Sandra

  • Athelstone started the topic Chit Chat in the forum Group logo of Coming HomeComing Home 5 years ago

    Please post all chit chat here!

  • Athelstone posted an update 5 years ago

    Things are afoot. Check back 🙂

  • *content warning for a bit of gore down at the end*

    All Woods

    Two roads diverged in a yellow wood. One led to autumn, calm and chilly, its last bronzed leaf picked by a wind still echoing with residual birdsong. The other to darkness, cloaked in mist, where naked trees loomed overhead like a canopy of murderers, intentions ill. The signpost…[Read more]

  • Halfway through the month and still loads of time to get an entry in to this month’s comp.

    If you have a setting waiting to be explored, a weird and wonderful character aching to be brought to life, a misbelief to be addressed, or general mayhem, murder and malice, now’s your chance.

    Don’t be shy…

  • Athelstone posted an update 5 years ago

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  • Stealing Sandra’s idea here and giving you the first line of a poem to do with as you will. It’s from Robert Frost’s ‘The Road Not Taken’

    Two roads diverged in a yellow wood

    No lower limit to the word count, but no more than 400 words, please. You have until midnight on August 31st to indulge your imagination.

  • You know, I’m always surprised when I win the monthly comp (not that it happens often!) but never more so than this time. Such strong entries – I did feel mine was a little lightweight in comparison.

    Thank you, @Libby, for hosting the comp and for such fabulous feedback, and thanks to Ath, Sandra, Squidge and Knicky for making me work harder to…[Read more]

  • Thank you for hosting this month’s comp, Libby, and for your thoughtful words on my piece. And congratulations, Seagreen, I thought your piece was wonderfully evocative. I enjoyed each entry for this month.

    @Libby Grit was about my rather difficult pregnancy, and how the only peace and pleasure I found (from the daily waves of nausea and hostile…[Read more]

  • Libby, thanks for a super topic and the fabulous reviews. Seagreen, a well-deserved win.

  • EMERGENCE

    You stand alone, in the northwest corner of the cellar deck, gloved hands resting on the handrail and face tilted to the sun.

    Breathe in.
    Breathe out.

    Above you, clouds rag-roll an azure sky, while beneath you, an aging platform sways to the rhythm of the North Sea.

    Breathe in.
    Breathe out.

    Solitude. It catches you unawares,…[Read more]

  • It was the same every year.

    She took as many precautions as possible, wrapping everything carefully, keeping the box closed tight until the right moment came, making sure her hands were washed clean when it did.

    And then…

    Ordering everyone to sit down, sit still. Questioning each participant in turn to make sure she knew their exact r…[Read more]

  • Bella replied to the topic Beta Reading Discussion in the forum Blogs 5 years ago

    I also don’t beta read to any sort of checklist. I will always check first with the author what they particularly want feedback on – if they feel something might not be working, but aren’t sure, or whatever. Then I will make sure to address those issues, as well as make other comments as I think necessary.

    I have quite a sharp eye from the…[Read more]

    • Kate replied 5 years ago

      I have that issue with reading for pleasure too, Bella. I can rarely switch off my beta reading brain. Which is frustrating.

  • Squidge replied to the topic Beta Reading Discussion in the forum Blogs 5 years ago

    Wowser…beta reading…

    As a beta reader, I do try to find something good to say as well as making suggestions for improvements. I don’t think I go into it with a checklist per se – I use gut feeling a lot as to what feels ‘right’ to me as a reader. But I sometimess feel that I’m not an objective enough beta reader – I don’t always ‘get’ other…[Read more]

  • KazG replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years ago

    Phew! Nothing new to add to add really. I don’t spend much time here because I’m spread way too thin as it is – life is crazy trying to keep a travel business alive during this time and also publicise book one and edit book two and I genuinely struggle with fitting it all in and not burning out.

    However – when I do have time and inclination,…[Read more]

  • Knicks posted an update 5 years ago

    Just did a thing for the monthly competition. 12 more days to get it, if you have a mind to! Prompt is sand or grit, 100-500 words.

  • Grit

    The crunch of ice between my teeth – cold edges, agitated nerves, sabulous sensitivity. All coalescing into sharp points of pleasure in my body, my brain. Soothing. Assuasive. Momentary. Cup after cup of chipped ice; happiness only until they are empty. Nausea quickly returning.

    The grit of sand and salt and soap beneath my fingers, the…[Read more]

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