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Squidge replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
The time between?
Between times?
The Time Snatcher of London Towns?
A shadow of time… (working on from Jonathan’s suggestions)
A shadow in time?I really hate titles sometimes!;)
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RichardB replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
A Cuckoo in the Nest?
Hmm. Possibly a bit of a cliché, but the image seems apt.
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Daedalus replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
In the Shadow of the City
The City in Time’s Shadow
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
Brainstorming:
An Uneasy Homecoming.
After the Happy Ending.
The Missing Years.
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Jonathan replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
First let me just say that when this is published I am totally buying it!
Next – titles. Hmm. I love SeaGreen’s “The Time-Snatcher’s Daughter” but that of course could be a bit of a spoiler and I’m sure there’s something like it already out there, but it covers the time angle and the feminine one. I’m getting Gaiman/Mieville vibes with a hint of…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
Ooooh. I like The Time Stealer! But I’m also wondering, since this is meant to be a trilogy or a series, could you have two titles – one for the trilogy and one for each book. So it could be The Time Stealer Trilogy. The individual titles could possibly be linked in some way. Like the chess theme that runs through the titles of the books in…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
Thinking out loud here…
Daughter (Children?) of Shadows
Daughter of the Shadowland(s)
The Time Stealer’s …… (Adversary/Daughter/Enemy)
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KazG started the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
Yes, I’m blatantly copying @philippaeast with her Titles thread.
I must be a bit slow because I’ve also had the same feedback from my agent Danielle (that the story needs a new title) – and yet I didn’t think of asking you brilliant lot for help. So thanks @philippaeast for the inspo 🙂
Some of you have read ‘Snatched’ (thank you beloved…[Read more]
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KazG replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
@alanr – just saw that I basically suggested the same as you!
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KazG replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
I keep coming back to the words enmeshing/unmeshing. For me that feels really evocative of family tendrils, the way the brain works (especially in cases of forming, breaking and reforming connections). – it makes me think of a web and a net and a loosening of patterns. Don’t know how you might use it but I love that word!
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Daedalus replied to the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 6 months ago
I like that way of putting it. Helpful.
I haven’t seen ‘Downsizing’ but it sounds like a film that is a bit overloaded with ideas and ends up getting lost among them.
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Jackie Wesley replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
Thanks Richard. I will.
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Philippa East started the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 6 months ago
On the podcast I am obsessed with (storygrid.com), they refer to a story’s theme as the “controlling idea”. I like this way of putting it, because a good theme helps you control the unwieldy beast that most (draft) stories are.
A “controlling idea” might be something like “happiness comes through pursuing our true calling”, “money isn’t…[Read more]
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Philippa East replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
Oh my goodness, guys, what great suggestions! I will check out those links too.
@Squidge, I’d love to take a look at your exercise if you can send it?
The focus for the book is about whether and how a family can truly reconcile after such a trauma, and what level of culpability a family must ultimately shoulder. Much time in the book is spent in…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
You talk about bonds and use the term ‘enmeshed’ so I’m going for The Untangling.
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Elle replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
Hi Philippa,
From all the information gathered I would suggest:
– Missing You (works on several level depending on who the sentence refers to or who us doing the miss – if that makes sense)
– The Other You
– The Way Home (again can be interpreted on several levels)
– Little Girl Lost (again lost can be interpreted on several levels)
– Here…[Read more]
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Thea replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
Hi Philippa, ‘Lost and Found?’ with or without the question mark, popped into my mind, I think because of the railway scene in your story. Perhaps if you simply included a question mark in your current title it would convey that the abduction is still haunting the family. Also, I really like Jonathan’s idea of using the number seven in the title.
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Thea replied to the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
I haven’t either, Sandra! Though in my writing I try to adhere to the RUE rule and thus probably don’t explain enough.
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