with reading present tense stories: sometimes I think I even prefer them. With past tense you’re always at one remove, as if listening to someone tell a story. Present tense is immersive, immediate. After…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic I've seen fiction written in present tense described as potentially static in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
No preference.
My WIP is first person, present tense. I didn’t choose or plan this; it just happened when I started writing. I think it fits the voice of the MC.
I suppose that many people who are mainly familiar with a narrator, often omnipotent, addressing the reader in past tense, assume that present tense (especially first person) is likely…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic I've seen fiction written in present tense described as potentially static in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
Just realised, quite a few of my Challenge stories are written in first person present. I think to give myself an extra treat!!Would definitely deny they are static!
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Sandra replied to the topic I've seen fiction written in present tense described as potentially static in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
Brief, and not necessarily well-thought out reply, (nor am I 100% I’ve got the terminology right), but Elly Griffith’s ‘Ruth Galloway ‘ series is told in present tense, with sentences/Pov as “Ruth watches as C and C get into the Rolls” (second person??) Every time I start a new one I think “Oh no, forgot how much I dislike this” then very…[Read more]
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Sandra posted an update 4 years ago
“What’s new” is Knicks truly inspirational entry for this month’s competition. Read it for yourself, look at the image of Andrew as a young lad, and make a later version of him for yourself. You’ve more than ten days to do it.
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Daedalus replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
Very true. There are precious few lighter moments. Mind you, he’s not quite the worst author I know for that. Not exactly fantasy (although he did write a collaborative series with Terry Pratchett), Stephen Baxter has the habit of making you identify with and root for particular characters, and then watch as their responses to ever tougher…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
I discussed that last point with the person who recommended the series to me, and we agreed that that’s actually one of its strengths. In real-life situations of war, revolution, unrest etc good people are just as likely, or even more likely, to get killed as bad people. The atrocities that occur at regular intervals are paralleled in real life…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Film, storytelling – psychic distance again – and looking under the bonnet in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
@woolleybeans wrote: “For me, that aspect [the defining factor of PD] was/is the level to which the POV character’s thoughts, feelings etc influence/become part of the writing style itself.
As for how that correlates to film/TV…
The saturation of colours? Whether the shot angles up through something? The somewhat clichĂ© blurry/wobbly scen…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
You’re probably right re urban fantasy, I have a rather vague grasp on the various subgenres, and that’s when authors oblige and ensure that their work falls squarely within one category. I have no idea where to put China Mieville’s Bas-Lag novels, and I suspect he likes it that way. They have the epic sweep and complex magical systems of high…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
Thank you for this Richard, on the strength of which I’ve just recommended it to my daughter.
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RichardB replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
I’m not sure that I’d call The Ten Thousand Doors urban fantasy, exactly, as I understand it (yes, I did go and look it up). it has some of the tropes, like fantastical elements intruding into our world, but the setting is neither urban nor contemporary.
I take your point about some modern fantasy being more original (I’ve sampled George R R…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Wildlife in the Kitchen in the forum Blogs 4 years ago
There’s something awe-inspiring about coming into contact with truly large insects and similar bugs, and your blog reminded me of an incident on holiday in Spain, years ago. We’d rented a cottage and on the last day we were cleaning up and I’d put a bin-bag by the door. I reached down to retrieve what looked like a piece of vegetation poking out…[Read more]
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