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JaneShuff replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 5 months ago
Thank you everyone. And sorry for the delay. We’re away for a few days from tomorrow and I had quite a few things that had to be done before we went.
A cracking bunch of entries. I hope you enjoyed writing these as much as I enjoyed reading them. As usual I was struck by the many different ways they all responded to the theme.
1) @johnalty. I…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 5 months ago
Thank you all! I am looking forward to readying them. I am out most of today so results will be posted this evening.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 5 months ago
‘You don’t have a future, not really,’ said Gregor. He shifted his bones on the stone floor making his chains rattle.
‘Ah,’ said the philosopher, at length, ‘you’re one of those Zenonians. A Stoic I suppose. You imagine that because we can never sufficiently divide the instant we call the present, then it must be an illusion, as is the future. A…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Class 3 Writing Exercise "I Don't Remember" – KazG in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 5 months agoOw Wow Kaz. That is fantastic. Funnily enough I have just come to a bit in my WIP that made me think of this exercise. I might have a go at it too!
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Daedalus replied to the topic New historical fiction novella in the forum Podium 6 years, 5 months ago
Thanks @RichardB 🙂
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RichardB replied to the topic New historical fiction novella in the forum Podium 6 years, 5 months ago
And bloody good it is too. Highly recommended. Well done.
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Daedalus replied to the topic New historical fiction novella in the forum Podium 6 years, 5 months ago
I forgot to mention that book 2 of my ‘Fortress of Malta’ series of WW2 novellas was out, but it’s now on 99p promotion on Kindle, so a good time to point it out https://www.amazon.co.uk/Bastion-Fortress-Malta-Book-2-ebook/dp/B07Y5MDLWZ/
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 5 months ago
Just a quick reminder that you have until Friday midnight to get your entries for this month’s competition (around 400 words on the theme of The Future interpreted in any way you wish). I know some of you, like me, are fighting to finish your entries for the Winter Competition but can I tempt those of you who are sitting back and basking in the…[Read more]
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Squidge replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 5 months ago
Skylark! Hullo! So glad you’re here with us after such a long and difficult break. I’m not around here as often as I’d like to be either, but it’s lovely to know that the Den’s still here, even if I’m not.
First drafts are a pain, aren’t they, when you revisit and find all the issues you missed in the excitement of getting it down initially.…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 5 months ago
@Raine I like that quote (it reminds me of the fake George Orwell one). Whether it helps or not is a different question, but as Joseph Conrad pointed out, ‘action is consolatory’.
@skylark I’ve been following your family’s journey when you’ve posted on Facebook and I can’t begin to express my admiration. The strength conferred by love is…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 5 months ago
@libby my take on it has always been that the laxative story is apocryphal. I think you’d have to ingest an awful lot of the stuff to have any effect, and the diffusion of the oil in the exhaust would make that difficult. One version I heard was that there were all sorts of things likely to have a laxative effect on pilots of that era – alcohol…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 5 months ago
It must have been an awful time @skylark. We have been through a similar experience with our youngest grandson and it has changed everything particularly for his mum. But how wonderful that both you and @daedalus found writing helped.
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Daedalus replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 5 months ago
Hi @Libby – I can recommend trying to channel the emotions from current affairs into writing, although I think you have to be in a reasonably strong state to do it. It can be hard to write anything much when life has you beaten down.
Ah, oil in biplanes! I don’t know about linseed oil, but castor oil was a very common lubricant for early…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 5 months ago
I agree that the political situation over the last few years has been difficult and distracting. I suspect it has affected both my writing and my mental health.
I can name one effect Brexit has had directly on my writing. On the night of the referendum, I had run out of time to finish the William the Conqueror novel I was co-writing with…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 5 months ago
You have got the premise right @Libby although I don’t think the two soldiers are despatch drivers. To me it just came across as unlikely that only two low ranking soldiers would be sent to cross miles of dangerous territory with no particular plan and little chance of success but maybe it was supposed to show how useless, confused and uncaring…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 5 months ago
Oh yeah, oh Lord, I got them ol’ Brexit blues…
My writing has been dead in the water for a while now, and while the main cause of that is the totally negative results of my last submissions Brexit hasn’t helped. Like Alan, I’ve found the whole business, from first to last, intensely dispiriting, for more reasons than I can, or would even want…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 5 months ago
That sounds wonderful Libby. Can you remember what it was called?
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 5 months ago
The basic premise is that two very young low ranking soldiers get sent off through miles of no mans land to prevent another section (sorry but I can never remember the correct names for sections of the army but it is around 1600 men) falling into a trap by attacking what they think are a few Germans. I struggled to believe that they would only…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 5 months ago
Hmmm Not sure about 1917. It was certainly visually stunning and showed a lot of the awfulness of life in the trenches but it was curiously unengaging – not sure why – Maybe it was just not my sort of film. Plus I thought the basic premise was unlikely which didn’t help.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 5 months ago
I thought that about Little Women too. Yet another remake. But the structure is very clever, dotting between the past and present, and it is full of life and magic. It made me want to go back and reread the books for the millionth time. I’d strongly recommend it but take tissues!
I always worry if the story is strong enough but I don’t know how…[Read more]
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