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Kate replied to the topic I've seen fiction written in present tense described as potentially static in the forum Blogs 4 years, 3 months ago
I find the idea of present tense feeling static quite odd. Because you are in the moment, I think it’s hard to pause in a way that is possible in past tense. So I’d say the opposite of static.
Like Sandra, sometimes I’ll find a book jars a little initially in present tense, but I’ll quickly cease to notice as I adapt to the books style.
I read a…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic I've seen fiction written in present tense described as potentially static in the forum Blogs 4 years, 3 months ago
Brief, and not necessarily well-thought out reply, (nor am I 100% I’ve got the terminology right), but Elly Griffith’s ‘Ruth Galloway ‘ series is told in present tense, with sentences/Pov as “Ruth watches as C and C get into the Rolls” (second person??) Every time I start a new one I think “Oh no, forgot how much I dislike this” then very…[Read more]
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Sandra posted an update 4 years, 3 months ago
“What’s new” is Knicks truly inspirational entry for this month’s competition. Read it for yourself, look at the image of Andrew as a young lad, and make a later version of him for yourself. You’ve more than ten days to do it.
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Libby started the topic I've seen fiction written in present tense described as potentially static in the forum Blogs 4 years, 3 months ago
I’ve also heard readers stating a preference for first-person over third-person narration, or vice versa, but not whether they’d rather have stories told in present or past tense. I don’t mind any technique or combination and think the confining qualities of present tense work very well if that’s what the author is aiming for and achieves.…[Read more]
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly competition July 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
<p style=”text-align: center;”>THE LIBRARIAN</p>
“Come here.”Mayrie tensed at the grave, inscrutable timbre of his voice. Some would call it a salt-of-the-earth voice but she was under no illusion about the nature of the man seated before her. The slight narrowing of her eyes all but said, if it’s just the same to you Guv, I think I’d rather…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Film, storytelling – psychic distance again – and looking under the bonnet in the forum Blogs 4 years, 3 months ago
Hmm, essay alert — me pontificating. I think Modernists such as James Joyce and Virginia Woolf had an excellent grasp on the categories of psychic distance, although they probably didn’t call it that, going instead for stream of consciousness, free indirect style and omniscience. They announced themselves to be influenced by cinema and used it…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
I discussed that last point with the person who recommended the series to me, and we agreed that that’s actually one of its strengths. In real-life situations of war, revolution, unrest etc good people are just as likely, or even more likely, to get killed as bad people. The atrocities that occur at regular intervals are paralleled in real life…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
Thank you for this Richard, on the strength of which I’ve just recommended it to my daughter.
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RichardB replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
I’m not sure that I’d call The Ten Thousand Doors urban fantasy, exactly, as I understand it (yes, I did go and look it up). it has some of the tropes, like fantastical elements intruding into our world, but the setting is neither urban nor contemporary.
I take your point about some modern fantasy being more original (I’ve sampled George R R…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Wildlife in the Kitchen in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
There’s something awe-inspiring about coming into contact with truly large insects and similar bugs, and your blog reminded me of an incident on holiday in Spain, years ago. We’d rented a cottage and on the last day we were cleaning up and I’d put a bin-bag by the door. I reached down to retrieve what looked like a piece of vegetation poking out…[Read more]
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Woolleybeans replied to the topic Film, storytelling – psychic distance again – and looking under the bonnet in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
I find it interesting how different people absorb PD in different ways.
I feel two aspects, at least, were being discussed on the Self-Edit course.
The actual physical distance of the description, which would correlate more to the wide or medium or close shot, seemed to be part of it. It certainly turned up in examples. It did not, however, seem…[Read more]
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Woolleybeans replied to the topic The Future of the Den (again) in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
I feel hypocritical even writing a response, because I have drifted off so much and for so long, and managed to fail to submit an entry for three years of the challenge, but I would also be sad to see the Den go.
For me, it’s partly habit. If I don’t have a reason to log on, it is all too easy to just…stop doing it. And once a tab is shut, my…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Wildlife in the Kitchen in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
It only occurred to me after posting to do a bit of investigating, and it turns out this must have been a female golden-ringed dragonfly, which is the longest British dragonfly and is often found quite some way from water.
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Libby replied to the topic Wildlife in the Kitchen in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
Dragonflies are increasing Dragonfly species are colonising the UK ‘at a greater rate than ever before’ | Natural History Museum (nhm.ac.uk)
I can’t remember if it was last summer or 2020 that we had dragonflies in the garden even though there are no ponds nearby.
The Big Butterfly Count starts today if you’re interested — and can cope with the heat!
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RichardB started the topic Wildlife in the Kitchen in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
Yesterday I was in the kitchen around midday when I heard a mysterious and quite loud noise. It sounded a bit like a half-speed football rattle, and it seemed to be coming from the window above the sink. On closer inspection it was coming from behind the food recycling bin we keep on the windowsill, handy for scraping the plates into before…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Film, storytelling – psychic distance again – and looking under the bonnet in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
Many thanks for this, Daeds. You sum up very well my feeling about prose vs film: “Film and prose fiction seem to be two media divided by a sort-of common language.” It’s the seem and sort-of which interest me.
“So I think what I was reacting to with Midsommar was that the director, Ari Aster, was finding ways to put us closely within…[Read more]
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Sandra posted an update 4 years, 4 months ago
What’s new? What activity? Not a lot on July’s competition. I’m heading down to London (first time in 17 years !!) next week for a few days. Would be good to get back and find some entries
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RichardB replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
‘…Every book back I read seemed to involve a magic sword or a ring and sorting the good from the bad became impossible…’ Yes, Kate, that was exactly my experience.
By contrast, to take a selection of the Ballantine books I read in my youth, The Well at the World’s End (William Morris), The Worm Ouroboros (E R Edison), The Night Land (William…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
Well, you’ve convinced me. I
may have to addhave added the book to my ever-growing kindle list. Another great blog by the way.“A bit harsh maybe” you say, of Ursula K. Le Guin’s remarks. My feelings about this are mixed. I can see her point, but I am not convinced. I would have thought that the way we approach the old stories is what matters.…[Read more]
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Kate replied to the topic Not Such a Literary Byway: The Ten Thousand Doors of January, by Alix E. Harrow in the forum Blogs 4 years, 4 months ago
I think our reading tastes have developed in a similar way, Richard. I read fantasy as a teen (though never a LOTR fan) but as I got older and every book back I read seemed to involve a magic sword or a ring and sorting the good from the bad became impossible, I moved away from the genre.
I do enjoy (and often write) our reality with a…[Read more]
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