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Janette replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 2 weeks ago
The First Steps and the Last
‘Come on, Mum, two more steps and you’re there. I’ve got you …’
Why was she raising her voice? I wasn’t deaf.
My mind wasn’t the disabled part of me. And what was the rush?
Hold your tongue, old lass. It’s all said through care, not to mention a familiar tone of worry that she might slip or let go.
It took me…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pavane, by Keith Roberts in the forum Blogs 11 months, 3 weeks ago
You’re not actually the person I was referring to when I said I knew I was preaching to the converted. Quite often people reply to these Literary Byways blogs saying they’re going to read the book concerned on my recommendation, but this is the first time I’ve had feedback on that, and I’m delighted that you share my enthusiasm for Pavane.
As for…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pavane, by Keith Roberts in the forum Blogs 11 months, 3 weeks ago
It was, and still is, a very good blog indeed. I remember it well, and on the strength of your recommendation I bought Pavane. It is a unique book, with an extraordinary atmosphere. Since reading it I’ve returned many times to check on parts and to reread. It really is remarkable that it isn’t better known. It’s somewhat depressing that a book so…[Read more]
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RichardB started the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pavane, by Keith Roberts in the forum Blogs 11 months, 3 weeks ago
It has occurred to me that this occasional series is incomplete without the piece that started it all off, which was posted back in the old days on the Word Cloud. Some may remember it; some may not. And in one case I know I’m preaching to the converted…
In 1983, on a commission from a Japanese publisher, the novelist and critic Anthony (A…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Congratulations, Ath. Delightfully creative tale!
Thanks to Janette for the prompt and to Sandra, Libby and Terrie for a selection of wonderful stories x -
Athelstone started the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 3 weeks ago
It’s been on my mind that during this month I will begin the last year of my sixth decade. The topic this month is the last of something. So, whatever that suggests to you, good, bad, indifferent, in a maximum of 500 words.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 3 weeks ago
When I say that I seriously didn’t think I’d win – I mean it. There was a fistful of really great entries. Thanks to Janette for the prompt and to my co-entrants for some great entertainment.
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Ps, yes, thank you all for your brilliant entries, I meant to say- sorry if this didn’t come across in my summary.
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Five great stories this month, making my decision oh-so difficult and changeable.
Sandra – Lyrical Determination (thin on legend)
Smartly-penned descriptives throughout, giving vivid imagery of Fran lying prose on the attic bed, having decided to give her virginity to Ivo (having been inspired by the words of John Martyn). Love that she bathes…[Read more] -
Janette posted an update 12 months ago
Time passes so quickly. Would you believe there are only six days left to enter the May competition? Already four stunning entries but, go on, please make my job to pick out a winner even more difficult – I like a challenge. Give me an essence of May.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 12 months ago
May
The cactus on the table, out there on the decking, it’s gone mad. Look there are four new paddle things growing off it. Mr Hoskins from next door says they’re called “cladodes”. He should know, seeing as he’s a botanist or something at the college. It’s a modified stem, apparently, which serves the function of a leaf. He came over for a cup o…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Princes Street, Edinburgh, in early May. The morning is bright, the sky opaque with a promise of blue, and there’s enough chill in the air to warrant the cardigan I left on the back of the chair in the kitchen. I’m walking on the sunny side of the street – the side across from the gardens – with measured, purposeful steps as I head to a train…[Read more]
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Janette started the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Today’s walk gave me the inspiration I needed, while I hummed away to May Day songs. I’d like you to write a story with a May (Day) theme.
It could be goings-on at a festival or fair while Maypole and Morris Dancers dance in the May. Or a nod to the Green Man (Jack-in-the-Green) defeating the Holly King of winter. Perhaps be inspired by the lines…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Congratulations, J! Well deserved ☺️
Thanks to Libby for challenging my poor sluggish brain cells with an extraordinary prompt, and to Sandra for an excellent read.
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Heck, I did not expect that. Thank you for such an awesome feedback, Libby, and for a competition prompt which challenged my writerly boundaries. Also well done to Sea and Sandra for their excellent stories.
I have nothing in mind for the next topic – a walk is in order to mull it over, not that I need and excuse to set out in this wonderful sunshine. -
Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Oh BOTHER! So sorry, Libby. I confess I found the prompt a little tricky, but I was getting the start of an idea. Then I got myself involved with something and forgot all about it.
Well done to all three entrants, especially Janette. I liked the stories very much.
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Janette posted an update 1 year ago
I wondered if I could ask a favour of any fellow writers who enjoy character-led novels. The current title of my book Saving Grace has never really sat easy with me, being aware it also the title of a major film (one of my favourites), and I more recently learned it is the name of a US series, besides being used several times by other authors…[Read more]
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Hi @janette , I immediately liked (Don’t) Call Me Graceless and
My Growing Chain of Big Fat Lies. Is Fibs an alternative title?
The first title suggests character, the second plot. They both have voice.
I’m not keen on Fibs. It feels vague.-
Thank you, Libby. Your comments are very helpful.
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I like ‘The Art of invisible mending’ which offers intrigue.
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
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Our back-facing neighbours were the first to acknowledge our arrival. Each time I looked out, the ever-preened woman was at her bay window, dog-in-hand (at least I think the explosion of fur was of canine origin). Gerald supposed she were sun-worshipping, her glances only polite curiosity – then he always did see the good i…[Read more]
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Janette posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
And sorry for the belated congratulations, Libby – amid the business of being employed again, I thought I had already posted my response to your comp win, which was a fine, worthy entry.
I confess I didn’t know what to do with the April challenge you posted, but some thought during a weekend walk gave me a lightbulb moment.
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Thankyou, @janette ! And I’m pleased you had a lightbulb moment.
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