@woolleybeans
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RichardB replied to the topic I've seen fiction written in present tense described as potentially static in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
I too fail to understand what ‘static’ is supposed to mean in this context, or why it should apply to present tense. I have no problem whatever with reading present tense stories: sometimes I think I even prefer them. With past tense you’re always at one remove, as if listening to someone tell a story. Present tense is immersive, immediate. After…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic I've seen fiction written in present tense described as potentially static in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
No preference.
My WIP is first person, present tense. I didn’t choose or plan this; it just happened when I started writing. I think it fits the voice of the MC.
I suppose that many people who are mainly familiar with a narrator, often omnipotent, addressing the reader in past tense, assume that present tense (especially first person) is likely…[Read more]
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly competition July 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 1 month ago
<p style=”text-align: center;”>THE LIBRARIAN</p>
“Come here.”Mayrie tensed at the grave, inscrutable timbre of his voice. Some would call it a salt-of-the-earth voice but she was under no illusion about the nature of the man seated before her. The slight narrowing of her eyes all but said, if it’s just the same to you Guv, I think I’d rather…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
Very true. There are precious few lighter moments. Mind you, he’s not quite the worst author I know for that. Not exactly fantasy (although he did write a collaborative series with Terry Pratchett), Stephen Baxter has the habit of making you identify with and root for particular characters, and then watch as their responses to ever tougher…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
I discussed that last point with the person who recommended the series to me, and we agreed that that’s actually one of its strengths. In real-life situations of war, revolution, unrest etc good people are just as likely, or even more likely, to get killed as bad people. The atrocities that occur at regular intervals are paralleled in real life…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Film, storytelling – psychic distance again – and looking under the bonnet in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
@woolleybeans wrote: “For me, that aspect [the defining factor of PD] was/is the level to which the POV character’s thoughts, feelings etc influence/become part of the writing style itself.
As for how that correlates to film/TV…
The saturation of colours? Whether the shot angles up through something? The somewhat cliché blurry/wobbly scen…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
You’re probably right re urban fantasy, I have a rather vague grasp on the various subgenres, and that’s when authors oblige and ensure that their work falls squarely within one category. I have no idea where to put China Mieville’s Bas-Lag novels, and I suspect he likes it that way. They have the epic sweep and complex magical systems of high…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
I’m not sure that I’d call The Ten Thousand Doors urban fantasy, exactly, as I understand it (yes, I did go and look it up). it has some of the tropes, like fantastical elements intruding into our world, but the setting is neither urban nor contemporary.
I take your point about some modern fantasy being more original (I’ve sampled George R R…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Wildlife in the Kitchen in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
There’s something awe-inspiring about coming into contact with truly large insects and similar bugs, and your blog reminded me of an incident on holiday in Spain, years ago. We’d rented a cottage and on the last day we were cleaning up and I’d put a bin-bag by the door. I reached down to retrieve what looked like a piece of vegetation poking out…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Wildlife in the Kitchen in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
We had one of those alight on the edge of our utility room door a little while ago. Huge, and very striking. Almost big enough to have the same sort of presence as a bird rather than an insect. Can’t find pics of it now, but we fairly often see them out and about, along with different types of dragonfly and damsonfly.
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RichardB replied to the topic Wildlife in the Kitchen in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
It only occurred to me after posting to do a bit of investigating, and it turns out this must have been a female golden-ringed dragonfly, which is the longest British dragonfly and is often found quite some way from water.
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RichardB started the topic Wildlife in the Kitchen in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
Yesterday I was in the kitchen around midday when I heard a mysterious and quite loud noise. It sounded a bit like a half-speed football rattle, and it seemed to be coming from the window above the sink. On closer inspection it was coming from behind the food recycling bin we keep on the windowsill, handy for scraping the plates into before…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Film, storytelling – psychic distance again – and looking under the bonnet in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
I was going to edit this to add some links but apparently I’m too late. Anyway, in case there are any non-SE grads out there, some details on psychic distance here
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Daedalus replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
That sounds fantastic (in both senses of the word). My tbr pile is probably already longer than I will get through in my lifetime but I will add it anyway.
Fantasy definitely did seem to go through an obligatory magic ring/sword phase, not to mention the ominpresent dark lord – the overlong series’ of Terry Brooks, Terry Goodkind and, to a lesser…[Read more]
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Daedalus started the topic Film, storytelling – psychic distance again – and looking under the bonnet in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
This is going to be a super quick and probably slightly rambling blog but it’s been in my mind for a little while and I find the subject interesting so I’m just going to throw it down and see if anyone can relate.
I’ve been thinking a lot about films lately – very specifically, the way shots are composed, and what this might tell us about…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic The Future of the Den (again) in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
Thanks Ath, and everyone who’s kept this place going. I admit I haven’t done as much as I would have liked to help the process, and like everyone else who has commented I would miss the Den if it were not here. I’ve been in a bit of a low spot for (fiction) writing for a while but I have recently been meaning to wander back in the hope of a chat…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
‘…Every book back I read seemed to involve a magic sword or a ring and sorting the good from the bad became impossible…’ Yes, Kate, that was exactly my experience.
By contrast, to take a selection of the Ballantine books I read in my youth, The Well at the World’s End (William Morris), The Worm Ouroboros (E R Edison), The Night Land (William…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
Well, you’ve convinced me. I
may have to addhave added the book to my ever-growing kindle list. Another great blog by the way.“A bit harsh maybe” you say, of Ursula K. Le Guin’s remarks. My feelings about this are mixed. I can see her point, but I am not convinced. I would have thought that the way we approach the old stories is what matters.…[Read more]
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RichardB started the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
I can’t in all conscience call this a literary byway, since the subject of this blog isn’t some dusty, half-forgotten relic but a book that’s very much alive and kicking, having been published only three years ago and even been nominated for awards. But I’ve enjoyed it so much that I’d like to share that enjoyment with you, so here goes.
Looking…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic The Future of the Den (again) in the forum Blogs 4 years, 1 month ago
Do write another blog, Richard!
Yes, the Cloud had the benefit of the Writers’ Workshop behind it. Not only did people find it from WW Courses, but from other services. I found the Cloud when I bought an editorial review. Then, it had things like the ‘Getting Published’ day in London and the ‘Festival of Writing’ in York.
Goes some way to…[Read more]
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