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Daedalus replied to the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 9 months ago
Sometimes definitely control! E.g. ‘Suffering a tyrant may be bad but tyrannicide leads to civil war, which is worse’ – see Plutarch via Shakespeare via this morning’s ‘In Our Time’ ๐
As Orwell wrote ‘Who controls the past controls the future. Who controls the present controls the past’ – and to my mind, the past = the historical narrative =…[Read more]
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KazG replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
You lot are fantastic! Thank you all so much for brainstorming for me ๐
@seagreen and @janeshuff – I think you’re really onto something there with The Time Stealer/Snatcher’s… and using that to bundle the series together. Going to ponder that.
@jd73 that made me snort – Iron Maiden’s back catalogue ๐ But I love them. And I’m leaning…[Read more]
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Philippa East replied to the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 9 months ago
Control or to warn?
And I suppose that’s another thing…. we all choose the stories we want to hear!!
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Philippa East replied to the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 9 months ago
I’ve also come to realise that themes / controlling ideas are basically the reason why human beings have always told, written and read stories.
We are all trying to understand how the world works and how best to live our lives within it.
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Philippa East replied to the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 9 months ago
Maybe it’s something as simple (elegant) as “when desire burns too hot, it destroys”?
I think mine is: “only when culpability is deeply acknowledged can true reconciliation occur.”
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Philippa East replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
Thanks guys! I’m going to try and draw up a shortlist for Sarah today…
I really appreciate all the help
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Philippa East replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
I LOVE the sound of this book!!
How about…. (London’s) Queen of Time and Shadow
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Philippa East replied to the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 9 months ago
Exactly ๐
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
In the Nick of Time
Lost in Time
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John S Alty replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
Tangled Web (A, The, What a, Weaving a,)
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John S Alty replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
Time is sometimes described as a fourth dimension, so:
Fourth Dimension
The Fourth Dimension
Into the, From the, Out of the, Attack of the. (last one was a joke). -
Squidge replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
The time between?
Between times?
The Time Snatcher of London Towns?
A shadow of time… (working on from Jonathan’s suggestions)
A shadow in time?I really hate titles sometimes!;)
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Daedalus replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
In the Shadow of the City
The City in Timeโs Shadow
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Seagreen replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
Thinking out loud here…
Daughter (Children?) of Shadows
Daughter of the Shadowland(s)
The Time Stealerโs …… (Adversary/Daughter/Enemy)
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KazG started the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
Yes, I’m blatantly copying @philippaeast with her Titles thread.
I must be a bit slow because I’ve also had the same feedback from my agent Danielle (that the story needs a new title) – and yet I didn’t think of asking you brilliant lot for help. So thanks @philippaeast for the inspo ๐
Some of you have read ‘Snatched’ (thank you beloved…[Read more]
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KazG replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
@alanr – just saw that I basically suggested the same as you!
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KazG replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
I keep coming back to the words enmeshing/unmeshing. For me that feels really evocative of family tendrils, the way the brain works (especially in cases of forming, breaking and reforming connections). – it makes me think of a web and a net and a loosening of patterns. Don’t know how you might use it but I love that word!
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Daedalus replied to the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 9 months ago
I like that way of putting it. Helpful.
I haven’t seen ‘Downsizing’ but it sounds like a film that is a bit overloaded with ideas and ends up getting lost among them.
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Philippa East started the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 9 months ago
On the podcast I am obsessed with (storygrid.com), they refer to a story’s theme as the “controlling idea”. I like this way of putting it, because a good theme helps you control the unwieldy beast that most (draft) stories are.
A “controlling idea” might be something like “happiness comes through pursuing our true calling”, “money isn’t…[Read more]
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