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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Mobile phones in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 6 years, 11 months ago
Yes, but… Who would repeatedly ring a number that kept going to voicemail? Some might try twice but no more than that, surely.
And I suspect that perhaps the caller is no longer in a position to make repeat calls any more than the receiver is able to answer, but I’m just guessing.
I still think the simplest answer is to establish early on that…[Read more]
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic Mobile phones in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 6 years, 11 months ago
It sounds a wonderful last line and conjures up all sorts of possible scenarios; I can understand why you want to be able to use it. I wonder whether you can, though.If, as Daed suggests, you can prove it works by testing turning off your own voicemail, fine, but I suspect phone companies have a system that will automatically disconnect a call…[Read more]
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JaneShuff posted an update 6 years, 11 months ago
Is anyone watching the second series of Keeping Faith? And would be able to tell me what happened in the first episode? No I Player available because I live abroad and I missed the first episode. I have rexorded all the others so far but I would love to know what happened in the first episode before I start watching them.
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Problem solved!
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Jules replied to the topic Book Two – Out Now in the forum Podium 6 years, 11 months ago
Thanks Elle and Mad 🙂
And Kaz, I am now tempted to do exactly that. ‘Ironside’s Guide to the bizarre Middle Ages’ :’D
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Kate replied to the topic Monthly comp – August in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 11 months ago
Brilliant, two entries. Inspiration struck, John. Can’t wait to read them at the end of the month.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – August in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 11 months ago
Just about to lose my data connection before surrendering to the joys of wifi at sea. No inspiration here yet. The pain chocolat is good though.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – August in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 11 months ago
Like Richard, waiting for inspiration – and I’ve next week away from home in which to receive it (several ideas bubbling)
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Athelstone replied to the topic From Bloom to Blizzard in the forum Podium 6 years, 11 months ago
Absolutely stunning story – one of my favourites. Congratulations! Really well deserved.
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Jules replied to the topic From Bloom to Blizzard in the forum Podium 6 years, 11 months ago
Congratulations, Squidge. That was a great story 😊
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JaneShuff replied to the topic From Bloom to Blizzard in the forum Podium 6 years, 11 months ago
Fabulous news. Congratulations. I loved that story.
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Jules replied to the topic Book Two – Out Now in the forum Podium 6 years, 11 months ago
Thanks, @Squidge. Hope you enjoy them 😊
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Kate replied to the topic From Bloom to Blizzard in the forum Podium 6 years, 11 months ago
Congratulations, Squidge. Thinking about your story still makes me shiver.
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Kate started the topic Monthly comp – August in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 12 months ago
I thought I would try and stick with Sandra’s successful poetical theme. Here’s a line from William Henley’s ‘Invictus’ that really resonates for me.
‘I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul.’
I don’t mind what sort of interpretation you put on it; that’s going to be half the fun of seeing what you all come up with.
Let’s say…[Read more]
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Jules started the topic Book Two – Out Now in the forum Podium 6 years, 12 months ago
So, here I am. Sheepishly sidling onto the Podium again because the second book in my historical novella series has been released. I’m aware that I was only here two months ago so I will attempt to be less rambly than I was last time.
For those of you who have already read The King’s Knight Book 1 – Revolt, book 2 – Treason, is available here.
If…[Read more]
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Kate replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 12 months ago
Thanks, Sandra. I wasn’t expecting that! A really fantastic prompt and so many great entries. Bear with me on coming up with something for next month as I’m helping my mother move house today.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 12 months ago
Really enjoyed this one and it certainly got the words flowing. Congratulations to Kate and to the honourable mentionees! And very well done Sandra.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 12 months ago
Great competition Sandra! Congratulations to all the entrants! I’m looking forward to the next one.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – July 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 12 months ago
I didn’t have any specific criteria in mind by which to judge this; just expected to choose the one which moved me most, in much the same way as Vicki Feaver’s poetry moves me. Which was a BIG mistake. Because each and every entry was thought-provoking in a subtly different way.
But definitely NOT a mistake for the pleasure each one brought me,…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 7 years ago
Feeling a bit hacked-off. Just heard that my number one choice of agent to meet at York is no longer going to be there. To be honest, she seemed like such a good fit for my writing that she was a large part of my decision to go this year. My number two choice is a perfectly nice and doubtless excellent agent, but seems interested in rather more…[Read more]
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Sorry to hear this, Ath. Afraid I don’t know anything about Hal Duncan. I suppose that if you submit your MS to the agent at some later date, you can tell them you’d applied to meet them at York and that would catch their attention favourably.
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Hal Duncan? Think he’s the Scottish bloke. Talks nineteen to the dozen in his sessions, but knows his stuff. Can come over a bit abrasive, and I can’t remember what he writes himself. I have a feeling it’s a bit quirky, so you might be OK with him for your non-genre stuff…?
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Yep, just had a look at his website and it is the chap I remember. His how to write a sentence session was brilliant.
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I had a session with Hal Duncan 2/3 years back. Not easy because he knew nothing about my genre. While his sessions were hi-speed and he promised notes (because taking them was impossible), they never materialised. I can’t find my feed-back sheet but though what little he did say was useful.
Bummer though, big time, for you.
My review of Vellum…[Read more]
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That is frustrating, Athers, especially as your other options are now limited and less appealing. I did a sentence structure workshop with Hal Duncan at York years ago. I’m afraid to say I got bored because he was being too methodical (my flaw probably, not his), but that’s not to say he wouldn’t be a good fit as a Book Doctor. Looking at his w…[Read more]
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Heyoop. Just seen I’ve been name-checked here. I do check the Den regularly but missed this. Sounds like you’ve sorted something out, At hers. Bummer though. Hope you’re not regretting coming to York. I’ll be looking forward to seeing you there.
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Ah well, thanks all – just letting off steam. The chance to actually get read by an agent and then meet them is very different from submitting into the dark and if things go wrong it shouldn’t be just a logistical exercise to ‘fix something up’ for the unlucky delegate. I’ve seen similar things happen in previous years and the outcome is never…[Read more]
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And the decision I made is to have a chat with a book doctor who I trust to tell me if I’m being boring, or brilliant, engaging or execrable. I’ve done a bit of research (which is a posh spin on ‘checked the internet’) about Hal Duncan. Seems to be a very fine writer and all-round star, but I’ll stick with my choice.
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Oh no, Athers, I’d seen that one or two might have been cancelled and it sucks that one was ‘the one’ of yours. I haven’t heard anything, so presume mine are okay, but that doesn’t help you. Nor does having to pick from the remaining places available so late in the day. I really hope you get something out of coming to York and as mentioned above,…[Read more]
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Look forward to that, Janette!
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The same thing happened to me, Ath. The replacement agent I’ve found I don’t know at all, but she looks quite interesting.
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I had something of a false start with my WIP. After getting 40K plus into it, I’ve restarted with a new MC (wildly different character) and a change from past to present tense. The net result is that I’m way behind where I intended to be for York. I’ve decided that if I can’t get an agent who’s a good match then I’ll try a book doctor.
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I know all about changing tense, having changed a whole novel from first person present to third person past (and still not getting it published). One possibility at york is to go for an editor. I had a brilliant session with a commissioning editor: I didn’t expect or get a deal, but she helped me pick out underlying themes in the book. One of the…[Read more]
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