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RichardB replied to the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pete Who? in the forum Blogs 5 years, 7 months ago
From JaneShuff (copied from the wall)
Thank you for this, Richard. I spent my childhood and teenage years in Liverpool and The Liverpool Poets were a big part of it. I thought I hadn’t heard of Pete Roche but, amazingly, I found myself able to recite Somewhere On The Way as I read it so the poem must be buried somewhere inside the dusty old a…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pete Who? in the forum Blogs 5 years, 7 months ago
I’d not heard of Pete Roche, and much enjoyed these two examples, thank you for them.
It’s that sort of recognition/everyday honesty that draws me to certain songwriters (I’m thinking Aidan Moffatt in his Arab Strap days), and why Vicki Feaver spoke so loudly to me.
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RichardB started the topic Richard's Literary Byways: Pete Who? in the forum Blogs 5 years, 7 months ago
No, not that Townshend fellow. Read on…
Back in 1967, when I was in the midst of studying for English A Level, a book came out that introduced me and a lot of other people to a new idea of what poetry could be: accessible, direct, down-to-earth, irreverent, witty. Those who derided it as not proper poetry missed the point. This stuff was…[Read more]
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Thank you for this, Richard. I spent my childhood and teenage years in Liverpool and The Liverpool Poets were a big part of it. I thought I hadn’t heard of Pete Roche but, amazingly, I found myself able to recite Somewhere On The Way as I read it so the poem must be buried somewhere inside the dusty old antique shop of my mind. Thank you!
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Jane, I’m taking the liberty of copying your post onto the thread. It’s a bit difficult carrying on a discussion in two places at once, and stuff has a nasty habit of vanishing from here.
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I never know where’s the best place to reply – so thanks!
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JaneShuff replied to the topic How do you deal with the ever-distracting Internet??? in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 5 years, 7 months ago
Weirdly enough it helps my way of working which is to do intensive bursts of writing and then let myself be distracted for a brief while before I attack again!
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 7 months ago
@Daedalus, I know exactly what you mean: most of my novels start with a conversation between two characters, me thinking they’ll be the opening chapter, then, as things develop, I find they’ve moved to the middle of the middle.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 7 months ago
@Raine – exactly! When I first read A L Kennedy’s tale, I had to re-read to see how it was done. Then di my best to emulate.
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Raine replied to the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 7 months ago
Oh YAY – congrats @athelstone. Very well deserved. And thank-you @sandradavies for such an ace prompt. It was a valuable lesson to me that i really can strip out a lot of my speech tags, actions etc and the world may not crumble!
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 7 months ago
@Daedalus: the story is in ‘What becomes’, the theme of which comes from the song, and it the tale of a man and a woman, previously unknown to each other, having sex in a hotel bedroom.
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Athelstone started the topic Monthly comp: December 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 7 months ago
Advent is upon us. I always liked Advent Calenders when I was little, but I haven’t had one for years. So you can make one for me. The theme is “opening a door or window and finding something”. It doesn’t have to involve calendars! Anywhere between 25 and 500 words.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 7 months ago
Smashing comp, Sandra and a similarly smashing selection of entries. So I’m really pleased to be picked!
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 7 months ago
Hugely impressed with the variety of proper, fully-fledged and entertaining tales arising from that simple six word start, each then heading in its unique and individual direction; a process which I find fascinating and reassuring, i.e. there is no one and only right way of doing it and all are of equal merit.
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Sandra posted an update 5 years, 8 months ago
Aargh – cocked up big time here – apologies. Am trying to remove story from wrong place.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 8 months ago
Seven stories already in this month’s competition – and seven days to go, so if you’re dreaming up a dialogue please don’t leave it too long. And if you are in need of inspiration, you’ll get it by reading those already posted.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 8 months ago
I dreamt about you last night.
Really? I haven’t thought about you for ages.
Ooh! Harsh.
Aha – Sorry, Jack. That sounded terrible. I didn’t mean it like that. It’s just, well, you know – the kids and all that. I don’t have much time for myself.
How old are they now?
Callum’s ten and Orla will be seven on Saturday. Most of this shopping is…[Read more]
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Raine replied to the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 8 months ago
Morning
‘I dreamt of you last night.’
Good morning, darling.
‘We were walking the dog down that lane, do you remember, brambleberry lane, we called it.’
Of course I remember.
‘We used to pick berries in the summer until our hands were black. Do you remember that? How you’d untangle us from the thorns and produce a handkerchief from your sleeve…[Read more] -
Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 8 months ago
Good question @Seagreen. I checked with the story that inspired it (A L Kennedy’s ‘Sympathy’) and the answer’s pure dialogue, please. The difficulty of it is part of the challenge.
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Sandra posted an update 5 years, 8 months ago
I doubt there’s a single person in the Den who has not said, at one time in their life, ‘I dreamt about you last night –’
November’s competition asks that you continue the conversation for up to further 354 words.-
I kind of have an idea. I just need night shift to be over before I can pull it together 😴
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I’ve been mulling it over, but I can’t get the ancient joke out of my head.
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I don’t know of an ancient joke, and certainly don’t need to!
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I don’t need to either. But it does rather stem the creative tide
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Ah well … guess who’s first to post on Bump?
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Sandra started the topic Monthly competition November 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 8 months ago
Opening with ‘I dreamt about you last night –’ I’d like you to write an all-dialogue piece between two people in no more than 350 words, at the end of which we have an understanding of each of them as individuals and the state of their relationship.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 8 months ago
Thank you Sea, not least for the challenge itself, which forced me to face and write a scene I had been putting off; I look forward to the time that bottle of wine is anything but virtual. And yes, I was glad not to be the judge this month, so many differing emotions to choose from. I’ll be back in the morning with a challenge for November.
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Athelstone posted an update 5 years, 9 months ago
OK all. Did you miss out on your chance to join the “Things that go bump” writing challenge? Well, just like Brigadoon, we have appeared again – just briefly – to give you one last, brief, opportunity to join your fellow Denizens. To grab the opportunity send me a Direct Message and I’ll tell you what to do. ACT FAST! This offer expires on 1…[Read more]
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