Sandra

  • Sandra posted a new activity comment 1 year, 8 months ago

    Another answer, another character or two – yes please Richard, go for it!

  • Sandra posted an update 1 year, 8 months ago

    September monthly competition is up. If you were alive and kicking in the Sixties, even if (shame on you) you don’t usually bother, you might find inspiration here. Each month demonstrates the benefits of stepping outside one’s comfort zone and giving it a go.

    • It occurs to me that I’ve already answered that question in the ‘All You Need’ challenge. I could always try for another answer though…

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    Each of the dozen short stories in A L Kennedy’s 2009  collection, entitled ‘What becomes,’ attempts to answer  the  question hauntingly  posed by Jimmy Ruffin in 1967. I’d like to know how successfully (or otherwise) your character(s) deal with their particular situation, preferably  in no more than 600 words, and no later than midnight on…[Read more]

  • Oh heck – I never saw that coming, not among so many superb entries – thank you, Libby, for comp and comments, and thank you all for much reading awe and entertainment. I’ll aim to post September’s competition before the end of the day. [but isn’t it odd how often a last minute, popped into one’s head,  final sentence seems to make what seems  a d…[Read more]

  • Don’t envy your task of choosing a winner, Libby!

  • Probably a bit aslant of what you were hoping for Libby, but is the idea that stuck

    ‘Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?’

     

    I guess you had to’ve been there, because even now,  months later, just thinking about it makes me smile. It was the usual semi-dormant Friday afternoon meeting, Anton, our boss, wanting us to brain-storm some sort of…[Read more]

  • Congratulations Libby – what an interesting exercise, one I’d like to attempt sometime and which you managed so smoothly. Thanks to Ath for another entertaining  Teabreak episode. And to Terrie for both the challenge and the summing up. The being stretched into a maybe new direction is so good for my writing, shame more Denizens can’t find time to enter.

  • “Season to taste”

    I could say it started as a joke, except I knew, at that age, Suze and I were, a bit self-consciously, aiming to bridge the gap between our schoolgirl selves and the mysterious, scary-but-enticing grown-up world we were bracing ourselves to enter.

    Both of us were in top English. Read our homework to each other, critiqued (a mor…[Read more]

  • Wow. Thank you Libby for this at-first-sight innocuous challenge. (I tried to resist the autobiographical, but in the end it was the only way for me to go) so thank you Terrie and Ath for such impactful alternatives; I’m glad I didn’t have the task of choosing between them.

  • Electricity and us

    Electricity has played a considerable part in directing  the path our lives have travelled, from the instant (if only sensory) flash of knowledge, at the end of our first date, that “This man is who I can safely be ME with!” to our fifty years of living in the North East.

    At that time (5th April 1963) he worked for a comp…[Read more]

  • Thank you Ath, both for the competition and for your encouraging summing up. I certainly would’ve been hard-pressed to choose a winner, so congratulations and thanks to Libby, and also to Terrie and Seagreen.

  • (This may well be missing the point)

    The language of flowers not always sweet

    Only after finding, (months later)  photographs other than the ones taken by fourteen-year-old schoolgirl Kally Logan that caused all the trouble did Luke Darbyshere register flowers had twice been fleetingly present on his wedding day. Much of the time he’d been su…[Read more]

  • Sea, thank you for the useful challenge, especially because it helped me formulate my character as well as sparking such a brilliant range of responses; I wouldn’t’ve liked to choose a winner.

  • Sandra posted a new activity comment 2 years ago

    No good asking me about grammar, so I can’t give a reason for it but while I had no hiccup over “My eyes accustomed to the darkness” I mentally inserted ‘themselves’ after accustomed.

    • Which is to supply an object to the verb and make it grammatically correct.

      • Libby replied 2 years ago

        Thank you for sorting this out, Ath. It has made me think more carefully about verbs 🙂

  • “Transfer of information” is where I stumble. I’ve several notebooks but rarely  there when I need them, so a handy piece of paper does the trick. I then blutack it to the shelf above my monitor from which, within days usually, it drop, onto the paper chaos that is my working space. then promptly disappears. Bigger problem is organising  those n…[Read more]

  • Mishaping to fit

     

    Only as he pushed open the door into Haugesund’s Folkepuben, his mind occupied not only with what he needed to establish with Lars Sigmundssen but also a slightly fearful curiosity as to how Lars would react to his having slept with Maja, Lars’ current woman, was Rick Thorssen reminded, by the roar of convivial con…[Read more]

  • Thank you for this challenge Terrie, and your kind comments; I was glad of the opportunity to make best use of it. Well done Sea – and never doubt those who have read you KNOW full well you are indeed a talented and sparkling writer, and thank you Ath for evoking. albeit dimly, the challenges of childhood.

  • Cheeky leap into an attempt of an opener for ‘Snap is not a children’s game’ 

    Vic Duncan. Did Lucy but know it, the first of three Duncan men she’d sleep with before she died, possibly dangerous, but an especially satisfying addition to her habitual  maintenance of a quartet of alphabetically consecutively-named lovers.

    It began in the final yea…[Read more]

  • Congratulations Terrie – a tale that got richer with every re-reading, as did those of Alex at Ath. And thank you Pinkbelt for the challenge.

  • Retrieving memories

    When on the Word Cloud, in 2014, Alan P proposed the challenge ‘We’re not in Kansas anymore’, I was in need of an explanation as to why Luke Darbyshere ( DI and main character in my ‘Love triangles with murder series) regularly sabotaged relationships at the point when they looked like becoming meaningful. His upbring…[Read more]

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