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Sandra posted a new activity comment 7 years ago
I’m inclined to agree with you, Gerry. The Jericho layout doesn’t help, but also, to a large extent, we have necessarily become more wary of committing time and energy to sites which may disappear without warning.
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Sandra replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 1 month ago
‘Specific questions’? – yes indeed, particularly in the light of the current one – Raine’s saying “It’ll be judged purely on ‘how much do I want to read on’” (which strikes me as a genius note to strike when setting a competition.) Of those posted so far I would say there are those which I am unlikely to pursue, simply because they are not the g…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 1 month ago
Entirely agree with Knicks and Jane. If critique is wanted it should be specifically asked for; where someone believes it would be helpful, a pm is the best place to start. For myself, comp entries are often little more than the flexing of writing muscles.
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Sandra replied to the topic Regular Den competition – where next? in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 1 month ago
Glad you asked that Jane, I was also wondering.
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Sandra replied to the topic Terminal discouragement? in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 1 month ago
Yes, Squidge – soon as I pressed ‘go’ I thought that myself!
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Sandra replied to the topic Terminal discouragement? in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 1 month ago
At the risk of sounding ageist, is it not the case that a high(ish) percentage of those doing degrees/Masters are quite young, and are unlikely to yet have the confidence/experience to ignore publishers et al?
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Sandra replied to the topic Terminal discouragement? in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 1 month ago
To some extent (not that I’ve done any really full-on writing courses, just SE, some reading and building on experience) I do notice that my very early writing has a freshness of approach that more recent, more self-conscious writing does not.
And I do cheer when I come across writers such as Eimear McBride and Eley Williams (both James Tait…[Read more]
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Sandra posted a new activity comment 7 years, 1 month ago
I’m giving it a tentative try but doubt the same vibes can be captured
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Sandra replied to the topic Bi-Monthly Comp – May/June 2019 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 1 month ago
Drink with a dead man – and apologies, 410 words
Innocuous in colour as a Rich Tea biscuit, the envelope was angled so as to fit into the grey metal cell of the Post Restante box. Illuminated by the single bare bulb in the narrow passage between front and rear of the shop, the vertical/horizontal of the letter’s shadow made of it a hitman, w…[Read more]
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Yes, Sandra! I think many of us have had a narrow escape from the clutches of cleaning and can look back and think ‘There, but for the Grace of God …’
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It’s a dangerous road, indeed – I have never been seriously tempted down The Cleaning Way, except perhaps like @athelstone as a procrastinatory device. Much better to maintain low standards. It’s hard work, but worth it (all that TIME!). Also, kids. Train them up. They get quite useful as they get older.
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Sandra posted a new activity comment 7 years, 1 month ago
Only time I got the cleaning habit was when no.2 child started school, 3 months before no.3 child arrived. Never tried it since (& no.3 child now 41)
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Yes, but apart from the fact that I’m a bit fussy about keeping the kitchen clean, the only time I’m struck by the impulse to do housework is when I’m sat in front of the keyboard trying to write.
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That’s alright then. Just Say No.
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Yes, Sandra! I think many of us have had a narrow escape from the clutches of cleaning and can look back and think ‘There, but for the Grace of God …’
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It’s a dangerous road, indeed – I have never been seriously tempted down The Cleaning Way, except perhaps like @athelstone as a procrastinatory device. Much better to maintain low standards. It’s hard work, but worth it (all that TIME!). Also, kids. Train them up. They get quite useful as they get older.
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Sandra posted a new activity comment 7 years, 2 months ago
Can report – it was a great night. Books AND cake, and fellow writers.
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Sandra posted a new activity comment 7 years, 2 months ago
I’m going – it’s just up the road from me. See you there!
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Sandra replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 2 months ago
Just checked with Steve and apparently an 18 year old is limited to bikes of no more than 125 cc – nippy enough to weave through London traffic, but max speed of ~60mph (and not as nippy as the twist’n’go scooters beloved by street thieves) Once he’s 19 and had has 2 years experience he can go larger.
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Sandra replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 2 months ago
Steve is out – on his BSA B33 – today, I’ll ask him when he returns.
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Sandra replied to the topic New first chapter in the forum Critiques 7 years, 2 months ago
Kate, it also crossed my mind, on first reading, that Alex would’ve referred to his bike by make: ‘his Ducati 500 Hornet’ (or something – I made that up). If you want some better info than I have about modern bikes I can find out, but need to know how old he is – there might be rules about what cc a bike for what age.
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Sandra posted an update 7 years, 2 months ago
Intriguing and likely valuable exercise on Andrew Wille’s blog which I’m determined to have a go at sometime this month: http://wille.org/blog/2019/03/29/heart-words-vs-head-words-guest-writing-experiment-no-73-from-zoe-gilbert/
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Thanks Sandra, that’s really interesting. Latin root strikes me as the language when someone’s trying too hard, and it has the opposite effect.
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Oh that’s interesting, Sandra. I went to Andrew’s ‘Crafting Your Prose’ masterclass yesterday, and that was one of the topics we covered.
I can thoroughly recommend: https://www.wordsaway.info
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I’m finding it very difficult to use. Have joined a group and posted something but now can’t locate it or the original comment it was a response to. This isn’t a plea for help, just a statement. I’ll battle on for a while. Am keeping a word.docx copy of any critiques I give in case I have to post them again.
I can locate the group but not my post.
Hi Gerry! How are things?
Things are fab-groovy, super-duper, thank you. I hope and trust the fab-grooviness etc is equally well experienced by you and indeed all Denizens.