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Janette replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 6 months ago
The Book of Death
Iโve waited a long time to claim this one; lurking in shadows at each sniff of her foetid breath, or a glimpse that would transpire to be a rag in a tree. One day she would err, I knew it. Until now though, the loathsome hag had remained one move ahead, vanishing into the night before I reached the aftermath of her latest c…[Read more]
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Philippa East posted an update 7 years, 6 months ago
@danielle Welcome! So glad to have you here xxx
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Philippa East posted an update 7 years, 6 months ago
Have fixed that stupid chapter. Didn’t have to delete the whole thing after just had to write a new opening and make the rest a resolution rather than an inciting incident. Yeah, don’t worry, it’s making sense in my head. I hope.
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Philippa East replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 6 months ago
I do love a good pow.
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Philippa East replied to the topic Example Cover Letter in the forum Blogs 7 years, 6 months ago
Hi @Alanr
Sounds like a plan. My understanding of the “read our books before you submit” guideline is to help prospective authors determine whether their own MS would be a good fit. I’m sure you’ll quickly work this out by consuming a few of their titles to see if your own seems similar in style and flavour. Good luck! -
Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 6 months ago
Never Judge a Book
No, sir, we donโt hold property any more. Not since 1 October. Yes, you did just miss out. Yes, if it was a gold bar we probably would look after it and if you ever find one of those on a park bench then donโt hesitate to come straight here. But this is a book. Well, look after it but leave us the details and weโll conta…[Read more]
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KazG replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
Pow to you, too @philippaeast!
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KazG replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
@janeshuff – ah, the sweet sound of a scene being NAILED! That gives me shivers of satisfaction. Everything pulling together and resonating all over the place…can’t wait to read the rewrite ๐
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 7 months ago
Should I look forward to seeing an entry? ๐
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Elle replied to the topic Example Cover Letter in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
Sorry for the misunderstanding when I meant commercial, supernatural, etc… I meant submission in general not your novel in particular.
The prose is not typical however the story in itself is just the story of an Irish girl growing up in the 60s and her relationship with her sick brother. Just let me know what you think once you’ve read it. My…[Read more]
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GippsGirl replied to the topic Monthly comp – October 2018 in the forum Monthly Competition 7 years, 7 months ago
That’s a cracking idea, Sea!
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Elle replied to the topic Example Cover Letter in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
Hi Alan,
Regarding Galley Beggar, I think you might want to double check but I believe they only accept literary fiction so no genre fiction (commercial, fantasy, horror, etc…) so if your novel is a paranormal fiction I don’t believe it is something they publish.
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Elle replied to the topic Example Cover Letter in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
The only book I read from them was Eimear McBride’s A Girl is a Half Formed Thing, which is very experimental, stream of consciousness prose but I loved it (I just love her as an author)
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Philippa East replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
Pow, @kazg, you got it!
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Philippa East replied to the topic Example Cover Letter in the forum Blogs 7 years, 7 months ago
Not yet… although I think I started Francis Plug: How to Be a Public Author.
I like the sound of them as a publisher, if you’re going for the literary / experimental end of the spectrum.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
Ha, Kaz! Have you snuck into my house and been reading over my shoulder? That’s pretty much where I’d got to – thanks in no small part to this thread. I was avoiding the scene and the complicated POV didn’t help. However I think, by making it somehow trigger a flashback to the earlier scene where she is beaten up by her husband and making her feel…[Read more]
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KazG replied to the topic Violence in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 7 months ago
Richard, that is truly a shocking piece of writing – awful to read but really well done. Very powerful. It doesn’t feel gratuitous to me, awful as it is.
Jane, I think I know the scene you’re referring to ๐ Reading through this thread and going back to my own comments to you, the issue I had with it was that it felt as if you were avoiding the…[Read more]
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