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Raine replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
Thank you guys for entering! And for writing such fun pieces – they all have something special to them, I think.
@athelstone I love the details and voice of yours, the small touches that make each character so recognisable.
@sandradavies well, naked men wrestling, what more can anyone ask for really?? Love the balance of violence and tenderness…[Read more] -
Libby replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
The Mooring (325 words)
The two sisters were in their twenties. They stood on the kyle’s shore in their Puffa jackets and looked at a small yacht moored to a buoy, hatches closed. The yacht floated as calmly as a swan.
Although the sisters were dressed in similar clothes their personalities were opposites.
“They were lucky,” said Lena, about…[Read more]
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Raine posted an update 4 years, 2 months ago
Just a couple more days to get your monthly comp entries in. If it helps with motivation, I’ve just had a recent one accepted for publication! So write them words, they might end up earning you money!
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Daedalus posted an update 4 years, 2 months ago
Have you seen this @thea? https://www.theguardian.com/uk-news/2022/feb/22/lavish-roman-mosaic-is-biggest-found-in-london-for-50-years
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Thanks so much for the link, Daeds! I have read about several interesting finds recently along the HS2 route, but I hadn’t heard about this mosaic in London. What a wonderful find, and in good condition too 🙂
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No problem. I was astonished that there’s still stuff like that left to find!
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Yes, there have been amazing finds. They certainly built stuff to last 🙂
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
Sarita
Clouds thicker than Peruvian fog, vaporous specters rising across the shifting mirror of the sky. The day’s restlessness calms my peregrine heart, part of the patterning and paradox of life I’ve come to cherish. Chilling drops of rain splatter like surprises on my upturned face, not unpleasant, like a birthday party you didn’t expect but a…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
A question of perception
After, naked, panting; towelling stinging sweat from our eyelids, we stepped outside through the open French windows into the still-warm August night. A quick sideways glance: he as relieved as I to no longer be the focus of intense female attention. Relieved it had ended – honourably? Yes. That could honestly be said.…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
Byrd
‘Somewhat overshadowed by Tallis.’
‘Sorry?’
Janet looked up from the score at Penrose who was holding his copy at arm’s length. His other hand grasped his lapel as though he was striking the pose of some learned patrician. Probably just what he was doing, she thought. She felt a twinge of guilt, but also resignation. If only he hadn’t in…[Read more]
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
On it, dolly 🥰🥰
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Well done all, especially Raine. I thought it was a bit special.
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Raine started the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Right folks. Two things that featured heavily in my weekend were Encanto and storms … so those are my inspirations for this month’s challenge. I want a scene with 2+ siblings interacting & a weather or astrological event. 400 words by the 28th, bonus points for Encanto easter eggs!
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Raine replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Aw thank you @knickylaurelle!! Glad it struck a chord 🙂 And I loved everyone else’s entries so yay everyone!
Okay, I need to think about next month – will get pondering and post something later/tmrw.
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Kate replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Well done Raine and thank you Knicks. I’d forgotten how much fun it is writing these short skits.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Congratulations Raine – so uncomfortably vivid! – and to all of you who managed to fight down an adversary, real or fictitious. And thank you Knicks for competition and comments.
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
I had a first line (oddly enough, my adversary was Time) and discovered Time had beaten me. Not to worry, there’s always next month.
Congratulations, Raine. Your entry was frightening (in an inspirational kind of way ☺️)
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Ohai, just had my read-through. January’s entries were really eclectic, both funny and relatable.
@quellomayo – Gripping and amusing in equal measure; this wasn’t one that I’d read normally but having done, I wanted to read more. Fun stuff.
@sandradavies – Definitely en route to overcoming an adversary we can all relate to being plague by in…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Doug
I could be expelled, or even stuck in a young-offenders institution, but, honestly, I can’t see how they’ll ever pin it on me.
Doug isn’t a nice kid. At ten, he’s the spitting image of his dad; spitting being the operative word. He’s well on his way to being as big as him, too. Which is big.
Doug hates all the other kids at school.…[Read more]
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Kate replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Warning: Dark humour.
SEIZING THE MOMENT
‘Twenty-five years we were married,’ I tell the young police officer as he hands me a cup of tea with shaking hands.
‘I’m very sorry for your loss,’ he murmurs, gaze resting anywhere but on me.
I suppose I should wash and change, but I’m feeling a bit odd right now.
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Squidge posted an update 4 years, 3 months ago
Gosh, it is ages since I dropped in…far too much going on in the world outside of writing! Hope everyone’s doing OK.
I’ve finished editing the memoir I was working on – author very pleased with the result, so that’s good. Still getting to grips with Tilda #4’s huge plot hole and whittling away at that when I can. Still trying to carve out…[Read more]
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