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Sandra posted an update 7 years, 3 months ago
July’s competition – I’ve given you the first eight words; you only need add 200 more. @libby has set the standard, but I’ve no doubt there’s more than 200 variations to be had. Deadline 31st.
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Raine posted an update 7 years, 3 months ago
I have some child-gone-to-granny days and need to do something productive, but I have 3 wips that I could edit or one half written thing from NaNo (loooooong ago) and I DONT KNOW WHICH TO DO.
Send help. And tea. And vote:
A – replot old wip1
B – try out BIG rewrite of opening to wip2
C – read through of wip3 before beta read
D – try to…[Read more]-
E of course and then maybe B but really you should do whatever you want.
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Well, eat chocolate, obvs. You need sustenance. But while eating chocolate option C strikes me as the most time-sensitive, assuming you have a beta reader lined up. If option C is not, in fact, time-sensitive then just do whatever grabs you. While eating chocolate.
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Yup, I second Bella as that does have a sort of deadline. And ought to afford time for copious chocolate consumption.
(But you’ve omitted the monthly competition!!)-
I’d agree, if something is time sensitive, do that first. Otherwise choose whichever is most likely to be finished or substantially completed in the time you have available so you can cross it off your list/see an end in sight for it.
And eat and drink whatever helps the process along!
Good luck.
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It goes without saying, chocolate first … while listening to where your heart is at, and don’t panic about the rest.
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I’m strangely drawn to E.
Me-time, or in your case, you-time, is so important. Let’s be honest, you won’t be getting much more of it. You may think that when they’re grown and off to pastures new, you’ll have loads of opportunity. Let me just say ‘HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA’.-
Now I’m trying to remember who had the catch phrace ‘I’m strangely drawn to…’ It was definitely a me-in-the-audience thing so it could have been a comedian (Julian Clary?) or maybe a lecturer from way back.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 3 months ago
ZAnd it’s a vote for ‘improbable’ from me too.
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 3 months ago
Thanks, again, for all the good advice and reasoning, too.
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Kate replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 3 months ago
‘Improbable life’ gets a thumbs up from me too.
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 3 months ago
Thanks again for all the advice, guys.
It’s clear I should stick with “A Lyttle Goes a Long Way”.But the subtitle:
The Improbable Tale of an Ulster Storyteller
The Improbable Life of an Ulster StorytellerThe Remarkable Tale… or Life…
The Extraordinary Tale… or Life…or some other type of Tale… or Life…?
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Sandra started the topic Monthly comp – July 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 3 months ago
‘Bringing a gun into a house
changes it.’The opening words lines of a poem entitled ‘The Gun’, written in 2001 by Vicki Feaver, whose work I discovered last year.
I’d like you to enlarge upon this by adding no more than 200 words.
And because I’m not convinced that two months makes participation any more likely, I’m setting a deadline of…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 3 months ago
Great idea for the competition – specially as I had an entry all ready to go and didn’t need to do any actual work…
Congrats, Sandra. I’m only glad I didn’t have to do the judging.
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Kate replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 3 months ago
Definitely keep the subtitle in, IMO.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 3 months ago
Great idea for the competition, Raine.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 3 months ago
I like the sub title. It complements the title – which I also think is the right one!
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 3 months ago
Further thanks to Kate, Kaz and John. It seems I really ought to stick with my working title. So how about:
A LYTTLE GOES A LONG WAY
The extraordinary life of an Ulster StorytellerOr is it better without a subtitle?
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 3 months ago
Yes, brilliant competition. And totally agree with Raine. I would have carried on reading all of them. Congratulation to Sandra and can I add my name to the list of people who would like to read the rest of it.
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Sandra replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 3 months ago
Good heavens, Raine – what a compliment, especially in view of the strength of the rest; I certainly was torn between at least three to name as my favourite. Thank you, indeed. And you can most certainly read the rest, as soon as it’s done. (Currently ‘resting’ after finishing a first draft last week, and already knowing things need…[Read more]
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Raine replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 3 months ago
Well, thank-you everyone for entering. I’m so glad I set this particular challenge as it’s been so much fun getting little insights into all your works in progress and I can genuinely say I’d have carried on reading every one of them. They all pulled me right in and left me wanting more, so seriously well dones on lots of good stuff.
Because…[Read more]
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Kate replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 4 months ago
Hi Tony. I find unrelenting has negative connotations, as if his time in the limelight were a terrible burden that he didn’t wish for. Whereas A Lyttle goes a Long Way piques my interest, and the follow on line that mentions the ‘Ulster Storyteller’ wraps it up for me and would make me take a look inside to see if I fancied a read.
Hope that’s useful.
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 4 months ago
Thanks, Squidge. No, I do like the original title (You should see the length of the list of “Lyttle” puns I rejected before choosing this one! There’s already a completely unrelated book out there called “Lyttle by Lyttle”, my first thought.) I just wondered if I could grasp readers attention without using his name. Maybe I’m worrying needlessly.…[Read more]
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 4 months ago
OK, thanks for the feedback GG
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 4 months ago
OK, so I could still go with “A Lyttle goes a long way”. I agree it’s a nice pun, although any pun could put some people off, I suppose. I was hoping to avoid using his name in the title as though it is his name, alone, that makes it worth buying the book – and if it doesn’t happen to ring a bell with you, why would you buy it?
Would this revised…[Read more]
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Help with a Title, please. in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 4 months ago
Thanks Gipps. THe working title is better, eh? Perhaps you three are right. But jaw-dropping is a strong word; thanks for that.
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Superb line prompt, Sandra. I hope to have a go.