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Daedalus replied to the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
Sometimes definitely control! E.g. ‘Suffering a tyrant may be bad but tyrannicide leads to civil war, which is worse’ – see Plutarch via Shakespeare via this morning’s ‘In Our Time’ 😉
As Orwell wrote ‘Who controls the past controls the future. Who controls the present controls the past’ – and to my mind, the past = the historical narrative =…[Read more]
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John S Alty replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
Tangled Web (A, The, What a, Weaving a,)
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John S Alty replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
Time is sometimes described as a fourth dimension, so:
Fourth Dimension
The Fourth Dimension
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Daedalus replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
In the Shadow of the City
The City in Time’s Shadow
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Daedalus replied to the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 7 months ago
I like that way of putting it. Helpful.
I haven’t seen ‘Downsizing’ but it sounds like a film that is a bit overloaded with ideas and ends up getting lost among them.
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Daedalus replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
Interesting one. Titles can be hard. Sometimes a really perfect one will just present itself. Other times…
I was looking, as I’m sure you have, at a thesaurus to see if it was possible to simply replace ‘abduction’. The best I could do was ‘Here Ends the Absence’, or possibly ‘Here Ends the Departure’ which I’m not sure really does it.
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Daedalus replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
Another possibility is that the waves were so big that in a trough the Solomon Brown literally hit the seabed. If I’m ever up Whitby way I’ll definitely see about a ride on their Watson lifeboat.
There’s a decent collection of historic lifeboats at the dockyard at Chatham. I’ve a feeling they have a couple of Watson-type boats there but it seems…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
Superb blog tinged with tragedy, and, as always told with clarity and sympathy. For all the improvements in hardware and technology, RNLI operations can still be phenomenally dangerous. Operating in those conditions, that close to shore… Reading the account reminded me of The Perfect Storm by Sebastian Junger (great book, but don’t bother with…[Read more]
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John S Alty replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
Excellent, Richard.
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John S Alty replied to the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
You have to blow your own trumpet, no-one is going to blow it for you.
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Giselle replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
I love this thread!
Richard, wow, brilliant writing. That disjointedness works so well.
Whenever I have to write violence I think of Silence of the Lambs, when you really don’t see/read that much, but the tension is huge. Lots of small suggestions can build on our inner fears.
Janeshuff, so happy that you’ve found the solution! Now, all you…[Read more]
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John S Alty posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
Back from a few days in Mallorca, wonderful, now ready to get down to this month’s competition. Something about a bloke in a greatcoat playing a banjo, lamenting the loss of his spell book, if I remember right.
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Daedalus replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
Aargh, spoiler!
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Amanda Berriman (Skylark) posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
Bit quiet because I’m 55 days into a writing chain. Wouldn’t exactly say it’s going well, but it’s going, a few hundred words at a time. Some of them not too shabby.
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Amanda Berriman (Skylark) replied to the topic Festival Dreams in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
It was so lovely to catch up with you @giselle 😊😊 Thank you for cheering me on. Hope the edits are going well xx
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Giselle replied to the topic I've gone and done it again! in the forum Podium 7 years, 7 months ago
Congratulations! I’m so excited for you, that’s such great news. *lifts glass of wine*
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Giselle replied to the topic Festival Dreams in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
Coming in late as I’ve been plunged in post-York wip modifications.
Mandy, you were brilliant, funny, natural, endearing, strong and gracious. Like many, I’ve followed your journey, but to hear it all, from the beginning to now, was just wonderful.
Seeing so many of you at York really charged my batteries. There were definitely less cloudies this…[Read more] - Load More
