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  • Some advice please. I have just started reading aloud everyday via Facetime to my father who has Alzheimers and we are close to getting to the end of the book he had picked up. So I am looking for something else to read? Does anyone have any recommendations? His passion was sailing although he is quite happy to read anything. Short stories might…[Read more]

    • Sorry – can’t really help. The only remotely sailingy books I can think of are @daedalus‘ eponymous book, ‘the life of pi’, ‘this thing of darkness’ and MM Kaye’s ‘trade winds’. He’d enjoy Daed’s perhaps? And ‘this thing of darkness’ is awesome, (& ~biographical) but the other two prob not ideal!

      • What about that perennial fave of mine, Hemingway’s ‘The Old Man and the Sea’? It’s quite short, the plot and language alike are stripped down and simple, yet it’s so moving.

    • Hi @janeshuff I’ve had a quick look through the public library catalogue. I haven’t read any of the following but how about:
      In the wake of heroes : sailing’s greatest stories introduced by Tom Cunliffe
      London : Adlard Coles Nautical, 2015.
      All at sea : true and tall tales / trawled by Libby Purves. Fontana Paperbacks, 1984. Published to…[Read more]

      • Joshua Slocum’s ‘Sailing Alone Around The World’ is great. Then there’s Francis Chichester’s book about his own circumnavigation, which I think was just called Gypsy Moth, or possibly Around The World In Gypsy Moth? Thanks for recommending Daedalus @raine – very kind. It’s OOP now but I’ll see if I have any spare copies left

  • Raine posted an update 5 years, 12 months ago

    After five looooooong months, I had five whole hours without the mini yesterday when she had her soft transition day back in school (full, ‘normal’ start on Monday). I sat at my desk (which she’d been using) AND WROTE WORDS. Not many, but some. (And then watched Umbrella Academy to recover). It was all rather lovely. 🙂

    • Oh, joy, Raine. I’ve said before I don’t know how anyone can write (or otherwise create) with offspring demanding attention. Long may the writing of words continue.

  • Raine replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 5 years, 12 months ago

    Totally agree re Boyne, @jillybean. He’s lazy and complacent, and doesn’t care who he hurts as a result.

    Having recently discovered the horrors of researching hist fic, I must admit to struggling with knowing where the line is between really getting stuck on details that don’t matter, and making sure the whole worldbuilding feels authentic.…[Read more]

  • Squidge posted an update 5 years, 12 months ago

    July’s comp is now July-and-August’s comp! If you fancy having a go, check it out here: https://www.denofwriters.com/forums/topic/monthly-comp-july-2020/

  • Libby replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 5 years, 12 months ago

    I agree with you Jules. It’s worrying that schools will teach misleading literature.

    One thought from my perspective as a writer of realist historical writer: the truth is more interesting than the invented even if it’s harder to work with. There’s a smaller point too that we can all make mistakes so might as well aim to get as much as possible…[Read more]

    • That’s mean to be ‘historical fiction’.
      It’s the heat. I can’t remember what I’m supposed to be.

      • Or how to spell.

        • Haha right there with you! And I completely agree – the truth in historical terms is often far more interesting than the Everyone Knows version. Also agree that writers have to be free to make unintentional mistakes without being pilloried for them. It’s inevitable that some small detail will be wrong but as you say, why not try to be as correct…[Read more]

    • Even in fantasy – I do some research! Not in depth, granted, cos I’m not seeking to reflect accuracy, but I do have to do enough to make the processes I describe (like melting precious metals; making a catapult out of just string; rules about coats of arms for example) so if anyone reads it who also has that knowledge, I’ve given enough to make it…[Read more]

  • Jules replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 5 years, 12 months ago

    Pretty sure Stephen King now has a team of fact checkers. But yes I imagine the tone of those letters is gleeful. What I’ll say for King is that even though he’s writing speculative fiction, he portrays characters who’ve had life experiences he has not respectfully. The same cannot be said for Boyne! One of the big problems with The Boy in the…[Read more]

  • Sandra replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    Ah, yes. I take your point Athers. My ignorance obscured it earlier.

  • Athelstone replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    There are degrees to this and a dependency on the type of book being written. I am not searching for an artificial precision in moral culpability. I am not saying that there are some absolute rules at play. I am saying that if you bend the truth to suit your story, while at the same time maintaining that what you write is authentic, then there are…[Read more]

  • Sandra replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    Athers, I’ve not read Boyne, so took the passage you quote as from a fantasy novel which, in my understanding, means anything goes in the way of made-up words and facts.
    On the subject of ‘proper’ research; at Newcastle Noir a couple of years ago, one crime writer told of being asked how many specialists he had on call to help him with research,…[Read more]

    • There’s an article in today’s Telegraph referring to this, and mentioning it seems to apply less to film-makers, e.g. Braveheart where kilts were worn 500 years before in use “because they looked better”. Artistic licence, innit?

  • Doug replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    Stephen King, who’s described himself as a lazy researcher, has related the letters he’s gotten from people who caught him in research errors. The tone of the letters, he said, was invariably gleeful. I wonder if Boyne has gotten those too? “Hee-hee, you got this wrong, and that wrong!”

  • Athelstone started the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    This is a lightweight blog.

    I was just settling down after reading about the astonishing performance by George R R Martin at the Hugo awards, when my son approached brandishing his phone.

    ‘Look at that,’ he said.

    I looked. My son has been a fan of the Zelda video games since he was little. I played a few along with him in the last few years,…[Read more]

    • Libby replied 6 years ago

      I didn’t gasp – too world weary – but I can see why you’re annoyed, Ath. On a lighter note I was disappointed, having hoped to learn something more about nightshade! Woody nightshade grows in our garden, is pretty and you could imagine the berries being used for dye. It’s also poisonous. But when I got a bit further I’d have switched off if you h…[Read more]

  • Squidge posted an update 6 years ago

    SO sorry, folks – had completely forgotten to check in on the monthly comp! Have no excuse other than I’ve been rather focused on Tilda 3 recently and got carried away.

    As it’s already the 4th August, and there were only three entries, does anyone object to it running through this month too? Hopefully get a few more folk having a go?…[Read more]

  • Once again thank you to all of you for giving your thoughts on this. I feel immediately guilty as I have close to no experience and not much to offer by way of my own conclusions.

    I agree with those of you who say that the shape of your various elements (character arcs, plot lines etc.) needs revision between drafts, and it reminds me that the…[Read more]

  • Squidge posted an update 6 years ago

    Any more for any more on the July comp? Not going to be inundated for judging this time unless there’s a last minute flurry…

  • This article really helped me, what with self-doubt, not liking my own writing, etc. Some of the advice made me smile & nod. I think it’s worth sharing.

    Writing Imperfectly

    Cheers
    ~Doug

  • Doug replied to the topic The $2,000,000 Guitar in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    Such a great story! As a guitarist who at one time owned a Les Paul, I found it fascinating. I’d also like to add that, for one of the greatest all-time guitar leads–the Beatles’ “While My Guitar Gently Weeps”–Eric Clapton knocked it out in one take, with a red Les Paul he called Lucille. Wonderful stuff.

  • Mad Iguana replied to the topic The $2,000,000 Guitar in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    I saw that and thought of your post, and your memories.

  • RichardB replied to the topic The $2,000,000 Guitar in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    Sadly, I have heard today that Peter Green, without whom this blog wouldn’t have been written, has died at the age of 73.

  • An update. I’ve continued the revisions, but slowly, slowly. I’m now a hundred pages from the end, and I’ve decided enough of the nonsense, I’m getting all through it <i>this weekend</i> come hell or high water. Feel free to hold me to it.

    Will check back in Sunday night, one way or the other.

    • Kate replied 6 years ago

      Good luck, Doug. I’ve got the same goal.

      • So have I! Something in the air this weekend.

        • Doug replied 6 years ago

          Got it done! I got all the way to the end, and backed it up on Gmail. Seemed to take forever to get through that draft. I feel like celebrating now! Thanks for your support.

          • Congratulations!! I nearly did it. Just 10 pages left to go but I made the decision to look at them with fresh eyes this morning.

          • Kate replied 6 years ago

            Finished it and emailed off for a book doctor report. After which I’ll probably have to start again!

          • Libby replied 6 years ago

            Well done, Doug. And Jane and Kate too.

  • Doug replied to the topic Positive thoughts in the forum Group logo of CoronaMoCoronaMo 6 years ago

    I’ve been fortunate that I could keep going to my job as usual (I work for the state of Rhode Island). Though there are all kinds of safeguards, and Army & Air Force personnel about.

    An acceptance last week for a new short story, reminds me that life goes on.

    And a wise old saying reminds me that “This, too, shall pass.”

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