@libby
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 7 months ago
It must have been an awful time @skylark. We have been through a similar experience with our youngest grandson and it has changed everything particularly for his mum. But how wonderful that both you and @daedalus found writing helped.
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Daedalus replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 7 months ago
Hi @Libby – I can recommend trying to channel the emotions from current affairs into writing, although I think you have to be in a reasonably strong state to do it. It can be hard to write anything much when life has you beaten down.
Ah, oil in biplanes! I don’t know about linseed oil, but castor oil was a very common lubricant for early…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Brexit dismay in the forum Coffee Shop 6 years, 7 months ago
I agree that the political situation over the last few years has been difficult and distracting. I suspect it has affected both my writing and my mental health.
I can name one effect Brexit has had directly on my writing. On the night of the referendum, I had run out of time to finish the William the Conqueror novel I was co-writing with…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 7 months ago
You have got the premise right @Libby although I don’t think the two soldiers are despatch drivers. To me it just came across as unlikely that only two low ranking soldiers would be sent to cross miles of dangerous territory with no particular plan and little chance of success but maybe it was supposed to show how useless, confused and uncaring…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 7 months ago
That sounds wonderful Libby. Can you remember what it was called?
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 7 months ago
The basic premise is that two very young low ranking soldiers get sent off through miles of no mans land to prevent another section (sorry but I can never remember the correct names for sections of the army but it is around 1600 men) falling into a trap by attacking what they think are a few Germans. I struggled to believe that they would only…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 7 months ago
Hmmm Not sure about 1917. It was certainly visually stunning and showed a lot of the awfulness of life in the trenches but it was curiously unengaging – not sure why – Maybe it was just not my sort of film. Plus I thought the basic premise was unlikely which didn’t help.
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Kate replied to the topic Class 3: Writing Exercise, Bella in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 7 months agoVery clever in the first one how the letter gives one impression of this inappropriate relationship, and then the following comment throws a whole new light on the situation.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 7 months ago
I thought that about Little Women too. Yet another remake. But the structure is very clever, dotting between the past and present, and it is full of life and magic. It made me want to go back and reread the books for the millionth time. I’d strongly recommend it but take tissues!
I always worry if the story is strong enough but I don’t know how…[Read more]
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 7 months ago
I am currently trying to turn a sprawling first draft into something with a bit of shape and trying not to notice all the other things that need doing to it!
We actually had some sun yesterday – I’d forgotten what it looked like – but woke up this morning to wind and rain. It feels like this has been the gloomiest winter for a long time.
I went…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 7 months ago
Oh heavens it is good to see you 🙂
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 7 months ago
Hi Skylark. Lovely to see you here. How are writing things with you?
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Athelstone replied to the topic Dipping my toe back in in the forum Blogs 6 years, 7 months ago
Still here. Still reading. Still writing.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Class 3: Writing Exercise, Bella in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 7 months agoTwo fabulously disconcerting letters, Bella. The first one couched in the appropriately formal language of a teacher to a pupil but revealing a wholly inappropriate relationship and posing a lot of questions. The more I read it the more I began to think that Maximilian was the one pulling the strings and Waltraut was trying to escape him.
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John S Alty replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 7 months ago
Oh, go on Jane, have a peek.You know you want to.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 7 months ago
Oooh! Two entries already! How exciting. I am longing to read them but I guess I should leave it until the end of the month. Thank you @sandradavies and @johnalty
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John S Alty replied to the topic Monthly competition – January 2020 in the forum Monthly Competition 6 years, 7 months ago
The Future
“The future is the time we haven’t had yet,” he said, “simple as that.”
“That may be what the future is but not what it holds,” she responded, “not what’s in store, where it might take us.” Then she got up from the picnic table outside The Black Bull and walked off.He thought about that last exchange…[Read more]
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Athelstone posted an update 6 years, 7 months ago
MAY I remind all participants in the Songs of Innocence & Experience challenge that there are only three weeks remaining in which to complete and submit an entry. Thank you.
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And only five entries so far? What’s happening to us?
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I don’t think mine’s going to happen. Sorry.
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I’ve struggled this year. Too many other things happening but I have the beginnings of an idea and will do my best to get it to the finishing line even if it’s a bit rough.
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Mine’s definitely not going to happen I’m afraid. The two months up to Christmas were very slow for writing and I had to prioritise the novel WIP.
Have drafted a monthly comp entry which I’ll post soon to assuage some of my guilt and disappointment.-
I’m going to have to hold up my hands in defeat. I’ve got two thirds of a very rough first draft and defintiely not enough time to produce anything readable although I am pleased I had a go because it has possibilities. I’ll carry on working on it in between all the other things and maybe post it some other time. I’d love to stay part of the group…[Read more]
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All members stay members – unless they actually choose to drop out – and I’d be sorry to see anybody choose to leave. We can’t always do everything we’d like too and the group challenge is for enjoyment, not pain! Sad you didn’t get there, but you mustn’t fret about it.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Feedback on the Course in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 7 months agoHi @Squidge. I didn’t always think her examples showed what I thought she was talking about but as I read the chapter while travelling yesterday was going to reread some of them to have a second look. The one about the burying something in the garden springs to mind.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Craft Seminar Class 3: Character 2 – Inner Lives in the forum
Andrew Wille's DIY MA course 6 years, 7 months agoAbout to spend all day travelling so hopefully should be able to read it today!!
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