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Elle replied to the topic A Blank Piece of Paper (short Story – critique) in the forum Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
Wow, thank you guys for taking the time to read and offer feedback and suggestions. It’s all very helpful and useful to me.
@JaneShuff ā thanks for pointing our that sentence to me I can see how it’s confusing and needs some work. And I will correct the pronoun and tense slip!
@Daedalus – the editing feedback and suggestions are great, thank y…[Read more]
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Philippa East replied to the topic Festival of Writing news…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Oh my goodness, thanks guys. You know, without all your support over the years, I wouldn’t be in this position. Fact.
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Elle replied to the topic The Disappearance of Rebecca Faulks (short Story – 2,800 words) in the forum Critiques 7 years, 10 months ago
Hi Raine,
Thanks for reading and for your feedback, it is really useful.
I like your suggestion about adding tension and about trying. My idea was to show what happens when you stop trying and how quickly things can spiral if you don’t reach out to people, but I think I can work out hints at failed attempts and create some more tension.
Thank…[Read more]
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Kate replied to the topic Festival of Writing news…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Congratulations Philippa.
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Elle replied to the topic Festival of Writing news…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Whoohoo! Congratulations!
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Bella replied to the topic Festival of Writing news…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Wow – well done, you. Will be keeping fingers crossed.
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Jules replied to the topic Festival of Writing news…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Brilliant news, Phillipa. Sorry I won’t be there to cheer you on – will have to cheer from the Den. Rooting for you though and can’t wait to hear how it goes š
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Debi Alper replied to the topic Festival of Writing news…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Always great to have ‘one of our own’ to cheer on. Mind you, I’m going to have to hold myself in check. Apparently, I’m doing the comp intros on both Friday and Saturday this year. Even though the decision isn’t down to me, I’ll be tempted to jump up and down and yell, ‘Vote for her!’
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Daedalus replied to the topic Festival of Writing news…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Wow, well done Philippa! Although I’m not in the least bit surprised š
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Fiona replied to the topic Festival of Writing news…. in the forum Podium 7 years, 10 months ago
Congratulations! So sorry Iām stuck in China and missing the excitement(BRIC)
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