HELEN KAMPFNER

  • Knicks posted an update 4 years, 11 months ago

    Gonna try to catch up on my reading, starting this weekend with entries from the last short story challenge ✨

  • Why do you say you’re a terrible beta reader?

    It’s a bit like when I had to read books for exams at school. It was no reflection on the work itself and I’ve read many of the books since with great pleasure. Something about picking up a book for a purpose (a meta-purpose if you like) that isn’t simply pleasure, idle curiosity, whatever, and my…[Read more]

  • Thanks for the topic. May I add that I’m a terrible beta reader. I would like to be more useful and hope to pick up some tips if this discussion develops and hopefully turns into something more.

  • Knicks replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 4 years, 12 months ago

    I am all for the idle chatter and discussions on beta reading as well. I think that is another wonderful pro of what we have here, along with the comps. The ability to get quality critique on the works we want and hope to publish. It’s like the second, necessary step on the road to being a writer. You do the work and write the thing, and then you…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 4 years, 12 months ago

    What I meant was that we can post images now, providing they are online somewhere. That said, like many things on the Den, it’s a bit hit and miss whether it works.

    roses grow on you

    • A bunch of roses always brings a smile, especially when the ones in our garden are rain battered and looking about as depressed as a rose can.

  • Sandra replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 4 years, 12 months ago

    Sorry Ath, but I didn’t reply to your “images have always been here, just not uploading images” because I wasn’t sure what you were getting at.

  • Athelstone replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 4 years, 12 months ago

    Hi – that was a reply to Sandra, just for avoidance of confusion. Yes, there are several very appealing forums available, including Discourse (and I must say as a longtime repairer, I like your forum and the topic). That said, with Discourse, we would need a VPS or similar non-shared server arrangement*, unlike a traditional web-host, so the…[Read more]

  • Barny replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 4 years, 12 months ago

    OK, but what about the many other advantages of discourse?

  • Sandra replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years ago

    I do think Bella’s beta readers might be an idea, but perhaps, at least to start with, omit the financial bit and just set up a register of those willing and those wanting, with some detail of genre, etc and the willingness to send a sample chapter to see if they’re compatible.

    And the possibility of uploading pictures, I’d say Handle With Care,…[Read more]

  • Barny replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years ago

    @athelstone have you looked at moving to a 21st century forum like discourse? I use it on talk.restarters.net and it’s pretty slick. You can get email notifications and reply by email; can upload pictures, has trust levels and you can restrict areas.

  • Sand

    Mum was a good woman. I say was; I mean is. She’s still alive. But since the diagnosis of dementia, well, for a long while before that, I knew she was slipping away.

    She sits with me as I work.

    I have a phone to repair. A capacitor has failed, a tiny surface-mount component. It is fiddly and the manufacturer won’t replace it. But I wil…[Read more]

  • “Above the tideline”
    first line provided by Thomas A Clarke

    Above the tideline, an old blue rope is entangled in a bramble bush. I gaze at it while retying my hair, turning to face into the wind, risking the scratch of sand beneath my already sore eyelids; its crunching against my teeth.
    Sand, salt and shell fragments speckle the twists of it,…[Read more]

  • Janette replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years ago

    Sorry I’m so late to this. As many of you know, I’ve had rather a bad accident (tripped on a pothole) and suffered several injuries, including breaks to both arms, particularly the left elbow (I’m left handed).I have been warned the recovery will be long and involved, and I’ll probably not recover full movement to my left arm/elbow. Typing is slow…[Read more]

    • Thea replied 5 years ago

      Gosh, so sorry to hear that, Janette. Wishing you a speedy recovery. Take care. x

      • Oh dear, oh dear. MrsB tripped on an uneven pavement and broke her arm while we were on holiday last year, and I remember all the pain and worry, so I have some idea of what you’re going through, and you have my sympathy. Especially since your case sounds worse, though reading between the lines it sounds like you’re getting better care too. Best…[Read more]

        • Rubbish news, Janette. I hope you recover as soon as possible. Sending more hugs – gentle ones.

      • Thank you, all, for your well-wishes. @richardb, sorry to hear about your wife. Care has been hit-and-miss due to an over-stretched NHS, but Mr O has taken a sabbatical from our small business and is taking good care of me. Just a pity I can’t always get to talk to relevant NHS departments when I need to.

        Re Den, lets hope we can sort it out and…[Read more]

    • Libby replied 5 years ago

      Hi Janette, I’m really sorry about your accident. It sounds horrible. I really hope things start to get better soon.
      Re the typing, would investing in voice software be helpful? Word has a dictate function which I found unusable (any pause for thinking and it switches off, and it’s also too basic to be any good) but there are proper pro…[Read more]

  • Congratulations, Libby! And thanks, Ath ☺️
    Enjoyed reading all of these.

  • Well done, Libby – a deserved win!! And thanks Ath.

  • Yes indeed, Well done Libby – such beautiful writing. [And well done Ath for getting it right ;-)] Also for the theme of the competition which chimed with the greater degree of looking back I occasionally do these days.

  • Libby: Sound Waves.
    A real slice of life. Beautifully portrayed, the violent action all at a distance and the thoughts of the protagonist so quiet so mundane that we just know a bomb is going to explode into the story.

    Sandra: Another fairy tale.
    Ah, becoming an adult. I’m so glad I’m not the only one still waiting for that Corinthians mom…[Read more]

    • Libby replied 5 years ago

      Thank you @athelstone. I enjoyed writing to the theme. The other entries were so good I’m very chuffed to have won.
      I’ll go away and think of a theme for July.

  • Barny replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years ago

    DoW problems: Usability just isn’t what it should be; not being able to post pictures is a pain; definitely doesn’t promote idle chat.

    The wordcloud was very far from perfect, but had one significant difference: the course offerings meant new people were always joining, wondering wth was going on, some figuring it out or persisting without fig…[Read more]

  • It’s not great, but it’s an entry… 🙂

    THAT BIT BETWEEN WHITEKIRK AND TYNINGHAME, NEAR TO BINNING WOOD

    (276 WORDS inc TITLE)

    I wondered if there might be ticks. In the grass, I mean. After all, they’re rampant in this weather, aren’t they? And they’re nasty little buggers. The consequences of Lyme disease can haunt you for years…[Read more]

  • Athelstone replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years ago

    The garlic will be ready for harvesting in a few weeks.

    • Thea replied 5 years ago

      Ha, bet it’s nicer than shop bought! 🙂

      • How long does it keep for?

        • I’ve no idea…hang on…according to google, it lasts about a month just sitting around doing nothing, but if you put it somewhere warm and dry so that the skin-layer of leaves goes papery, it can last for several months.

          • I thought you were an experienced garlic grower but I see you’re a novice like us! At least yours has grown. Ours never showed its face!

            • Libby replied 5 years ago

              The best I’ve managed is chives.
              One thing about the weather this year: the patches of meadow pea on the lane’s verges are larger than usual. Rich golden yellow flowers liked by bees.

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