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Philippa East replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
Thanks guys! I’m going to try and draw up a shortlist for Sarah today…
I really appreciate all the help
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Philippa East replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
I LOVE the sound of this book!!
How about…. (London’s) Queen of Time and Shadow
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Philippa East replied to the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 9 months ago
Exactly 🙂
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Tony Lyttle replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
In the Nick of Time
Lost in Time
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Squidge replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
The time between?
Between times?
The Time Snatcher of London Towns?
A shadow of time… (working on from Jonathan’s suggestions)
A shadow in time?I really hate titles sometimes!;)
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RichardB replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
A Cuckoo in the Nest?
Hmm. Possibly a bit of a cliché, but the image seems apt.
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Daedalus replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
In the Shadow of the City
The City in Time’s Shadow
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JaneShuff replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
Brainstorming:
An Uneasy Homecoming.
After the Happy Ending.
The Missing Years.
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JaneShuff replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
Ooooh. I like The Time Stealer! But I’m also wondering, since this is meant to be a trilogy or a series, could you have two titles – one for the trilogy and one for each book. So it could be The Time Stealer Trilogy. The individual titles could possibly be linked in some way. Like the chess theme that runs through the titles of the books in…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic New title needed for 'Snatched' – help! in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
Thinking out loud here…
Daughter (Children?) of Shadows
Daughter of the Shadowland(s)
The Time Stealer’s …… (Adversary/Daughter/Enemy)
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Daedalus replied to the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 9 months ago
I like that way of putting it. Helpful.
I haven’t seen ‘Downsizing’ but it sounds like a film that is a bit overloaded with ideas and ends up getting lost among them.
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Philippa East started the topic Controlling Idea / Downsizing in the forum Coffee Shop 7 years, 9 months ago
On the podcast I am obsessed with (storygrid.com), they refer to a story’s theme as the “controlling idea”. I like this way of putting it, because a good theme helps you control the unwieldy beast that most (draft) stories are.
A “controlling idea” might be something like “happiness comes through pursuing our true calling”, “money isn’t…[Read more]
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Philippa East replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
Oh my goodness, guys, what great suggestions! I will check out those links too.
@Squidge, I’d love to take a look at your exercise if you can send it?
The focus for the book is about whether and how a family can truly reconcile after such a trauma, and what level of culpability a family must ultimately shoulder. Much time in the book is spent in…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
You talk about bonds and use the term ‘enmeshed’ so I’m going for The Untangling.
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Barry Walsh posted an update 7 years, 9 months ago
Nice to be back among old friends and, hopefully, some new ones. About a hundred years ago, I wrote a novel. I’ve finally got to the end of another but it’s far from finished. Looking forward to reading some short stories.
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Good to know, Barry, we’ve been waiting for it! (For those Denizens who don’t know Barry, he wrote a fantastic, bittersweet coming of age novel set in the 1960s called The Pimlico Kid, which is well worth a read)
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Thank you Daeds. it’s certainly been a long time, something I might blog about one day. On second thoughts, it might not be such good read! I hope all goes well for you and I’m pleased to see your productivity in recent times.
Barry
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Squidge replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
I like the ‘Here Ends…’, but what to say is ending.
…the Seven Years of Pain
…the Seven Years of Separation.
Why not something like Seven Years Apart or The seven years of separation. The End Begins Here…? Just playing now!I also wonder if some of the other themes are more relevant to the title? There are an awful lot of themes going…[Read more]
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Daedalus replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
Interesting one. Titles can be hard. Sometimes a really perfect one will just present itself. Other times…
I was looking, as I’m sure you have, at a thesaurus to see if it was possible to simply replace ‘abduction’. The best I could do was ‘Here Ends the Absence’, or possibly ‘Here Ends the Departure’ which I’m not sure really does it.
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Philippa East replied to the topic Titles in the forum The Writers' Lifeboat 7 years, 9 months ago
During the abduction, she believed her family had abandoned her. Now that she has returned, she doesn’t know whom to trust, or where her “real” home is. She clings to cousin Jess, she mistrusts the adults, in the end she turns on her cousin too (bit of an all-is-lost moment there, before the end).
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