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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 2 weeks ago
May
The cactus on the table, out there on the decking, it’s gone mad. Look there are four new paddle things growing off it. Mr Hoskins from next door says they’re called “cladodes”. He should know, seeing as he’s a botanist or something at the college. It’s a modified stem, apparently, which serves the function of a leaf. He came over for a cup o…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Princes Street, Edinburgh, in early May. The morning is bright, the sky opaque with a promise of blue, and there’s enough chill in the air to warrant the cardigan I left on the back of the chair in the kitchen. I’m walking on the sunny side of the street – the side across from the gardens – with measured, purposeful steps as I head to a train…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 12 months ago
Lyrical determination (thin on legend)
2001, around eleven, on the first day of May, lying on a sun-striped bed in an attic studio, John Martyn exhorted, ‘May you never’, in a voice fluffy and worn as the sheet beneath them and a saxophone further ramped up lust while Fran Lloyd satisfactorily surrendered her virginity to Ivo Kinnersley. Ivo,…[Read more]
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Janette started the topic Monthly Competition May 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Today’s walk gave me the inspiration I needed, while I hummed away to May Day songs. I’d like you to write a story with a May (Day) theme.
It could be goings-on at a festival or fair while Maypole and Morris Dancers dance in the May. Or a nod to the Green Man (Jack-in-the-Green) defeating the Holly King of winter. Perhaps be inspired by the lines…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Congratulations, J! Well deserved ☺️
Thanks to Libby for challenging my poor sluggish brain cells with an extraordinary prompt, and to Sandra for an excellent read.
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Heck, I did not expect that. Thank you for such an awesome feedback, Libby, and for a competition prompt which challenged my writerly boundaries. Also well done to Sea and Sandra for their excellent stories.
I have nothing in mind for the next topic – a walk is in order to mull it over, not that I need and excuse to set out in this wonderful sunshine. -
Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Oh BOTHER! So sorry, Libby. I confess I found the prompt a little tricky, but I was getting the start of an idea. Then I got myself involved with something and forgot all about it.
Well done to all three entrants, especially Janette. I liked the stories very much.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Well done Janette for and Seagreen for such entertaining tales, and thank you Libby for forcing me into finding new characters to deal with this tricky prompt. I was grateful for the part played by Google.
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Janette posted an update 1 year ago
I wondered if I could ask a favour of any fellow writers who enjoy character-led novels. The current title of my book Saving Grace has never really sat easy with me, being aware it also the title of a major film (one of my favourites), and I more recently learned it is the name of a US series, besides being used several times by other authors…[Read more]
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Hi @janette , I immediately liked (Don’t) Call Me Graceless and
My Growing Chain of Big Fat Lies. Is Fibs an alternative title?
The first title suggests character, the second plot. They both have voice.
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Thank you, Libby. Your comments are very helpful.
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I like ‘The Art of invisible mending’ which offers intrigue.
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
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Our back-facing neighbours were the first to acknowledge our arrival. Each time I looked out, the ever-preened woman was at her bay window, dog-in-hand (at least I think the explosion of fur was of canine origin). Gerald supposed she were sun-worshipping, her glances only polite curiosity – then he always did see the good i…[Read more]
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Janette posted an update 1 year ago
And sorry for the belated congratulations, Libby – amid the business of being employed again, I thought I had already posted my response to your comp win, which was a fine, worthy entry.
I confess I didn’t know what to do with the April challenge you posted, but some thought during a weekend walk gave me a lightbulb moment.
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Thankyou, @janette ! And I’m pleased you had a lightbulb moment.
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Seagreen replied to the topic New novel from Kate Machon! in the forum Podium 1 year ago
Ooh! Congratulations! 😀
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
UNTITLED (357 WORDS)
Preheat the oven to 220 degrees C.
Scrub the parsnips thoroughly, top and tail, then cut in half lengthways.
It’s Mum’s old recipe. I’ve never used it before, but George’s parents are coming for dinner and his dad is especially fond of roast parsnips, apparently. Or so George would have me believe. Honestly? I think i…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition April 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Three sleeps become one [342 words]
Odd the way memory works, Changes shape and emphasis as one grows older. For me, hearing myself echoing my mother’s faux cheery encouragement as she told me and Robin, my brother, ‘So, you’ll be staying with Granny and Grandad Trent for a little while. Just three sleeps – ‘ shocked me. That I was …. not ex…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic New novel from Kate Machon! in the forum Podium 1 year, 1 month ago
Really well deserved. I love the fact that you carried the two MCs along for ages and are reaping the rewards!
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly competition March 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
Thanks for the kind words, @sandradavies! I appreciate it. And congratulations to you, Libby! I enjoyed yours and every other entry coming out of this prompt. It was a good one 🙂
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly competition March 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
Thanks, Sandra, for the prompt, which I did find somewhat challenging (not a bad thing).
Fantastic entries from everyone else! You motivated me to (try to!) do better.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition March 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
You may not have expected it, but you should believe it, Libby. really sharp story there.
Thanks, Sandra. I enjoyed that prompt. And thanks to all the other entrants; I really enjoyed reading through them this month.
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Sandra posted an update 1 year, 1 month ago
March competition winner declared, and I urge everyone to read the half dozen entries as evidence of the strength and breadth of talent in the Den, and thank Athelstone, for providing the venue.
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