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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – December 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Well done Terrie, and everyone else who between them provided a kaleidoscope view of Christmas, and thank you Ath for prompting me into putting a long-held memory into words.
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Terrie replied to the topic Monthly Competition – December 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Lord of Yule
Riann contemplated her decision of allowing the snow-covered stranger, now tending the fire, into her cottage. His ice-sprinkled cloak and hood hung at one side of the fire’s mantle, a puddle forming below it, while his boots and mittens lay close to the hearth.
He hadn’t actually set her senses tingling with alarm but there was a p…[Read more]
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Terrie replied to the topic Monthly Competition – December 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 months, 3 weeks ago
Still a few days to go and i am on it, honestly , Ath.
After a hectic but lovely build up to xmas and a family orientated day yesterday I settled down about half an hour ago to try and finish my offering. ……. son was carrying a very large bucket of soapy wash water out to the drive to clean his motorbike when…[Read more]
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Kate posted an update 4 months, 4 weeks ago
Happy Christmas for tomorrow to all you lovely Denizens. Xx
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Libby started the topic Short story published in the forum Podium 5 months ago
The story I wrote for the November comp. ‘I Lied When I Said My Daughter Lived Abroad’ has been published today:
https://www.cafelitmagazine.uk/
Thank you, Terrie @purplewitch for the prompt!
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – December 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 months, 1 week ago
A never-forgotten Christmas
The telegram sent by my new-made grandfather, telling my father of my safe arrival, at five minutes to midnight on the twentieth December (and, according to my great-grandfather’s fish scales, weighing 6lbs 4 ozs) is explanation enough of why I don’t remember my first Christmas. To establish whether it was my sec…[Read more]
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Janette posted an update 5 months, 1 week ago
Would you know? A cancellation gave me space to knock out a story for December. That’s it though until next year.
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly Competition – December 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 months, 1 week ago
Running the Christmas Gauntlet
Brace yourself, girl. Everywhere is going to be madness today. Most of the throng will be feeling much the same way … which means shouting and kids screaming; means shoving and pushing … but take a deep breath. Concentrate on the list. You’ve successfully run the Christmas shopping gauntlet before.
The veget…[Read more]
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Janette posted an update 5 months, 1 week ago
So sorry for my absences. I have made the decision to self-publish my books after careful consideration, reading how some trad friends have fared, and revisiting notes from my last (self-publishing) workshop in York. I’m very wet behind the ears regarding publishing, especially self-publishing, so I am deep into swatting about it before I make any…[Read more]
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Good luck. Please let us know how you get on. I’d like to piggy-back on your request for tips. I am part of a group currently ready to publish a non-fiction book. We’re trying a few pitches via the traditional route just in case it lands but it’s quite likely we may end up self-publishing because we don’t want the book to languish, unpublished, for ages.
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Hi Bella. So far I’m deep into reading the Writers and Artists Guide to Self Publishing, which is very ‘involved’ though gives lots of advice. I have also signed up to David Gaughran’s free self-publishing course (on his website). I also found this: https://justpublishingadvice.com/publishing-companies-to-avoid-and-nasty-new-author-scams/
I’ll let…[Read more]-
Janette (and Bella), one tip I didn’t mention earlier is that it makes very good sense to set your page size for composing to Blurb’s trade book size. Makes it, in my opinion, a lot easier to read on screen too. Blurb’s page size is 13.02cm x 20.95cm. Select mirror margins , set top margin 2 cm, bottom 2.25 cm, inside 1.75cm, outside, 1.75 cm…[Read more]
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Hi Janette, I’ve never self-published but am in contact with editors and proofreaders who work with self-pub authors. This tip usually doesn’t apply to experienced writers so I just add it as a general comment. When self-pub authors approach editors for a proofread or copy edit, often what’s needed is a more substantial developmental or…[Read more]
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Thank you, Sandra and Libby. All taken on board, but the novel has had three beta readers so far, plus an agent’s when she almost took it on. Better luck this time, eh?
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You are well prepared, Janette! Good luck with the self pub.
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Libby replied to the topic November 2025 monthly competition in the forum Monthly Competition 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Thank you, Terrie! And congratulations on a truly creepy story, Ath. And Jill for a heart-warming, magical tale – exactly right for the time of year.
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Terrie replied to the topic November 2025 monthly competition in the forum Monthly Competition 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Jill – a heart-warming tale with a hint of caution and a happy ending as luckily the fairies didn’t try to whisk Ellie away.
The warmth between Ellie and her grandma really shone through and I enjoyed how you blended something modern with a fairy tale too.
Libby – I tried to leave the scope of the challenge a little open…[Read more]
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Terrie replied to the topic November 2025 monthly competition in the forum Monthly Competition 5 months, 3 weeks ago
Only one more day remaining for anyone thinking about submitting something for the November competiton .
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Libby replied to the topic November 2025 monthly competition in the forum Monthly Competition 6 months ago
You asked for a heart-warming tale, Terrie, but my story, after I started it and got stuck, became the opposite. You’re welcome to disqualify it or not read it at all.
Content warning: includes postnatal depression
499 words including title
I Lied When I Said My Daughter Lived Abroad
After that walk up and down a steep crag, I sat beside t…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic November 2025 monthly competition in the forum Monthly Competition 6 months ago
Sorry, Terrie, no way do I have head space to do anything for this. Will aim to Do Better next time
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Terrie replied to the topic November 2025 monthly competition in the forum Monthly Competition 6 months, 1 week ago
I expect lots of you, like me, are creating and drafting exciting entries for the September Song competition but dont forget there are only fourteen days until the monthly (November ) competition closes and i’m looking forward to reading your entries for that too .
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Janette posted an update 6 months, 3 weeks ago
Well done, Terrie – a great choice! I have a busy November coming up but will try and fit in some time to take part in the monthly comp.
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