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Philippa East replied to the topic The Disappearance of Rebecca Faulks (short Story – 2,800 words) in the forum Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
Hi Elle,
Sorry it’s taken me a while to get to this.I really enjoyed this. I think it’s an incredibly realistic portrayal of depression, especially the sense of complete hopelessness and almost indifference that invades. She almost simply accepts and embraces her “fate”, to the point where (for me) suicide in the bath seemed like simply the next…[Read more]
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John S Alty started the topic Memories in the forum Critiques 7 years, 8 months ago
Here’s a nasty little story I have been playing around with for fun. Have at it, critics!
Memories
Two tall men wearing overcoats followed the nurse down the corridor towards Room 19.
“Florence can be a bit slow some days but most of the time she’s surprisingly bright. She was quite perky earlier so she should be able to answer your que…[Read more] -
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Sandra posted an update 7 years, 8 months ago
@jhowejr And yet another Predictioneer – well done and welcome.
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John S Alty replied to the topic Short Story Publication/Competition in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Hi Daeds,
Yes, if you look under fiction at acrossthemargin.com and at https://www.ellipsiszine.com you should find them. A couple of super stories from @Elle also. -
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Thank you. Happy to be here. Now to see what I can contribute, if anything.
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I’m new here myself …
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Janette replied to the topic Friday night live in the forum Podium 7 years, 8 months ago
Just catching up with things, including this. Yep, the girl did well. It was an amazing piece well read and really was stand-out. There was one other – a very good comedic piece – which got close, but Helen’s had the edge and I do hope she posts it so that you can see what we mean.
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