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RichardB posted an update 7 years, 9 months ago
Dunno about NaNoWriMo and word count targets, but in the last two days I’ve revised and rewritten 4,000 words, which is pretty good going for me. I’ve almost finished changing an entire (long) chapter from one POV to another. Remember that exercise in the S-E course? Like that, only longer. Much longer.
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RichardB posted an update 7 years, 10 months ago
Just about to take murdering darlings to a new level. There’s this paragraph I posted for one of the exercises in the S-E course. Debi was impressed, and helped me make it even better. And now it’s got to go. The whole para. (Sobs.)
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RichardB replied to the topic Some notes on Dara Marks' Transformational Arc in the forum Blogs 7 years, 10 months ago
I feel much the same way, Squidge. I never have been able to get on with charts, graphs, grids or any other kind of science-ish analysis. I’m not knocking it for those who find it useful, but my eyes start to glaze over when faced with such stuff, and it seems to place a barrier between me and my creativity (if any). I suppose I might conceivably…[Read more]
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RichardB posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
I had a holiday there in the eighties, on a farm somewhere near Abersoch and Hell’s Mouth (delightful name – Porth Neigwl in Welsh). I particularly remember the day we went to the pub in the nearest village. I left the wife and kids at a table in the garden and went into the bar to order. There were a good thirty people in that room and a fair bit…[Read more]
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RichardB posted a new activity comment 7 years, 10 months ago
Can’t help in this instance. You can’t get a lot further from where I live and still be in Wales, isn’t it?
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Ohmigosh – we went to the Lleyn EVERY year for holidays. I remember having shop-bought Victoria sponge on the beach on my birthday in June… Nefyn, Morfa Nefyn, Whistling Sands, Llanbedrog, Baa-Lamb Beach (our name for it, no idea what it was really called!) Abersoch and Aberdaron… Happy days.
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I had a holiday there in the eighties, on a farm somewhere near Abersoch and Hell’s Mouth (delightful name – Porth Neigwl in Welsh). I particularly remember the day we went to the pub in the nearest village. I left the wife and kids at a table in the garden and went into the bar to order. There were a good thirty people in that room and a fair bit…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 10 months ago
SloMo – definitely sounds like my kind of thing. I’d be up for it. Might encourage me to get a bit more editing done on the notorious ghost story.
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RichardB replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 10 months ago
Yes, there’s something to be said for leaving all the polishing until the editing, and I’m sure it works for some, but not for me. If something I’ve written doesn’t satisfy me, it niggles at me until I’ve put it right.
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RichardB replied to the topic NaNoWriMo in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 10 months ago
Can’t say I’ve ever felt tempted. I find rigid targets counter-productive, and I fear that if I were concerning myself with the number of my words rather than the quality I’d churn out crap. And I can’t bear to write crap, even temporarily. Quality over quantity for me, any day. Yes, I’m slow, but I usually get there in the end.
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RichardB replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
A Cuckoo in the Nest?
Hmm. Possibly a bit of a cliché, but the image seems apt.
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RichardB replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 10 months ago
One of those moments that tend to restore your faith in human nature. And yes, very moving.
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RichardB replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 10 months ago
I can understand how this man feels, but I also remember that the coxswain turned away some of those who did make it to the lifeboat station. Who’s to say he might not have been one of them?
If you want to experience the full admiration for the courage of those men, you need to watch that BBC film and listen to Russell Smith’s eyewitness account…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 10 months ago
The BBC documentary gives the false impression (without actually saying so) that the moment that transmission broke off was the end of the Solomon Browne. That makes for an emotional moment in the programme, but was not the case, since it was seen afterwards. For what it’s worth, I believe that it suffered another violent impact with the Union…[Read more]
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RichardB started the topic For Those in Peril… in the forum Blogs 7 years, 10 months ago
The older I get the more disenchanted I become with my fellow humans. I look at the dishonesty, greed, hate and stupidity that seem to fill the news and I despair. One reason I live in a small village halfway up a South Welsh mountain is to get away from all the shit. But in the increasing misanthropy of my old age there is still one group of…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
Jane, you are welcome to read it. I’m in the throes of revising it after laying it aside for three years, so a fresh perspective will be useful.
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RichardB replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
Oops. Sorry!
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RichardB replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
By the way, you might like to know that Rosalind doesn’t lose the baby. She’s only a month or two into her pregnancy.
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RichardB replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
Okay, Jane, here is my violent passage. I’ve left in a bit on the front to put it in context. Two words in your ear:
1) Just to explain any weirdness, this is a ghost story.
2) In addition to the violence, contains sex and a little naughty language.Okay, here we go.
Smiling down into his face, she began to pump her hips. Joey came to meet…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 10 months ago
I had a problem like this in my last effort, and it cost me more sweat than anything else in that story. It was all the harder because it was a husband beating up his wife. I really didn’t want to go there and tried everything to skate round it, but the plot demanded that I meet it head-on. In the end I did almost exactly what Jonathan suggests: I…[Read more]
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RichardB replied to the topic My failure in the forum Podium 7 years, 11 months ago
I’m rather good at that too. Though how would I Know? In concrete terms I haven’t actually had any writing successes.
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That’s great Richard! Looking forward to seeing the results
Me too 🙂
Finished redoing that chapter. Now for the other two…