Julie Cordiner

  • Well done Janette for and Seagreen for such entertaining tales, and thank you Libby for forcing me into finding new characters to deal with this tricky prompt. I was grateful for the part played by Google.

  • Janette posted an update 11 months, 3 weeks ago

    I wondered if I could ask a favour of any fellow writers who enjoy character-led novels. The current title of my book Saving Grace has never really sat easy with me, being aware it also the title of a major film (one of my favourites), and I more recently learned it is the name of a US series, besides being used several times by other authors…[Read more]

    • Hi @janette , I immediately liked (Don’t) Call Me Graceless and
      My Growing Chain of Big Fat Lies. Is Fibs an alternative title?
      The first title suggests character, the second plot. They both have voice.
      I’m not keen on Fibs. It feels vague.

    • I like ‘The Art of invisible mending’ which offers intrigue.

  • <u>Parsnip Wine

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    Our back-facing neighbours were the first to acknowledge our arrival. Each time I looked out, the ever-preened woman was at her bay window, dog-in-hand (at least I think the explosion of fur was of canine origin). Gerald supposed she were sun-worshipping, her glances only polite curiosity – then he always did see the good i…[Read more]

  • Janette posted an update 1 year ago

    And sorry for the belated congratulations, Libby – amid the business of being employed again, I thought I had already posted my response to your comp win, which was a fine, worthy entry.

    I confess I didn’t know what to do with the April challenge you posted, but some thought during a weekend walk gave me a lightbulb moment.

  • Janette posted an update 1 year ago

    Kate, brilliant stuff. Congratulations!

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    Three sleeps become one [342 words]

    Odd the way memory works, Changes shape and emphasis as one grows older. For me, hearing myself  echoing my mother’s faux cheery encouragement as she told me and Robin, my brother, ‘So, you’ll be staying with Granny and Grandad Trent for a little while. Just three sleeps – ‘ shocked me. That I was  …. not ex…[Read more]

  • Sandra posted an update 1 year ago

    March competition winner declared, and I urge everyone to read the half dozen entries as evidence of the strength and breadth of talent in the Den, and thank Athelstone, for providing the venue.

  • And, at close of play, I confess I find myself reeling at the richness of the offerings sparked by this ptompt, and rather than daunted by the necessity of choosing a winner, feeling well rewarded by the pleasures of reading them – thank you all.

    <u>Terrie</u>’s single word of denial sparked instant interest, and maintained it with phrases suc…[Read more]

  • Sandra posted an update 1 year ago

    Six days left before the monthly comp deadline, and three VERY different, exciting and surely inspirational entries already. Make my selection of a winner all the harder by posting your response.

  • The Prophecy

     

    You will mistake the gulls
    for the screaming of a girl
    and run out of your flat
    to an empty landing

    This dark prophecy will forever haunt me.
    An old neighbour uttered it; a self-proclaimed psychic, who called by to pass on the warning. Such a pathetic attempt, I thought, to scare me from moving to the new flats offered to tempt…[Read more]

  • Thank you Knicks – Seagreen’s prompt really did its job!

  • Sandra posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago

    March competition is up

  • Apologies for the delay. As is my wont,  I was attempting to find a line or two of poetry to act as opening line and/or prompt which took longer than anticipated. However, in  Andrew McMillan’s ‘physical’, entitled ‘TODAY’, I found

    you will mistake the gulls

    for the screaming of a girl

    and run out of your flat

    to an empty landing”[Read more]

  • Wow, Sea, that is a surprise, especially as I felt completely out-classed by every other entry  – but challenged too, which was a Good  Thing.  I’m away from home at the  moment but will aim to post March’s compTuesday evening. Thank you all for the several inspirations.

    • It was a good call, Sandra. Congratulations. And thank you Seagreen for the inspiration to put pen to paper again.

  • This is my second attempt – lesson learned in posting too hastily without allowing time to edit (not that this one fared much better). Please feel free to disqualify if this is outside of the rules.

     

    Snuffle and the Tylwith Teg

    Brittle scales fell from his body as he staggered to the edge of hanging rock. Laughter rang out all around, but I…[Read more]

  • And it looks well worthy of continuing, Terrie!

  • Somehow I missed this entire comp – sorry Richard –  but am nevertheless rewarded by being gifted four marvellous pieces of writing – thank you each and all.

  • Dilemma

    So, last night’s message warning that the Wimps were planning some sort of revolt had been genuine, despite the unlikelihood. As Jack had said, delivering it, something must’ve fired them into action, provided them with   a Warrior script instead of the Wimp one their biology merited.

    Frey’s eyes sharpened on noting my arrival (We’d a…[Read more]

  • Regrettably late to this – and non-participant – but what a joy to catch up with those that did make the effort- thank you @ Richard and @Terrie

  • Janette posted an update 1 year, 4 months ago

    Phew, Winter comp story posted. Hope it may be forgiven that this is an old monthly comp entry that I have torn apart, expanded and reassembled. It is all I could come up with given my other obligations, and I now hope errors and amends don’t leap out at me!

    • I hope you may be forgiven too, because my entry was conceived in a similar way. I don’t even have your excuse of being too busy, but the story asked to be written and so I wrote it.

      • I look forward to reading yours, Richard.

      • Me too to a large extent. My entry very much a side/back story of two or three other comp entries all of which stemmed from one or more of my ‘Love triangles with murder series. I did hope for something different but the characters have taken up permanent residence in my head.

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