John S Alty

I think you’re right on the ending btw, I was just a bit slow on the uptake

Thank you Jonathan and Deadalus for your feedback and suggestions, they have been massively useful.

Regarding the comment about the cereal and the sugar. The reason it’s in there is to show her degradation when later she has cereal again and that time they taste like cardboard

I tried to make the hospital and the fact that the last paragraph…[Read more]

Having a groundhog moment, and I’m looking forward to it, again.

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Abe Lincoln

Thanks each 😮

But not that one, clearly. 🙁

Oh my word, the Den makes emojis! :-O

Some of them might be at York! Maybe someone there could hold a wee banner up saying ‘Cloud Comp waifs and strays this way =>’ 🙂

I gather JD is here as Jonathan

Thanks, Sandra
Thanks, Jules

… and I’ve posted on the YWP FB page.

I’ll definitely let Purple Witch know

Karen was in my SE course so I might possibly have an email address for her. I think Baz is on facebook.