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Squidge replied to the topic Beta Reading Discussion in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
Wowser…beta reading…
As a beta reader, I do try to find something good to say as well as making suggestions for improvements. I don’t think I go into it with a checklist per se – I use gut feeling a lot as to what feels ‘right’ to me as a reader. But I sometimess feel that I’m not an objective enough beta reader – I don’t always ‘get’ other…[Read more]
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KazG replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
Phew! Nothing new to add to add really. I don’t spend much time here because I’m spread way too thin as it is – life is crazy trying to keep a travel business alive during this time and also publicise book one and edit book two and I genuinely struggle with fitting it all in and not burning out.
However – when I do have time and inclination,…[Read more]
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Knicks posted an update 5 years, 1 month ago
Just did a thing for the monthly competition. 12 more days to get it, if you have a mind to! Prompt is sand or grit, 100-500 words.
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly competition July 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 1 month ago
Grit
The crunch of ice between my teeth – cold edges, agitated nerves, sabulous sensitivity. All coalescing into sharp points of pleasure in my body, my brain. Soothing. Assuasive. Momentary. Cup after cup of chipped ice; happiness only until they are empty. Nausea quickly returning.
The grit of sand and salt and soap beneath my fingers, the…[Read more]
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly competition July 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 1 month ago
Will see what I can do between now and the deadline, Libby 😊✨
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Knicks replied to the topic "I write like" in the forum Coffee Shop 5 years, 1 month ago
I write like Margaret Atwood apparently 😄
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Knicks replied to the topic Beta Reading Discussion in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
This is a really great thread! The checklist and things-to-consider offered up so far are treasure. I’ve only beta read twice, and the fact that the writers are gorgeous at their writing probably made it easy for me to gush feedback and even get critical (mostly just asking questions for my own clarity, and hopefully theirs as well) without…[Read more]
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Knicks posted an update 5 years, 1 month ago
Gonna try to catch up on my reading, starting this weekend with entries from the last short story challenge ✨
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Athelstone replied to the topic Beta Reading Discussion in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
Why do you say you’re a terrible beta reader?
It’s a bit like when I had to read books for exams at school. It was no reflection on the work itself and I’ve read many of the books since with great pleasure. Something about picking up a book for a purpose (a meta-purpose if you like) that isn’t simply pleasure, idle curiosity, whatever, and my…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Beta Reading Discussion in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
Wow. So so much interesting and useful stuff, @Libby ! It would make a brilliant checklist for anyone. It will take me a bit of time to assimilate it all. I will say though, with my ‘Being betaread’ hat on, that I wouldn’t expect a beta reader of a whole novel to cover all that for me in one go if anyone is feeling a bit daunted.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Beta Reading Discussion in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
Thanks for the topic. May I add that I’m a terrible beta reader. I would like to be more useful and hope to pick up some tips if this discussion develops and hopefully turns into something more.
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JaneShuff started the topic Beta Reading Discussion in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
Here’s a separate topic for a discussion about Beta Reading. Please feel free to contribute to the discussion both on your experiences of having your work beta read and on beta reading other people’s book.
I’ll kick it off by repeating that Beta Reading has taught me a lot. I approach it from my experience of the book as a reader. Noting down my…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic "I write like" in the forum Coffee Shop 5 years, 1 month ago
James Joyce!
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JaneShuff replied to the topic "I write like" in the forum Coffee Shop 5 years, 1 month ago
I’ll try with a more lyrical section… watch this space.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic "I write like" in the forum Coffee Shop 5 years, 1 month ago
Ha ha! I write like Stephen King! I think Libby is right though and the program looks at content mostly as this was a particularly horror full section!
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Knicks replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
I am all for the idle chatter and discussions on beta reading as well. I think that is another wonderful pro of what we have here, along with the comps. The ability to get quality critique on the works we want and hope to publish. It’s like the second, necessary step on the road to being a writer. You do the work and write the thing, and then you…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
What I meant was that we can post images now, providing they are online somewhere. That said, like many things on the Den, it’s a bit hit and miss whether it works.

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Sandra replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
Sorry Ath, but I didn’t reply to your “images have always been here, just not uploading images” because I wasn’t sure what you were getting at.
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Athelstone replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
Hi – that was a reply to Sandra, just for avoidance of confusion. Yes, there are several very appealing forums available, including Discourse (and I must say as a longtime repairer, I like your forum and the topic). That said, with Discourse, we would need a VPS or similar non-shared server arrangement*, unlike a traditional web-host, so the…[Read more]
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