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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – April 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Attempt to alleviate some plot pressure!
Monday they returned from Suffolk, Luke taking over the driving just before they reached the A14, having said to Fran, ‘You do the wriggly village bits. Easier on my arm if I drive the motorways.’
‘No worries.’ A lie. Except for easing the small concern Luke didn’t over-do it with his still-healing…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Thank you Ath, for comp and comments, and very well done Knicks. Seagreen (who gave me lovely images), and Kate., whose teddy could well be a friend of mine,
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
I lied.
Summer of sixty-one – when Percy Faith’s ‘Theme for a Summer Place’ persistently played along the telegraph wires, exhaling hauntingly into the ether – was one of much excitement and promise for the girls of the small Hertfordshire village where I lived, thanks to a recent influx into the village of no fewer than eight new males, mos…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
Congratulations Ath, an intriguing tale and well-deserved top place. And thank you Raine for providing me with a very useful opportunity to work out a scene in my current wip as well as inspire others to provide entertaining tales.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
A question of perception
After, naked, panting; towelling stinging sweat from our eyelids, we stepped outside through the open French windows into the still-warm August night. A quick sideways glance: he as relieved as I to no longer be the focus of intense female attention. Relieved it had ended – honourably? Yes. That could honestly be said.…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
Congratulations Raine – so uncomfortably vivid! – and to all of you who managed to fight down an adversary, real or fictitious. And thank you Knicks for competition and comments.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 6 months ago
Not exactly ‘Overcoming Adversary’
Truth is, I can’t think of anything big enough in my life to count as ‘adversity’. (If it was big, I either ignored, walked painlessly around, or didn’t even notice it.
So I’m giving you, ‘My writing journey‘, which is as close as I can get.If we’re talking about ‘proper’ conscious writing; wanting to set d…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 6 months ago
Knicks, you very closely echo my thoughts about participation in the comps (and in the Den as a whole, to be honest, despite Ath’s striving to make it a more use-friendly site) but I think the answer IS just to press on with setting one – if we join the non-participants, they have us beat.
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Sandra posted an update 4 years, 6 months ago
I’ve just been reminded of Allan Guthrie’s 34 tips on writing, including pleonasms – a word unknown to me when I first heard it, but which tweak my writing conscience quite frequently. https://notetoselfhumanize.wordpress.com/2010/09/14/32-writing-rules-allan-guthrie/
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 6 months ago
December destined to be a quiet month, I suppose, and very few of you seemed to have suffered from the prurient curiosity about the activities of Jack and Jill’s activities I did, Nevertheless the two entries submitted were a pleasure.
Ath’s trawl through several nursery rhymes returned me to childhood, browsing through books illustrated by the…[Read more] -
Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 6 months ago
Just realised deadline is today – I’ll be back ASAP to read and muse over a decision.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 7 months ago
Thanks, Ath, though I’m not sure I’d welcome being 21 again, in many ways (all those nights with screaming babies!!)
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 7 months ago
Come on folks! Jack and Jill went up a hill … As a child you must’ve wondered what happened to send them tunbling down! It’s my birthday on Friday (a horribly big one) so please present me with a story for the December comp.
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Sandra posted an update 4 years, 7 months ago
December comp is up – you’ve a month to exercise your writing muscles and put one of 2022’s Resolutions into practice.
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Sandra started the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 7 months ago
When Jack and Jill are found – Jack unconscious, Jill bruised, with a broken wrist, on the downward path from Old Well Hill, each are separately interviewed while in their hospital beds. Each gives an implausible and conflicting account of the events which led to their injuries.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – November 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 7 months ago
Thank you Ath, and thank you Knicks for a version I wish I’d thought of , so many excellent phrases. Now to try to craft an irresistible competition!!
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – November 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 8 months ago
Failed on the basics.
I’d been riding pillion on a BSA since my teens. Clandestinely to start, because my parents forbade me, but by 2004 I was well past that, and three years past my first BSA rally, which had taken us to Australia. Being one of 200 bikes wending our way across rolling golden hills an unforgettable experience. Even so, that…[Read more] -
Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – September 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 10 months ago
Another pieced-together piece, and only 245 words, but best I can manage.
Bourbon dreaming
A bottle of Makers Mark from my husband for Christmas and a wine-free tea (Köstritzer Schwarzbier instead) so I took a glass of bourbon to bed with me, along with John Rebus.
And I dreamt, more vividly and memorably than usual, with more logic than usual…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – August 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 10 months ago
Late to this, but well done indeed @Knicky, for a poetic tale. Also to @Athelstone – I too had a lane like that in the place where I was born, which decades later had its magic buried beneath tarmac.
Thanks @Seagreen for the challenge and the feedback – I did enjoy the opportunity to just play. - Load More
