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JaneShuff replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
ZAnd it’s a vote for ‘improbable’ from me too.
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
Thanks, again, for all the good advice and reasoning, too.
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Kate replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
‘Improbable life’ gets a thumbs up from me too.
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
Thanks again for all the advice, guys.
It’s clear I should stick with “A Lyttle Goes a Long Way”.But the subtitle:
The Improbable Tale of an Ulster Storyteller
The Improbable Life of an Ulster StorytellerThe Remarkable Tale… or Life…
The Extraordinary Tale… or Life…or some other type of Tale… or Life…?
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Sandra started the topic Monthly comp – July 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago
‘Bringing a gun into a house
changes it.’The opening words lines of a poem entitled ‘The Gun’, written in 2001 by Vicki Feaver, whose work I discovered last year.
I’d like you to enlarge upon this by adding no more than 200 words.
And because I’m not convinced that two months makes participation any more likely, I’m setting a deadline of…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago
Great idea for the competition – specially as I had an entry all ready to go and didn’t need to do any actual work…
Congrats, Sandra. I’m only glad I didn’t have to do the judging.
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Kate replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
Definitely keep the subtitle in, IMO.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago
Great idea for the competition, Raine.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
I like the sub title. It complements the title – which I also think is the right one!
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
Further thanks to Kate, Kaz and John. It seems I really ought to stick with my working title. So how about:
A LYTTLE GOES A LONG WAY
The extraordinary life of an Ulster StorytellerOr is it better without a subtitle?
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago
Yes, brilliant competition. And totally agree with Raine. I would have carried on reading all of them. Congratulation to Sandra and can I add my name to the list of people who would like to read the rest of it.
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Sandra replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago
Good heavens, Raine – what a compliment, especially in view of the strength of the rest; I certainly was torn between at least three to name as my favourite. Thank you, indeed. And you can most certainly read the rest, as soon as it’s done. (Currently ‘resting’ after finishing a first draft last week, and already knowing things need…[Read more]
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Raine replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago
Well, thank-you everyone for entering. I’m so glad I set this particular challenge as it’s been so much fun getting little insights into all your works in progress and I can genuinely say I’d have carried on reading every one of them. They all pulled me right in and left me wanting more, so seriously well dones on lots of good stuff.
Because…[Read more]
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Kate replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 1 month ago
Hi Tony. I find unrelenting has negative connotations, as if his time in the limelight were a terrible burden that he didn’t wish for. Whereas A Lyttle goes a Long Way piques my interest, and the follow on line that mentions the ‘Ulster Storyteller’ wraps it up for me and would make me take a look inside to see if I fancied a read.
Hope that’s useful.
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 1 month ago
Thanks, Squidge. No, I do like the original title (You should see the length of the list of “Lyttle” puns I rejected before choosing this one! There’s already a completely unrelated book out there called “Lyttle by Lyttle”, my first thought.) I just wondered if I could grasp readers attention without using his name. Maybe I’m worrying needlessly.…[Read more]
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 1 month ago
OK, thanks for the feedback GG
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 1 month ago
OK, so I could still go with “A Lyttle goes a long way”. I agree it’s a nice pun, although any pun could put some people off, I suppose. I was hoping to avoid using his name in the title as though it is his name, alone, that makes it worth buying the book – and if it doesn’t happen to ring a bell with you, why would you buy it?
Would this revised…[Read more]
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 1 month ago
Thanks Gipps. THe working title is better, eh? Perhaps you three are right. But jaw-dropping is a strong word; thanks for that.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years, 1 month ago
AAHHH I need to keep up. Well done you two!
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Raine replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years, 1 month ago
I said on Twooter but for double emphasis – YAY!!! So pleased for both of you. Totally deserved and fingers are crossed for the shortlist!
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