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Oh Congratulations Philippa. That’s great news!

Wow, thank you guys for taking the time to read and offer feedback and suggestions. It’s all very helpful and useful to me.

@JaneShuff – thanks for pointing our that sentence to me I can see how it’s confusing and needs some work. And I will correct the pronoun and tense slip!

@Daedalus – the editing feedback and suggestions are great, thank y…[Read more]

Oh my goodness, thanks guys. You know, without all your support over the years, I wouldn’t be in this position. Fact.

Hi Raine,

Thanks for reading and for your feedback, it is really useful.

I like your suggestion about adding tension and about trying. My idea was to show what happens when you stop trying and how quickly things can spiral if you don’t reach out to people, but I think I can work out hints at failed attempts and create some more tension.

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Congratulations Philippa.

Whoohoo! Congratulations!