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JaneShuff replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
Random comments:
Yes to Beta Reading, but, time permitting, I’ve always been a keen beta reader. I honestly think the beta reader learns as much from the process as the writer, but I’m not keen on the financial aspect. I know Thea posted a request for beta readers recently. Did anyone respond @thea ?
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Barny replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
OK, but what about the many other advantages of discourse?
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Sandra replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
I do think Bella’s beta readers might be an idea, but perhaps, at least to start with, omit the financial bit and just set up a register of those willing and those wanting, with some detail of genre, etc and the willingness to send a sample chapter to see if they’re compatible.
And the possibility of uploading pictures, I’d say Handle With Care,…[Read more]
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Barny replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
@athelstone have you looked at moving to a 21st century forum like discourse? I use it on talk.restarters.net and it’s pretty slick. You can get email notifications and reply by email; can upload pictures, has trust levels and you can restrict areas.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly competition July 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 1 month ago
Sand
Mum was a good woman. I say was; I mean is. She’s still alive. But since the diagnosis of dementia, well, for a long while before that, I knew she was slipping away.
She sits with me as I work.
I have a phone to repair. A capacitor has failed, a tiny surface-mount component. It is fiddly and the manufacturer won’t replace it. But I wil…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition July 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 1 month ago
“Above the tideline”
first line provided by Thomas A ClarkeAbove the tideline, an old blue rope is entangled in a bramble bush. I gaze at it while retying my hair, turning to face into the wind, risking the scratch of sand beneath my already sore eyelids; its crunching against my teeth.
Sand, salt and shell fragments speckle the twists of it,…[Read more] -
Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition – June 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 1 month ago
Congratulations, Libby! And thanks, Ath ☺️
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Barny replied to the topic Monthly Competition – June 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 1 month ago
Well done, Libby – a deserved win!! And thanks Ath.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – June 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 1 month ago
Yes indeed, Well done Libby – such beautiful writing. [And well done Ath for getting it right ;-)] Also for the theme of the competition which chimed with the greater degree of looking back I occasionally do these days.
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Thank you @sandradavies . I very much enjoyed your story too. A pleasure to read.
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Athelstone replied to the topic Monthly Competition – June 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 1 month ago
Libby: Sound Waves.
A real slice of life. Beautifully portrayed, the violent action all at a distance and the thoughts of the protagonist so quiet so mundane that we just know a bomb is going to explode into the story.Sandra: Another fairy tale.
Ah, becoming an adult. I’m so glad I’m not the only one still waiting for that Corinthians mom…[Read more]-
Thank you @athelstone. I enjoyed writing to the theme. The other entries were so good I’m very chuffed to have won.
I’ll go away and think of a theme for July.
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Barny replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
DoW problems: Usability just isn’t what it should be; not being able to post pictures is a pain; definitely doesn’t promote idle chat.
The wordcloud was very far from perfect, but had one significant difference: the course offerings meant new people were always joining, wondering wth was going on, some figuring it out or persisting without fig…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition – June 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 5 years, 1 month ago
It’s not great, but it’s an entry… 🙂
THAT BIT BETWEEN WHITEKIRK AND TYNINGHAME, NEAR TO BINNING WOOD
(276 WORDS inc TITLE)
I wondered if there might be ticks. In the grass, I mean. After all, they’re rampant in this weather, aren’t they? And they’re nasty little buggers. The consequences of Lyme disease can haunt you for years…[Read more]
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Athelstone replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
The garlic will be ready for harvesting in a few weeks.
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Ha, bet it’s nicer than shop bought! 🙂
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How long does it keep for?
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I’ve no idea…hang on…according to google, it lasts about a month just sitting around doing nothing, but if you put it somewhere warm and dry so that the skin-layer of leaves goes papery, it can last for several months.
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I thought you were an experienced garlic grower but I see you’re a novice like us! At least yours has grown. Ours never showed its face!
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The best I’ve managed is chives.
One thing about the weather this year: the patches of meadow pea on the lane’s verges are larger than usual. Rich golden yellow flowers liked by bees.
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Athelstone replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 1 month ago
Well, there’s a lot to think about. And to get started on.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 2 months ago
Deeply pleased to hear other people want idle chat.
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Idle chat about what? Oh, … yeah. Yes please.
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Been lucky enough to escape Covid testing but got to have two next week before travelling. Are they really as awful as people claim?
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Ah, I can spot idle chat when it slaps me in the face. Have done one of the lateral flow type – you have to stroke your tonsils with a long cotton bud, then right up your nose. Fun. I find the tonsils one really difficult, makes me retch. OTOH I was clear 🙂 In the UK we can get free tests from pharmacies. Go for it! Hope it’s a nice holiday.
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Well, I’ll let you know Barny but it sounds disgusting!
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[idly] you did ask. Yeah let me know how it goes, but you can skim the details if you want.
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Watch this space…
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All fine! But only nasal swab for PCR test in France!!
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Athelstone replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 2 months ago
I certainly agree with the point about idle chat.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 2 months ago
My thoughts… I agree that the format doesn’t help and I’d love to see it changed. Maybe to something that would encourage more idle chat. Something about the format makes me feel I need to have something particularly worthwhile to say in order to post. I think idle chat is important for keeping relationships going but I may be in a minority…[Read more]
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Squidge replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 2 months ago
I don’t post here as often as I perhaps should, though I love knowing it’s here if I need it, or to celebrate good news with other peeps, and of course, to be challenged to write a short story every now and again.
Beyond that, I think because I’m published, working on new material, editing for other people, testing a writing course, I don’t have…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic The Future of the Den in the forum Blogs 5 years, 2 months ago
Site was ‘murdered’ because owner decided to shut it down then did so, Telling no-one and refusing to answer all communications thereafter.
I do think we that were there were lucky, insofar as it was a chatty, supportive active group, probably at the peak of its activity, which made the death of it al the more tragic,
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Hi @janeshuff, the only response to my beta reading request was your kind message explaining that you aren’t able to help at present. After a month or so, I deleted the request.
I agree that it would be beneficial to have a discussion about beta reading. As you said, it’s a good learning process for both reader and writer. I guess the first thing…[Read more]