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  • Hilary replied to the topic Bumbling Round the Citadel in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    Thanks for sharing this, Philippa. What a journey!
    And I would just like to add, for the record, that while Philippa was going through all this, and working (and crying) so hard, she has continued to be ever-generous in giving support and encouragement to others. Much appreciated.

  • Railway accidents have many causes. Sometimes the fault is with the hardware: the signalling, the track, the trains themselves. More often one or more people make mistakes, through pressure of work, a moment’s lapse of concentration, or sheer negligence. But the Radstock collision of 1876 on the Somerset and Dorset Joint Railway was, fortunately,…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic The truth about – back then in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    Thank you, Kaz. Do you think this might count as an “I remember” exercise?

  • Athelstone replied to the topic The truth about – back then in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    Thanks Gerry and Richard. Oh, and Richard – more rails. Definitely.

  • RichardB replied to the topic The truth about – back then in the forum Blogs 7 years ago

    Thanks for this. I remember your ‘The Truth About…’ blogs on the Cloud, and used to enjoy them immensely: perceptive (Isn’t hindsight wonderful?), moving, and uncompromisingly honest. This one is no exception.

    And yes, there has been a sad dearth of blogs lately. Maybe it’s time for another tale of the rails…

  • How long is it since we had a blog?

    It’s been a funny few weeks for me. But never mind all that. This is a blog from the Word Cloud, so apologies to former Cloudies who remember it. I may post a couple more of these blogs as well, so it’s worth saying straight out that I’m also sorry if they seem too locker-room in style. They are who I was.

    The…[Read more]

  • Memories, memories

    Through a mane of blonde hair, through streaks of bleached and of darker dyed strands, her eyes flickered upwards. “Can I help you, sir?”

    Behind me the door hissed shut expensively, hinges well greased by wills and probates. “Do yer know where Bryant Street is?”

    “I umm… don’t know.” She bent her head back down to the screen…[Read more]

  • Yin and Yang

    A gurgle of whiskey titillated the silence, ending with a full stop tap of glass on glass. Darrol picked up the tumbler and drifted over to the window, mind still emersed in his Yin and Yang infatuation. Her long blond hair against his dark skin; her crystal cry above his leather groan, their lovemaking uniting them – like the i…[Read more]

  • Athelstone posted an update 7 years ago

    3 fabulous entries in the October Comp so far. Why not have a go?

  • Lost and Found and Lost

    Arthur was rooting through a drawer in the garage, the one reserved for plumbing parts, searching for a tap washer. His gnarled hands scrabbled through off-cuts of plastic water pipe, white nylon fittings, a flushing mechanism still in its packaging, old tobacco tins holding copper olives, bolts, nuts and split pins. No…[Read more]

  • This only 269 words but says what I intended

    Time to play

    Clearing a 25 year-old to-be-replaced kitchen, and the resultant sense of temporary displacement, gave time and focus to a wider realisation of things no longer needed. Delays gave more time than anticipated to jettison stuff, then the lovely announcement of a visit from good friends from…[Read more]

  • Hilary replied to the topic September 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago

    Well done, Athelstone. And thank you, Squidge.

  • Athelstone replied to the topic September 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago

    Thanks Libby and Sandra – and once again, thanks to Squidge!

    October beckons.

  • Sandra replied to the topic September 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago

    Congratulations on the win Ath, and for what it’s worth I found it uncomfortably horrific in its pervasive cult brainwashing manipulation – the sort of thing I usually avoid reading and very definitely cannot write, so am as admiring as I am uncomfortble with it.

    And thanks Squidge for the competition which I took as opportunity to try out a…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic September 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago

    I might be a bit over sensitive, but it’s the kind of trope that surfaces when feelings are being tested: stories about minorities and their secret evil ways. The classic cases would be all the tales of alien mind-control and body take over that were so popular during the anti-communist frenzy in the US during the late 40s and 50s, or the ‘Yellow…[Read more]

  • I recently found some writing notes that I’d forgotten about. I was surprised by my reaction. That seems like a theme to me. Something (anything) forgotten then discovered. Surprising reaction. 400 to 500 words (tops).

  • Athelstone replied to the topic September 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years ago

    Thanks for a fab competition, Squidge. You’ve brought a tear to my eye. I’ve been doing the monthly competition for nearly 10 years, although with fewer entries in the last few months, and this is my first win! There were some super entries this month; I’m really pleased.

    I re-read my entry and worried that it might be steering too close to the…[Read more]

  • Athelstone posted an update 7 years ago

    Wow! Came across some notes I scribbled down about 5 years ago: events in the life of a character in a book I’ve put aside. Not prepared for how guilty it would make me feel. It really seemed as though I abandoned somebody important – almost like a real person. What are my life lessons here? Stop scribbling stuff down? If I do, don’t read it…[Read more]

    • Libby replied 7 years ago

      Perhaps the last question is the right one. Or return to the character if not the same story. It sounds as though the character has life or you wouldn’t feel bothered about them. Someone to come back to when the time is right?

      • Raine replied 7 years ago

        I’ve got two notebooks full of random notes on characters or ideas. Most of it will never turn into something, but they’re great for when I’m feeling a bit blank – looking through and seeing what wants to be written. If you’re feeling that guilt, then perhaps that idea wants to be written enough for you to spend a little bit of time expanding on it?

        • I’ve written a fair amount of this character, but killed her before her history unfolded later in the story. It was during that unfolding that I began to like her. I was feeling bad enough about having done her in, but then I came across a load of notes about a chance encounter she has with an old friend after a separation of several years. I have…[Read more]

  • Hilary replied to the topic replying to agent rejections in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years ago

    Thanks, all. I think from now on I won’t reply to form rejections. Certainly I shouldn’t have done it so long after I received them. It was just that tweet making me think I’d been rude! Perhaps she wasn’t talking about form rejections.

  • RichardB replied to the topic replying to agent rejections in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years ago

    It’s never even occurred to me to reply to form rejections. What’s the point? Who’d bother to read it? I can’t speak for any other circumstances, because I’ve never been there (sob).

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