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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
Alrighty, I’ll get right on it. Like right now. Sorry for the delay. Ath is right, Libby! 😊✨
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
Knicks, you very closely echo my thoughts about participation in the comps (and in the Den as a whole, to be honest, despite Ath’s striving to make it a more use-friendly site) but I think the answer IS just to press on with setting one – if we join the non-participants, they have us beat.
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
Thank you Sandra, and Athelstone too!! I don’t think I could have managed what I did if Ath didn’t set his usual bar for quality, enjoyable, supremely witty writing 😊✨
That said – and Please Forgive Me if this isn’t the place to say it, I’m not sure where that place would be – it kinda feels like its just mostly us three passing the ball around…[Read more]
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Sandra posted an update 4 years, 4 months ago
I’ve just been reminded of Allan Guthrie’s 34 tips on writing, including pleonasms – a word unknown to me when I first heard it, but which tweak my writing conscience quite frequently. https://notetoselfhumanize.wordpress.com/2010/09/14/32-writing-rules-allan-guthrie/
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
December destined to be a quiet month, I suppose, and very few of you seemed to have suffered from the prurient curiosity about the activities of Jack and Jill’s activities I did, Nevertheless the two entries submitted were a pleasure.
Ath’s trawl through several nursery rhymes returned me to childhood, browsing through books illustrated by the…[Read more] -
Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 4 months ago
Just realised deadline is today – I’ll be back ASAP to read and muse over a decision.
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
Well Done
Jack opened his eyes to see the hooded glower of Constable Roquefort shining down upon him like the judgement of heaven. That glower caused him to squint, which drew his attention to the dull pain pulsing from his vinegar-wrapped crown.
“Where’m I?”
“Hospital.” Roquefort’s brusque, deep growl was like a wolf’s, of which Jack wa…[Read more]
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
Ath this proper Mother Goose / Enid Blyton 😊😊 Gonna do my best Sandra!
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
Thanks, Ath, though I’m not sure I’d welcome being 21 again, in many ways (all those nights with screaming babies!!)
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
Come on folks! Jack and Jill went up a hill … As a child you must’ve wondered what happened to send them tunbling down! It’s my birthday on Friday (a horribly big one) so please present me with a story for the December comp.
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Janette posted an update 4 years, 5 months ago
Apologies for the over-long gaps between my visits to Den. So much is still going on for me, including regular follow-up hospital visits following my multiple, bi-lateral arm breaks, one arm sadly looking towards being permanently handicapped. It happens to be my dominant arm, so many problems have arisen, including housework, personal care, the…[Read more]
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Oh dear, Janette, that sucks on so many levels. All I can do is send you a virtual hug, so consider it sent.
At least you’ve been getting follow-up care. MrsB fell and broke her left humerus while we were on holiday about fifteen months ago. There were a couple of visits to local hospitals while we were still there, but since coming home she’s…[Read more]-
Oh, Richard, that’s not good. If she’s still not right, they should be looking after her. I have to say I cannot fault my treatment, and they sent me for a bone density test, which showed up Osteopenia, which they are addressing. Is a consultation with your doctor worth a go?
Thanks for the hug – sending one right back.
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly comp – November 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
Congratulations Sandra! Wonderful as always. I’m looking forward to your next comp theme! (And the fact that I’ll be off work for the holidays which hopefully means I can do it some justice) 😊✨
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Sandra posted an update 4 years, 5 months ago
December comp is up – you’ve a month to exercise your writing muscles and put one of 2022’s Resolutions into practice.
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Sandra started the topic Monthly competition December 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
When Jack and Jill are found – Jack unconscious, Jill bruised, with a broken wrist, on the downward path from Old Well Hill, each are separately interviewed while in their hospital beds. Each gives an implausible and conflicting account of the events which led to their injuries.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly comp – November 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
Thank you Ath, and thank you Knicks for a version I wish I’d thought of , so many excellent phrases. Now to try to craft an irresistible competition!!
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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly comp – November 2021 in the forum Monthly Competition 4 years, 5 months ago
Real rough, block-of-text, stream-of-consciousness business, because it’s the end of the month, and how did we get here?!, and I been stupid-busy so zero time for much fanciness, or many words 😅😅
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I Got Nothing
Understanding. To buttress. In-sight. The value in me seeking the value in you, and seeing it. Knowing it, like a true friend. What…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic The Future of the Den – Part 2 in the forum Blogs 4 years, 5 months ago
Had a quick peek and it looks great!
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Raine replied to the topic The Future of the Den – Part 2 in the forum Blogs 4 years, 6 months ago
Hi @Athelstone, sorry – no I don’t think there is a delete option currently either, it was just that I could delete it off the main wall, but not in the forum which seemed like it might cause confusion. It would be good to be able to delete your own comments though, particularly for the monthly comps & publication rights issues, but it’s not critical.
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Raine replied to the topic The Future of the Den – Part 2 in the forum Blogs 4 years, 6 months ago
It does look much improved @athelstone. Thank you for all the hard work. I love that copy/pasting from word works better & that reply threads won’t vanish. Also love the chat – I commented in there that I almost didn’t spot it though – is there a way of making it more prominent? Or listed on the ‘Activity’ drop down menu at the top?
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