HELEN KAMPFNER

  • Athelstone started the topic Things that go bump in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    Well, I’ve gone and done it again. Time for a short story challenge I believe. This one has a ghostly and supernatural theme. If you’d like to find out more then hurry over to the group Things that go bump. Once you have joined, you can read all about it in the forum.

    You know you want to.

    You’ll be sorry if you don’t.

  • Fascinating, Richard. Rich’s words may have been ahead of their time, but that serves to emphasise how persistent the root causes of these disasters are. We still do it, even with our modern safety culture. Sadly, there are forces working to erode what gains have been made. The “Health & Safety Gone Mad” slogan may not belong to a formal campaign;…[Read more]

  • Sandra posted an update 6 years ago

    Lesley Glaister speaks about her writing process – both fascinating and encouraging in its familiarity: https://www.facebook.com/events/607610230131239/621568822068713/?notif_t=admin_plan_mall_activity&notif_id=1597861845278044

  • Jules replied to the topic Positive thoughts in the forum Group logo of CoronaMoCoronaMo 6 years ago

    Well done on the short story acceptance, Doug.

  • Squidge posted an update 6 years ago

    July’s comp is now July-and-August’s comp! If you fancy having a go, check it out here: https://www.denofwriters.com/forums/topic/monthly-comp-july-2020/

  • Jules replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    Pretty sure Stephen King now has a team of fact checkers. But yes I imagine the tone of those letters is gleeful. What I’ll say for King is that even though he’s writing speculative fiction, he portrays characters who’ve had life experiences he has not respectfully. The same cannot be said for Boyne! One of the big problems with The Boy in the…[Read more]

  • Sandra replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    Ah, yes. I take your point Athers. My ignorance obscured it earlier.

  • Athelstone replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    There are degrees to this and a dependency on the type of book being written. I am not searching for an artificial precision in moral culpability. I am not saying that there are some absolute rules at play. I am saying that if you bend the truth to suit your story, while at the same time maintaining that what you write is authentic, then there are…[Read more]

  • Sandra replied to the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    Athers, I’ve not read Boyne, so took the passage you quote as from a fantasy novel which, in my understanding, means anything goes in the way of made-up words and facts.
    On the subject of ‘proper’ research; at Newcastle Noir a couple of years ago, one crime writer told of being asked how many specialists he had on call to help him with research,…[Read more]

    • There’s an article in today’s Telegraph referring to this, and mentioning it seems to apply less to film-makers, e.g. Braveheart where kilts were worn 500 years before in use “because they looked better”. Artistic licence, innit?

  • Athelstone started the topic A gasp escaped me! in the forum Blogs 6 years ago

    This is a lightweight blog.

    I was just settling down after reading about the astonishing performance by George R R Martin at the Hugo awards, when my son approached brandishing his phone.

    ‘Look at that,’ he said.

    I looked. My son has been a fan of the Zelda video games since he was little. I played a few along with him in the last few years,…[Read more]

    • Libby replied 6 years ago

      I didn’t gasp – too world weary – but I can see why you’re annoyed, Ath. On a lighter note I was disappointed, having hoped to learn something more about nightshade! Woody nightshade grows in our garden, is pretty and you could imagine the berries being used for dye. It’s also poisonous. But when I got a bit further I’d have switched off if you h…[Read more]

  • Squidge posted an update 6 years ago

    SO sorry, folks – had completely forgotten to check in on the monthly comp! Have no excuse other than I’ve been rather focused on Tilda 3 recently and got carried away.

    As it’s already the 4th August, and there were only three entries, does anyone object to it running through this month too? Hopefully get a few more folk having a go?…[Read more]

  • Squidge posted an update 6 years ago

    Any more for any more on the July comp? Not going to be inundated for judging this time unless there’s a last minute flurry…

  • Mad Iguana replied to the topic The $2,000,000 Guitar in the forum Blogs 6 years, 1 month ago

    I saw that and thought of your post, and your memories.

  • Looking For Paradise

    The mossy church bench had no kids fighting around it. No grumpy, obstinate husbands, or house-din. Just bliss. I breathed deeply as I listened to the trees above, its branches whispering and swaying in a gentle breeze, stirring birds into song. A squirrel wriggled up rough bark and disappeared into the foliage, minding its…[Read more]

  • Thanks Sea – not heard of the ‘7 Cs’ but it makes perfect sense. Perhaps it is that it can’t be immediately applied from the start, i.e. you (meaning one, and definitely I) have to write quite a lot of scenes involving character and events before the story line appears, after which tweaking into shape can take place.

  • What about ‘Save the Cat’ by Blake Snyder, Sandra? It was one of the recommended reading books when I started Golden Egg.

    Regarding plotting, I use the 7 Cs as a framework:
    Connection to character – introduction to the character as he is now. Forging a connection i.e. why the reader should care about this person.
    Catalyst – Inciting incident.…[Read more]

    • Thank you, Seagreen. The 7 Cs is the most useful and memorable framework I’ve seen – and one comes across a lot of them. Definitely the 7 Cs is a mnemonic to save for next time I need to think about plots.

      Many plotting techniques remind me of ‘My Way’. Techniques, I’ve seen a few/many/umpteen, but then again too few to mention.

  • I’m relieved to hear I’m not the only one to have been unable to find a theoretical how-to-plot scheme that works for them, and I really have tried because plotting is certainly what I find hardest, not being a natura story-teller.
    Screenwriter Jeremy Sheldon did a brilliant presentation at a Festival of Writing weekend, (2014?) and I’ve been…[Read more]

  • I always sit in on these ‘story arc’ kinds of sessions in the hope I’ll find one that works for me. I never have…

    I do have two that help remind me of the essentials though.

    The triangle…I learnt it on the self edit course (now run by Jericho Writers) and blogged about it here:…[Read more]

  • Squidge posted an update 6 years, 1 month ago

    Any more takers for the July comp? We’re halfway through the month…

  • This is about as not stupid a question as I can think of. In essence it’s ‘how do you write’. The supposed divide (classically) is between pantsers and plotters. Plotters, apparently, plan every detail, before they begin. Every chapter and plot point is set out. if a chapter should end with a challenging hook, then it’s there in the plan. Once the…[Read more]

    • I think most of us are probably ‘Plantsers’ in reality. And yeah, it means you do end up on the wrong path sometimes. Lots of times, actually… I’m trying to sort one out at the mo in Tilda #3, and it’s hard to back-track and find the point where you actually first stepped off the path.

      • I’m convinced that you need to be both a planner and a pantser – yes, a planster. The planning and pantsing parts of your brain need to find a way not to just to give each other space but to support each other.

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