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Philippa East replied to the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
Such an interesting thread, Sandra.
I think the most helpful advice I read on this theme was the point that it is not my job to judge whether my work is good or bad. Who am I to say whether someone else’s mind will or won’t be blown? That’s up to them.
My job as author is to write the damn piece to the very best of my ability, and then to put it…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
I realised that, when in the habit of being ready and willing to apologise, I was giving myself an excuses to fail.
Joining groups such as the Cloud, partaking in story challenges – stretching myself so as not to embarrass myself, judging my work against the very varied submissions of others, and trusting that my peers will give it the respect t…[Read more] -
John S Alty replied to the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
You have to blow your own trumpet, no-one is going to blow it for you.
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Sandra started the topic The disclaimer jar – advice on attitude to one's writing in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
I came across an article by Philip Hensher talking about a piece of attitude-changing advice he received as a schoolboy: ‘Don’t apologise, don’t denigrate something you’ve created.’
Some of the informal writing gatherings I’ve been to share the same attitude – having spent ten minutes writing a piece using given prompt word, those who say, when…[Read more]
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Giselle replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
I love this thread!
Richard, wow, brilliant writing. That disjointedness works so well.
Whenever I have to write violence I think of Silence of the Lambs, when you really don’t see/read that much, but the tension is huge. Lots of small suggestions can build on our inner fears.
Janeshuff, so happy that you’ve found the solution! Now, all you…[Read more]
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Raine posted an update 7 years, 6 months ago
Bulgaria holiday day 6 of 12. Pages edited: 0
Hours with running water: 5
Dates fed to beech martens: 500-
That sounds like a typical holiday, all right. Apart from the beech martens thing, but that sounds like a typical Raine holiday
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Save some dates for me
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Re dates, it’d be one for them and one for me.
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We have lots of running water here; we call it rain.
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Same here. And air-conditioning; we call it wind.
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Sounds like a typical holiday, apart from feeding the martens, which sounds cool. Enjoy racking up some memories – writing can always come later.
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 7 months ago
The Book of Death
I’ve waited a long time to claim this one; lurking in shadows at each sniff of her foetid breath, or a glimpse that would transpire to be a rag in a tree. One day she would err, I knew it. Until now though, the loathsome hag had remained one move ahead, vanishing into the night before I reached the aftermath of her latest c…[Read more]
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Philippa East posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
@danielle Welcome! So glad to have you here xxx
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Philippa East posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
Have fixed that stupid chapter. Didn’t have to delete the whole thing after just had to write a new opening and make the rest a resolution rather than an inciting incident. Yeah, don’t worry, it’s making sense in my head. I hope.
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Philippa East replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
I do love a good pow.
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Philippa East replied to the topic Example Cover Letter in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
Hi @Alanr
Sounds like a plan. My understanding of the “read our books before you submit” guideline is to help prospective authors determine whether their own MS would be a good fit. I’m sure you’ll quickly work this out by consuming a few of their titles to see if your own seems similar in style and flavour. Good luck! -
Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 7 months ago
Never Judge a Book
No, sir, we don’t hold property any more. Not since 1 October. Yes, you did just miss out. Yes, if it was a gold bar we probably would look after it and if you ever find one of those on a park bench then don’t hesitate to come straight here. But this is a book. Well, look after it but leave us the details and we’ll conta…[Read more]
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John S Alty posted an update 7 years, 7 months ago
Back from a few days in Mallorca, wonderful, now ready to get down to this month’s competition. Something about a bloke in a greatcoat playing a banjo, lamenting the loss of his spell book, if I remember right.
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KazG replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
Pow to you, too @philippaeast!
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Well done. that is worth a celebration.
Booyakasha! How did you do it?
Congratulations.
Spotting my verbal tics and searching out specific words. I knew I use “that” a lot but that (ha ha) was the tip of the iceberg. Just, up, down, seems, etc etc – OMG. Plus cutting bits where I did not resist the urge to explain.
Oh, nice work! All those little pesky words. And all that RUE-ing.