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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – April 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 2 months ago
Attempt to alleviate some plot pressure!
Monday they returned from Suffolk, Luke taking over the driving just before they reached the A14, having said to Fran, ‘You do the wriggly village bits. Easier on my arm if I drive the motorways.’
‘No worries.’ A lie. Except for easing the small concern Luke didn’t over-do it with his still-healing…[Read more]
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Knicks started the topic Monthly Competition – April 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Here we go. This week at work I am under enormous pressure to complete all of my reports, my register, scheme book and other administrative paperwork, as well as work on my school’s Easter Hat Parade and organize a webinar on reading for all infant parents. Enormous Pressure. The kind that makes you queasy in the chest and your armpits…[Read more]
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Woopity woop! 🥳🥳 Thanks, Ath! This was a real challenge for me as evidenced by my unusually late submission. I thought I wasn’t going to make it, but I was working on it the whole time, trying to get the voice right, and make sure my own meaning was clear.
Love your work as always, ladies. Seagreen, your piece was absolutely beautiful; Sandra’s…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Thank you Ath, for comp and comments, and very well done Knicks. Seagreen (who gave me lovely images), and Kate., whose teddy could well be a friend of mine,
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Happiness Is An Old Slut
Y’know, there were a time – before the Great Dark – when I would chase Happiness. Relentless in my pursuit, I would pin her with a heated stare onto the walls of my life, undress her slow and vulgar, dry fingerin’ the places where she kept her best secrets. But even when I caught her, had my way with her, I knew Happine…[Read more]
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 3 months ago
Ath! Ath! I got sumthing!! Had real worries about it but a slight thing came to me this morning. So I’ll see where it takes me 😃✨
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
I lied.
Summer of sixty-one – when Percy Faith’s ‘Theme for a Summer Place’ persistently played along the telegraph wires, exhaling hauntingly into the ether – was one of much excitement and promise for the girls of the small Hertfordshire village where I lived, thanks to a recent influx into the village of no fewer than eight new males, mos…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
The glow of embers in the fireplace, warm and comforting
Shadows chased by the sudden flare of a match
A candle flickering in a steamed-up window
The bob of a rescuer’s headlamp on a snowy mountain
A lighthouse in a stormy sea, guiding, reassuring
Sunlight slicing through dark curtains
A beam of torchlight on an unlit path
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly comp – March 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
Lols, oh dear. I’m happy. I am. Happy happy happy. Tinking the happiest of thoughts. And not failing whatsoever. *goes off to see what big, fat li-, I mean what I can do* 😬😬 haha
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
Each of the entries for February was so evocative, provocative and moody; it was a great selection of theme from @Raine, and great flow of words from everyone who participated. Congrats as always, Ath, can’t wait to go peek and see what you have in store for March 😊✨
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
Congratulations Ath, an intriguing tale and well-deserved top place. And thank you Raine for providing me with a very useful opportunity to work out a scene in my current wip as well as inspire others to provide entertaining tales.
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Raine replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
Thank you guys for entering! And for writing such fun pieces – they all have something special to them, I think.
@athelstone I love the details and voice of yours, the small touches that make each character so recognisable.
@sandradavies well, naked men wrestling, what more can anyone ask for really?? Love the balance of violence and tenderness…[Read more] -
Raine posted an update 4 years, 4 months ago
Just a couple more days to get your monthly comp entries in. If it helps with motivation, I’ve just had a recent one accepted for publication! So write them words, they might end up earning you money!
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
Sarita
Clouds thicker than Peruvian fog, vaporous specters rising across the shifting mirror of the sky. The day’s restlessness calms my peregrine heart, part of the patterning and paradox of life I’ve come to cherish. Chilling drops of rain splatter like surprises on my upturned face, not unpleasant, like a birthday party you didn’t expect but a…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
A question of perception
After, naked, panting; towelling stinging sweat from our eyelids, we stepped outside through the open French windows into the still-warm August night. A quick sideways glance: he as relieved as I to no longer be the focus of intense female attention. Relieved it had ended – honourably? Yes. That could honestly be said.…[Read more]
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
On it, dolly 🥰🥰
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Raine started the topic Monthly Comp – February 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
Right folks. Two things that featured heavily in my weekend were Encanto and storms … so those are my inspirations for this month’s challenge. I want a scene with 2+ siblings interacting & a weather or astrological event. 400 words by the 28th, bonus points for Encanto easter eggs!
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Raine replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
Aw thank you @knickylaurelle!! Glad it struck a chord 🙂 And I loved everyone else’s entries so yay everyone!
Okay, I need to think about next month – will get pondering and post something later/tmrw.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
Congratulations Raine – so uncomfortably vivid! – and to all of you who managed to fight down an adversary, real or fictitious. And thank you Knicks for competition and comments.
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition – January 2022 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
I had a first line (oddly enough, my adversary was Time) and discovered Time had beaten me. Not to worry, there’s always next month.
Congratulations, Raine. Your entry was frightening (in an inspirational kind of way ☺️)
And thanks, Knicky, even though I was too slow 😂 - Load More
