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  • Bella replied to the topic Susie in the forum Blogs 5 years, 8 months ago

    Thank you for taking us with you on that trip down Memory Lane. What a lovely story. Here’s to Susie.

  • Well-written and informative blog, as always. Thank you.

    I love seeing Welsh words and working out how they might be pronounced. I knew how to pronounce Abergele because my grandmother, father and aunt were evacuated there during the war, and Gran used to speak of it.

    Many years ago, the law firm I worked at acted for a client buying a snooker…[Read more]

  • KazG replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 5 years, 9 months ago

    Yes, I agree with @raine and @jillybean. Boyne is clearly lazy and arrogant with it. I recall some online stoush he had with the Auschwitz Memorial Museum (!!) when they criticised the historical accuracy of his book, and his snooty and dismissive response. I have despised him since I must say. I tend to research more than I need but I have a…[Read more]

  • Fascinating, Richard. Rich’s words may have been ahead of their time, but that serves to emphasise how persistent the root causes of these disasters are. We still do it, even with our modern safety culture. Sadly, there are forces working to erode what gains have been made. The “Health & Safety Gone Mad” slogan may not belong to a formal campaign;…[Read more]

  • Jules replied to the topic Positive thoughts in the forum Group logo of CoronaMoCoronaMo 5 years, 9 months ago

    Well done on the short story acceptance, Doug.

  • Raine replied to the topic Positive thoughts in the forum Group logo of CoronaMoCoronaMo 5 years, 9 months ago

    @dougk sorry for being so useless at checking in here. Hi & well done on the short story acceptance. Is it available online?
    I repeat the ‘this too shall pass’ thing to myself fairly regularly! It’s the perfect balance of hope and recognition.

  • JaneShuff posted an update 5 years, 9 months ago

    Some advice please. I have just started reading aloud everyday via Facetime to my father who has Alzheimers and we are close to getting to the end of the book he had picked up. So I am looking for something else to read? Does anyone have any recommendations? His passion was sailing although he is quite happy to read anything. Short stories might…[Read more]

    • Sorry – can’t really help. The only remotely sailingy books I can think of are @daedalus‘ eponymous book, ‘the life of pi’, ‘this thing of darkness’ and MM Kaye’s ‘trade winds’. He’d enjoy Daed’s perhaps? And ‘this thing of darkness’ is awesome, (& ~biographical) but the other two prob not ideal!

      • What about that perennial fave of mine, Hemingway’s ‘The Old Man and the Sea’? It’s quite short, the plot and language alike are stripped down and simple, yet it’s so moving.

    • Hi @janeshuff I’ve had a quick look through the public library catalogue. I haven’t read any of the following but how about:
      In the wake of heroes : sailing’s greatest stories introduced by Tom Cunliffe
      London : Adlard Coles Nautical, 2015.
      All at sea : true and tall tales / trawled by Libby Purves. Fontana Paperbacks, 1984. Published to…[Read more]

      • Joshua Slocum’s ‘Sailing Alone Around The World’ is great. Then there’s Francis Chichester’s book about his own circumnavigation, which I think was just called Gypsy Moth, or possibly Around The World In Gypsy Moth? Thanks for recommending Daedalus @raine – very kind. It’s OOP now but I’ll see if I have any spare copies left

  • Raine posted an update 5 years, 9 months ago

    After five looooooong months, I had five whole hours without the mini yesterday when she had her soft transition day back in school (full, ‘normal’ start on Monday). I sat at my desk (which she’d been using) AND WROTE WORDS. Not many, but some. (And then watched Umbrella Academy to recover). It was all rather lovely. 🙂

    • Oh, joy, Raine. I’ve said before I don’t know how anyone can write (or otherwise create) with offspring demanding attention. Long may the writing of words continue.

  • Raine replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 5 years, 9 months ago

    Totally agree re Boyne, @jillybean. He’s lazy and complacent, and doesn’t care who he hurts as a result.

    Having recently discovered the horrors of researching hist fic, I must admit to struggling with knowing where the line is between really getting stuck on details that don’t matter, and making sure the whole worldbuilding feels authentic.…[Read more]

  • Squidge posted an update 5 years, 9 months ago

    July’s comp is now July-and-August’s comp! If you fancy having a go, check it out here: https://www.denofwriters.com/forums/topic/monthly-comp-july-2020/

  • Jules replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 5 years, 9 months ago

    Pretty sure Stephen King now has a team of fact checkers. But yes I imagine the tone of those letters is gleeful. What I’ll say for King is that even though he’s writing speculative fiction, he portrays characters who’ve had life experiences he has not respectfully. The same cannot be said for Boyne! One of the big problems with The Boy in the…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 5 years, 9 months ago

    There are degrees to this and a dependency on the type of book being written. I am not searching for an artificial precision in moral culpability. I am not saying that there are some absolute rules at play. I am saying that if you bend the truth to suit your story, while at the same time maintaining that what you write is authentic, then there are…[Read more]

  • Athelstone started the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 5 years, 9 months ago

    This is a lightweight blog.

    I was just settling down after reading about the astonishing performance by George R R Martin at the Hugo awards, when my son approached brandishing his phone.

    ‘Look at that,’ he said.

    I looked. My son has been a fan of the Zelda video games since he was little. I played a few along with him in the last few years,…[Read more]

  • Squidge posted an update 5 years, 9 months ago

    SO sorry, folks – had completely forgotten to check in on the monthly comp! Have no excuse other than I’ve been rather focused on Tilda 3 recently and got carried away.

    As it’s already the 4th August, and there were only three entries, does anyone object to it running through this month too? Hopefully get a few more folk having a go?…[Read more]

  • Squidge posted an update 5 years, 9 months ago

    Any more for any more on the July comp? Not going to be inundated for judging this time unless there’s a last minute flurry…

  • Looking For Paradise

    The mossy church bench had no kids fighting around it. No grumpy, obstinate husbands, or house-din. Just bliss. I breathed deeply as I listened to the trees above, its branches whispering and swaying in a gentle breeze, stirring birds into song. A squirrel wriggled up rough bark and disappeared into the foliage, minding its…[Read more]

  • I think most writers are also great readers and have acquired an instinctive grasp of story structure. That doesn’t mean a bit of conscious knowledge won’t help. But sometimes you have to trust your unconscious.

  • Thank you Richard – sorry, my original reply has also slipped through a portal. I hadn’t heard of this book and as a HUGE admirer of Ursula le Guin I will do my best to remedy that (might be a challenge, from what you say). Thank you for a fascinating blog and for highlighting so clearly how fantasy can be just as powerful, if not more so, at…[Read more]

  • Ooh what an interesting conversation!

    I think it’s quite hard (impossible for me) to tailor a novel according to a detailed framework and I will often start with only the inciting incident, the external problem the MC has to fight/solve and the antagonist forces, whether they’re people or circumstances, then let the story develop a first draft…[Read more]

  • Raine posted an update 5 years, 10 months ago

    Our lovely Fiona (Bric) is on this tmrw – register here to watch….
    https://us02web.zoom.us/webinar/register/WN_p0_gtnBjRMyAoswPP36ZbQ

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