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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Bumper crop springs to mind, but the cliché is wrong because these stories didn’t just spring up, they were all lovingly made by hand.
Janette’s story reminds us of the way that roles are exchanged as age demands. More than this, it reminds us that life is full of last moments each important and deserving of attention and memory. There is a wist…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 9 months, 3 weeks ago
Any more takers? Last chance today. That could be the subject.
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months ago
Moving On
The elderly man picked up a landline receiver. On his desk lay an open, glossy page of Country Life. The man underlined a phone number and dialled.
“Hello, my name’s John Tucker,” he said. “I’d like to sell my house. Could you send a valuer?”
He gave his address. A distant phone voice burbled.
“Two valuers?” said John. “This aft…[Read more]
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Terrie replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months ago
Just pulled the last bit of candy floss from my brain, looked at some famous last quotes “Julius ‘Groucho’ Marx and Noel Coward.” Played with some authors and their book titles, used some well know sayings and came up with this bit of fluff.
<u>The last question</u>
I was surprised when the invite appeared mysteriously on my lap.
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Libby started the topic "Galley Beggar Press – Pressing Issues" on Substack in the forum Coffee Shop 10 months ago
If anyone would like a free one-month subscription to Galley Beggar – Pressing Issues on Substack, let me know. As a subscriber myself I can give this offer to three people. I’d need your email address so please include it in a PM.
The Pressing Issues newsletter is available to non-subscribers. Subscribers get all the other stuff too — insights…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months ago
UNTITLED (149 WORDS)
Contains an obscenity
Today is the last day I will beat myself up over this.
It’s the last day I’ll say sorry for hurting you, as if I haven’t said sorry a million times already.
It’s the last time I’ll try to make amends for something you will never forgive me for.
It’s the last time I’ll go to bed and wonder how di…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Positivity in the forum Blogs 10 months ago
Jill, it’s so good to hear from you again, in spite of what you’ve been, and are, going through.
I think any response that isn’t on a level with your own experience of positivity is likely to sound trivial, or at least less significant. But it is a fascinating topic. It’s often said that realists have a less positive expectation of outcome, but…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months, 1 week ago
Two fabulous stories and still half of the month to try your hand. What luck!
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months, 2 weeks ago
The First Steps and the Last
‘Come on, Mum, two more steps and you’re there. I’ve got you …’
Why was she raising her voice? I wasn’t deaf.
My mind wasn’t the disabled part of me. And what was the rush?
Hold your tongue, old lass. It’s all said through care, not to mention a familiar tone of worry that she might slip or let go.
It took me…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pavane, by Keith Roberts in the forum Blogs 10 months, 3 weeks ago
You’re not actually the person I was referring to when I said I knew I was preaching to the converted. Quite often people reply to these Literary Byways blogs saying they’re going to read the book concerned on my recommendation, but this is the first time I’ve had feedback on that, and I’m delighted that you share my enthusiasm for Pavane.
As for…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pavane, by Keith Roberts in the forum Blogs 10 months, 3 weeks ago
It was, and still is, a very good blog indeed. I remember it well, and on the strength of your recommendation I bought Pavane. It is a unique book, with an extraordinary atmosphere. Since reading it I’ve returned many times to check on parts and to reread. It really is remarkable that it isn’t better known. It’s somewhat depressing that a book so…[Read more]
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RichardB started the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pavane, by Keith Roberts in the forum Blogs 10 months, 3 weeks ago
It has occurred to me that this occasional series is incomplete without the piece that started it all off, which was posted back in the old days on the Word Cloud. Some may remember it; some may not. And in one case I know I’m preaching to the converted…
In 1983, on a commission from a Japanese publisher, the novelist and critic Anthony (A…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Congratulations, Ath. Delightfully creative tale!
Thanks to Janette for the prompt and to Sandra, Libby and Terrie for a selection of wonderful stories x -
Terrie replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Congratulations, Ath, for your interpretation with a twist and well done Sandra, Sea and Libby as well.
I enjoyed everyone’s entries.
Its always interesting to see others take on a challenge prompt.
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Athelstone started the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months, 3 weeks ago
It’s been on my mind that during this month I will begin the last year of my sixth decade. The topic this month is the last of something. So, whatever that suggests to you, good, bad, indifferent, in a maximum of 500 words.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months, 3 weeks ago
When I say that I seriously didn’t think I’d win – I mean it. There was a fistful of really great entries. Thanks to Janette for the prompt and to my co-entrants for some great entertainment.
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Ps, yes, thank you all for your brilliant entries, I meant to say- sorry if this didn’t come across in my summary.
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Congratulations, Ath. I love your story. Very well deserved win.
Thank you Janette for setting the competition and for everyone’s entries. They are a very enjoyable selection of stories.
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months, 3 weeks ago
Five great stories this month, making my decision oh-so difficult and changeable.
Sandra – Lyrical Determination (thin on legend)
Smartly-penned descriptives throughout, giving vivid imagery of Fran lying prose on the attic bed, having decided to give her virginity to Ivo (having been inspired by the words of John Martyn). Love that she bathes…[Read more] -
Libby replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 10 months, 3 weeks ago
PS 495 words including title
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