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John S Alty replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
Has to be “A Lyttle goes a long way.” Excellent title.
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KazG replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
Boosting your straw poll stats, Tony, I too prefer your working title – hands down. It’s interesting, unusual and specific – far better than a generic title in my opinion. I would pick it up to see what it meant, if nothing else, whereas I wouldn’t even glance at Limelight, I don’t think.
I also like ‘improbable’ as an adjective – again it’s…[Read more]
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Elle replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years ago
Congratulations to you both!! I’ll keep everything crossed for you and the shortlist.
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GippsGirl started the topic MacBook users: solution to missing forward-delete key in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
I indulged in a MacBook 12″ a while back, thinking it would be a wonderfully light laptop to carry around for my writing. I was horrified to discover that there is no forward-delete key, only the backspace. Forward-delete is only possible by the simultaneous use of the Function key + backspace. For me, it interrupts the flow when writing and…[Read more]
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Squidge replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
Tony – sorry, but Unrelenting Limelight doesn’t work for me either. Sounds like a tragedy set on a stage, and it sounds like your relative’s life was far from a tragedy.
You said that if you’re not familiar with the name, why buy the book?
Book buyers are a strange crowd, drawn in by all sorts of things. Surely it’s that ‘drawing in’ of…[Read more]
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GippsGirl replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
Hi Tony,
For me, Unrelenting Limelight doesn’t appeal. The word ‘unrelenting’ suggests something burdensome and turgid, and it’s not a pleasant counter to ‘limelight.’
‘A Lyttle goes a long way’ is much more upbeat and inviting.
GG
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GippsGirl replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
Hi Tony,
Like Squidge and Bella, I prefer ‘A Lyttle Goes a Long Way’ because it’s a clever play on words and makes one wonder on the nature of ‘a long way.’
One phrase that sprang to mind was ‘jaw-dropping tales.’ Adjectives such as amazing / astonishing / astounding / incredible tend to be done to death and wouldn’t capture my attention.
Hope…[Read more]
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GippsGirl posted an update 7 years ago
Greeting friends, says I sheepishly peeking out from behind my laptop. I’ve been distracted elsewhere – nothing particularly exciting, but sometimes life just gets in the way and one gets out of the habit of logging in. I hope Denizens are well and productive? I see that JohnT and MadIguana have both had recent successes, so huge c…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years ago
AAHHH I need to keep up. Well done you two!
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Squidge posted an update 7 years ago
I really should be keeping the old writing muscles warmed up, but I’m waiting for an edit to be returned, for the publisher’s opinion of Black Ruby (my two lovely betas have pointed out the weaknesses I thought were there, so that’s good!) to come through, and it’s fast approaching the end of term here and I have a whole primary school library to…[Read more]
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Thinking time maybe, Squidge?
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YEah, mulling and marinading time! End of terms and holidays are always writing-time killers, aren’t they? I’m sure you’ve thought of it, but I always try to have something I can do on paper over the hols cos I’ve got a much better chance of grabbing ten minutes with pen than on computer (especially as it’s an old beast that takes 30 mins to power…[Read more]
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didn’t I reply to this too?? Cos it’s GAWN…
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Can’t believe how busy end of term is…
Yep, can do bits and pieces on paper, but I’m wary of putting too much effort in now if things change much further back and have an impact on later work. Such a fine balance. Doing lots of reading instead.
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Reading is excellent @squidge. I’m not doing enough of that and feeling the lack myself. It’s such a good way of ‘filling the well’ isn’t it? Enjoy!
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Raine replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years ago
I said on Twooter but for double emphasis – YAY!!! So pleased for both of you. Totally deserved and fingers are crossed for the shortlist!
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Seagreen replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years ago
😀 Well done, both of you!
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Philippa East replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years ago
Oh my goodness, this is amazing!!! Massive congratulations to you both. What a brilliant Den success!
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RichardB replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years ago
Yeah, triff. Well done, lads.
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Sandra replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years ago
Saw John’s news, but congratulations to Mad Iguana too – what an achievement for you both.
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Squidge replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years ago
First off, I prefer your original working title – Limelight doesn’t say much to me, but the play on words makes me wonder who Lyttle was, and what sort of ‘long way’ was it? Journey? Promotion? Makes it sound quite comedic, too. It would certainly attract interest, regardless of whether anyone knows of your ancestor or not.
With your subtitle,…[Read more]
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Squidge replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years ago
Wow! Saw John’s news but didn’t realise Mad was in the longlist too! Flippin’ well done to both of you xx
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KazG replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years ago
Oh wow, BOTH of you? That is just brilliant, I’m so pleased to hear it! A big achievement right there. Congratulations! xx
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Pinkbelt replied to the topic Bath Novel Award Successes in the forum Podium 7 years ago
Here, here. Well done chaps!!!
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