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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 8 months ago
Thank you Sandra, and Athelstone too!! I don’t think I could have managed what I did if Ath didn’t set his usual bar for quality, enjoyable, supremely witty writing 😊✨
That said – and Please Forgive Me if this isn’t the place to say it, I’m not sure where that place would be – it kinda feels like its just mostly us three passing the ball around…[Read more]
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Sandra posted an update 4 years, 8 months ago
I’ve just been reminded of Allan Guthrie’s 34 tips on writing, including pleonasms – a word unknown to me when I first heard it, but which tweak my writing conscience quite frequently. https://notetoselfhumanize.wordpress.com/2010/09/14/32-writing-rules-allan-guthrie/
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 8 months ago
December destined to be a quiet month, I suppose, and very few of you seemed to have suffered from the prurient curiosity about the activities of Jack and Jill’s activities I did, Nevertheless the two entries submitted were a pleasure.
Ath’s trawl through several nursery rhymes returned me to childhood, browsing through books illustrated by the…[Read more] -
Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 8 months ago
Just realised deadline is today – I’ll be back ASAP to read and muse over a decision.
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 8 months ago
Well Done
Jack opened his eyes to see the hooded glower of Constable Roquefort shining down upon him like the judgement of heaven. That glower caused him to squint, which drew his attention to the dull pain pulsing from his vinegar-wrapped crown.
“Where’m I?”
“Hospital.” Roquefort’s brusque, deep growl was like a wolf’s, of which Jack wa…[Read more]
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 8 months ago
Ath this proper Mother Goose / Enid Blyton 😊😊 Gonna do my best Sandra!
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 8 months ago
Thanks, Ath, though I’m not sure I’d welcome being 21 again, in many ways (all those nights with screaming babies!!)
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 8 months ago
Come on folks! Jack and Jill went up a hill … As a child you must’ve wondered what happened to send them tunbling down! It’s my birthday on Friday (a horribly big one) so please present me with a story for the December comp.
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly comp – November 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 9 months ago
Congratulations Sandra! Wonderful as always. I’m looking forward to your next comp theme! (And the fact that I’ll be off work for the holidays which hopefully means I can do it some justice) 😊✨
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Sandra posted an update 4 years, 9 months ago
December comp is up – you’ve a month to exercise your writing muscles and put one of 2022’s Resolutions into practice.
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Sandra started the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 9 months ago
When Jack and Jill are found – Jack unconscious, Jill bruised, with a broken wrist, on the downward path from Old Well Hill, each are separately interviewed while in their hospital beds. Each gives an implausible and conflicting account of the events which led to their injuries.
As a local journalist you want a front page story but are mindful o…[Read more] -
Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – November 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 9 months ago
Thank you Ath, and thank you Knicks for a version I wish I’d thought of , so many excellent phrases. Now to try to craft an irresistible competition!!
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly comp – November 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 9 months ago
Real rough, block-of-text, stream-of-consciousness business, because it’s the end of the month, and how did we get here?!, and I been stupid-busy so zero time for much fanciness, or many words 😅😅
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I Got Nothing
Understanding. To buttress. In-sight. The value in me seeking the value in you, and seeing it. Knowing it, like a true friend. What…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – November 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 10 months ago
Failed on the basics.
I’d been riding pillion on a BSA since my teens. Clandestinely to start, because my parents forbade me, but by 2004 I was well past that, and three years past my first BSA rally, which had taken us to Australia. Being one of 200 bikes wending our way across rolling golden hills an unforgettable experience. Even so, that…[Read more] -
Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Comp – October 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 10 months ago
I really enjoyed your story too, Newbie!
Thank you Raine, for being a wonderful comp host, it was funfunfun like I knew it would be 😃🦇🎃👻
Couldn’t agree with Ath more, we duh best 🥳✨
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Comp – October 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 10 months ago
Ath that creepy as hell, man 😭😭
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Comp – October 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 11 months ago
All done! Lost the ending I wanted to word count woes lols, but this was very fun none the less 👻🐱👤
Lost
Tall pines creak in the eeriness of night, blown by a sudden, fierce gale. It tears through the forest like a spectral fox hounded by wild and ghostly dogs, and the darkness feels alive with power and invocation. Two, small boys stop running…[Read more]
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Comp – October 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 11 months ago
oooOoOoooooh!! I love it. This is going to be funfunfun 🎃👻🦇
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Competition – September 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 11 months ago
Go for it!! I don’t need to tell you whose piece tied with hers in muh heart 😍😍 haha #mybiasisshowing
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