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Athelstone posted an update 1 year, 11 months ago
Sorry for any oddities and issues with the site. I had a bumper crop of major updates to install and although I did my best to slip these in seemlessly, there are one or two niggles. In particular, Buddypress, which gives the site many of its social networking features had a complete rewrite. I did check all the prerequisites and tried it out on…[Read more]
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Libby started the topic Monthly comp – June 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 11 months ago
Near where I live National Grid are replacing the overhead cables. The new cables will have increased capacity and allow for more connections to green energy.
For the June comp please include electricity in a story of no more than 500 words.
I’m looking for the stuff that travels through lines and sockets but if you also want to include…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly Competition – May 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 11 months ago
Thank you, Ath! That was a lovely surprise. The standard of the other entries was so high. Thank you to Terrie, Sandra and Seagreen for such evocative and immersive stories.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – May 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 11 months ago
Thank you Ath, both for the competition and for your encouraging summing up. I certainly would’ve been hard-pressed to choose a winner, so congratulations and thanks to Libby, and also to Terrie and Seagreen.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition – May 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 11 months ago
Why do you always insist on making this difficult?
Terrie’s Plant Song is almost a poem to the language of flowers. Rich and ancient with a deadly heart. The melody, she writes, is intoxicating, and I can’t think of a better word for the whole piece. I said “anything floral” and it’s hard to imagine something more floral than this. A wonderfully…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly Competition – May 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years ago
Phototropism
Suzy and I drank white wine while we sat in stiff, square garden chairs. I hadn’t met Suzy before and admired how she leant back, legs stretched out – lounging and confident. She wasn’t just overcoming the chair’s straight edges; she showed me she knew she had glamour. Her jeans and yellow cotton shirt were years old, threads loose…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – May 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years ago
(This may well be missing the point)
The language of flowers not always sweet
Only after finding, (months later) photographs other than the ones taken by fourteen-year-old schoolgirl Kally Logan that caused all the trouble did Luke Darbyshere register flowers had twice been fleetingly present on his wedding day. Much of the time he’d been su…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly Comp April 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years ago
Thank you, Seagreen, for the competition. Great, enticing stories from Ath, Sandra and Terrie. I enjoyed them all.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Comp April 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years ago
Sea, thank you for the useful challenge, especially because it helped me formulate my character as well as sparking such a brilliant range of responses; I wouldn’t’ve liked to choose a winner.
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Athelstone started the topic Monthly Competition – May 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years ago
April showers bring May flowers. they say. But when is a flower a flower and when is it a weed? Anything floral in less than 501 words.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Comp April 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years ago
Seagreen, thanks so much. A brilliant prompt for April. Thanks also to my co-authors. There were some great pieces of writing.
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Athelstone replied to the topic How I Cope With My Box of Bugs. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 2 years ago
To be fare, sometimes I don’t know the ending – or the story.
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RichardB replied to the topic How I Cope With My Box of Bugs. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 2 years ago
Stephen King, Ath? He’s said that he never knows what’s going to happen when he starts a novel, and he’s published nearly seventy of them.
Your method (if we can grace it with that name), Ath, sounds very much like mine: a rough idea of the story arc and the ending, and not much more. The nearest I ever got to planning was to write out the rather…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic How I Cope With My Box of Bugs. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 2 years ago
I like the bugs analogy, Terrie.
Roughly I do something like this: I plan, though not in great detail – usually the ending and a couple of things along the way. When I start writing the plan doesn’t seem to work so I alter the order of events or cut events. After a bit I give up with the plan and hope the writing will suggest what I need to do…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic How I Cope With My Box of Bugs. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 2 years ago
I’ve written three full length novels and two shorter ones, plus numerous short stories. I’ve never been able to bring any planning tools to bear on the process, either widely advocated or self-invented. Yes, it is extraordinarily difficult and a constant worry as the story progresses, since I am an inveterate seat-of-the-pants writer. Yes, I…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Monthly Comp April 2024 in the forum Monthly Competition 2 years ago
It’s a while since the 1980s
And why come back? Why, exactly, limp along these corridors after decades, and stop to look at dormitory doors and classroom doors all shut for the summer holiday. There’s no one else in this building – a giant bungalow with many arms – except the senior school secretary who has shown me old records and left me…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Where Does Your Writing Inspiration Come From? in the forum Blogs 2 years ago
@sandradavies, yes indeed – transfer of information. The number of times I’ve come across a note I’ve scrawled down when all that’s left is an incomprehensible collection of words and a vague memory of myself thinking that I must find a way of using this brilliant insight. the very embodiment of having all the nuance but none of the original…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 2 years, 1 month ago
Oddity Corner: accustom, verb, make someone or something accept (something) as normal. The other day, in my writing group, somebody came up with the phrase, “…as my eyes accustomed to the darkness.”
It immediately struck me as an odd phrase, but I was in a minority of one. I suppose my reaction is because I’m used to seeing accustomed as part…[Read more]
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I don’t think it has a problem though it perhaps sounds old fashioned, which could be the intention. In a contemporary story I’d be more likely to say, ‘As my eyes adapted to …’.
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But I think there could be a grammar question in there, Ath. This is where I show my uncertainties about active v passive but accustomed on its own is active. In a compound with an auxiliary verb it’s more passive I think. ‘My eyes became accustomed.’ The OED says, ‘In passive use sometimes approaching the stative adjective; cf. accustomed adj.’
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My eyes opened to darkness.
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In which ‘opened to darkness’ is adjectival. Sometimes you want a straightforward active verb and sometimes you don’t.
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I’ll stay sitting on this fence 🙂
And I’ll chuck in a quote. ‘The ear is not accustomed to exercise constantly its functions of hearing, it is accustomed to stillness.’
J. Ruskin, Modern Painters vol. I. 60
Lucky Ruskin.
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It’s definitely not intended to be old-fashioned. A twisty modern tale.
The nearest support I have found to my position when searching the internet, is the statement that “accustomed to usually comes after linking verbs such as be, become, get, and grow”.
I suspect that part of the issue is that, as the OED suggests, there is an adjectival…[Read more]-
I wondered if the transitive quality of accustomed was playing a part but couldn’t get my head round whether it was or not. This is where my thin knowledge of grammar fails me. I’m also easily lost when having to consider how one word can fulfil different grammatical functions which might overlap.
With accustomed, maybe it comes down to how an…[Read more]-
In the end, voice is probably the most important thing. If the character or narrator would use a linking verb, there should be one included.
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I think that’s what bothered me the most. It’s far away from a commonplace way of speaking. I’ve had quite a few conversations over the last three score years and (well not quite) ten, and read a fair bit, and I’m pretty certain that this is the first time I’ve seen “accustomed” used in this way.
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Why I’m wasting my time puzzling and researching this, I don’t know. Actually I do. I’m about to start editing and at the same time I’m at a difficult point in the rewrite of a short story that’s insisting on growing towards novella length. In other words, prevarication.
Anyway, I think I have it:
1) Accustom is a transitive verb. It requires an…[Read more]-
No good asking me about grammar, so I can’t give a reason for it but while I had no hiccup over “My eyes accustomed to the darkness” I mentally inserted ‘themselves’ after accustomed.
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Which is to supply an object to the verb and make it grammatically correct.
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Thank you for sorting this out, Ath. It has made me think more carefully about verbs 🙂
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I think the importance for writers is that we need to demonstrate that we can follow the generally accepted grammatical conventions so that our work is publishable. There’s an awful lot of correct grammar that simply reflects how the posh mates of C19th lexicographers spoke and wrote and sets out that other ways are wrong.
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More often than not , i find if something you write or read stops you from moving forward then it probably could benefit from revision. depending on the surrounding context of the piece i would have probably written something like … As my eyes adjusted I negotiated the dark shadows with growing ease.
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Late to this, but maybe I’ll make up for that by the pungency of my comments. Even before your careful explanation six posts back, that phrase just sounded plain wrong to me, like a bum note in music. Just because you were in a minority of one doesn’t mean the others were right. To extend the musical analogy, it’s as if you’d been in a group of…[Read more]
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@purplewitch absolutely. I don’t think it will be an issue because the writer in question is quite sharp. Anyway, if it gets to the point where a 3rd party is giving it a professional read, it isn’t going to last.
@richardb yep, that analogy is about right. In this instance I wouldn’t say the author has cloth ears (although the others might, I…[Read more]
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Adding a bit of nonsense to the conversation –
To write a pithy sentence and not use well-worn phrases
Comes with all the thinking and headache that it raises.
So, me, I play with words and, using inconsistent skill,
I hammer, pull, and twist them and bend them to my will.
I make them mine – reformed, unique, and, sometimes packed with w…[Read more]-
Very nice too.
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Sandra replied to the topic Where Does Your Writing Inspiration Come From? in the forum Blogs 2 years, 1 month ago
“Transfer of information” is where I stumble. I’ve several notebooks but rarely there when I need them, so a handy piece of paper does the trick. I then blutack it to the shelf above my monitor from which, within days usually, it drop, onto the paper chaos that is my working space. then promptly disappears. Bigger problem is organising those n…[Read more]
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Libby replied to the topic Where Does Your Writing Inspiration Come From? in the forum Blogs 2 years, 1 month ago
Coordination: that’s exactly it. I can’t get coordinated with notebooks. I have one on my desk and it travels to my bedside table and back again. I admire people who use notebooks when they’re out – they seem more intuitive and open than I am. I think their minds flow more smoothly. They’re even Romantic with a capital R, with all the creativity…[Read more]
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OK, quicker than I thought. We should have users online and a member list back in place.
Thank you, Ath.