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Daedalus started the topic Monthly competition guidelines – PLEASE READ FIRST in the forum Monthly Competition 8 years ago
On the former Word Cloud forum, there was a monthly competition. This was not a prestigious affair, but it was a way of helping members improve their writing or just have a bit of fun. It was a genuine community affair as, initiated by a member with the delightful name ‘Wrathnar the Unreasonable’, the competition was set and judged by members. The…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Violence and mental illness in the forum Blogs 8 years ago
That seems short-sighted, to put it mildly! It’s good practice for any personnel in public-facing roles to have some kind of conflict resolution training, IMO. I’ve had a quick look online and found some courses (no idea how good they are, I’m afraid) that are as little as two hours and as inexpensive as £25 per person. You’re doing the right…[Read more]
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Andrew Wille replied to the topic Help with setting in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years ago
Philippa: Something that makes setting interesting is its ability to surprise. I’m thinking of JK Rowling’s Casual Vacancy, set in a quaint and fairly well-off Cotswold town that in fact has a lot of socioeconomic problems hiding beneath the surface – poverty, drug abuse. That tension within the setting informs much of the conflict in the…[Read more]
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Bella replied to the topic Violence and mental illness in the forum Blogs 8 years ago
For anyone who is interested, I spoke to the club about their plans to deal with future incidents. I suggested conflict resolution training, Daeds.
I was then told that their only plan has been to tell staff they can lock themselves into the office if they feel scared. I hope aeroplane cabin crew will not be following that example and locking…[Read more]
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Bella replied to the topic I've gone and done it again! in the forum Podium 8 years ago
Wonderful news. Well done, you.
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Anna replied to the topic I've gone and done it again! in the forum Podium 8 years ago
Wonderful news, congratulations!!
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Kate replied to the topic I've gone and done it again! in the forum Podium 8 years ago
You are scorching hot at the moment. Long may it last!
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Hilary replied to the topic I've gone and done it again! in the forum Podium 8 years ago
Hurray! Well done, Janette. That’s brilliant news.
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Raine replied to the topic Help with setting in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years ago
Lincoln would make an awesome setting! It has the historic beauty, and university ‘affluence’ but also the mid/north deprivation. I would think, being as you are looking at family secrets, and being as the rich, chic family with secrets is a trope probably too predictable… I like the reflection you could build from a very historic setting -…[Read more]
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Anna replied to the topic Help with setting in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years ago
How about a cute market town? Bustling with people going about their trivial day to day activities. It will be in stark contrast to the traumas the abducted child has to process. The family has stayed in the same place the whole time, and when the child comes back she recognises and remembers things from before her abduction. Things are the same…[Read more]
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Debi Alper replied to the topic I've gone and done it again! in the forum Podium 8 years ago
I AM SO BLOODY EXCITED!
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with setting in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years ago
You could have an industrial ‘dirty old town’ with back-to-back terraced housing where the kids still play in the streets, ancient pubs, pawn shops and run down motor repair lots and a ‘new’ posh housing estate with a children’s’ playground and the area by the canal nicely landscaped, built on the site of an old factory that went out of business.…[Read more]
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Alan Rain replied to the topic Example Cover Letter in the forum Blogs 8 years ago
Hi Philippa,
Yes, I think this version is considerably better, and the point you make about when the possession occurs is a good one.
The trick is condensing a fairly comprehensive physiology. I’ve made the manananggal a species that can reproduce, rather than a single entity. Galina is first possessed in her mother’s womb, and the spirit lies…[Read more] -
Alan Rain replied to the topic Help with setting in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years ago
Hi Philippa,
The tension in the child / parent relationship could be enhanced by creating a similar displacement in the setting.
For example, an ugly estate next to a historic castle, or by contrasting the conditions: a pretty village suffering some extreme weather, like flooding / gales.
Similarly, have poor people in an affluent area.
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Woolleybeans replied to the topic Help with setting in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years ago
Lincoln covers most of the things on the list, I think, plus students and being hilly.
What are the family like?
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Philippa East started the topic Help with setting in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 8 years ago
Hello everyone,
I wonder if you can help me with an element of my novel… SETTING (arg!!)
As part of the editing process, I am trying to develop a deeper sense of place in my story. The novel is set in a mid-sized East Midlands town, with various geographical features (such as a canal) which serve scenes in the story.
Beyond that, the town…[Read more]
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Philippa East replied to the topic I've gone and done it again! in the forum Podium 8 years ago
Oh excellent! You are on a ROLL. Well done!
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