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Knicks replied to the topic Monthly Competion – September 2023 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months ago
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The book was finished, the story told. But more importantly, the truth laid bare. Every pocket dimension of past trauma exorcised. Every chapter of his life stamped adult, checked as complete. Every fragment of what it meant to be human sorted and struck through.
Now was a new time. A beginning time. Time to rejoin the…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition August 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Only two entries, as Athelstone rightly points out, but both were a joy insofar as they echoed some of my experiences. Like Jill, Steve and I were but 16 and eighteen – me young enough to be banned from going on the back of his motorbike, but after four years of ‘going steady’, when Steve asked my Dad for, permission to marry me his response…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition August 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Only two entries, as Athelstone rightly points out, but both were a joy insofar as they echoed some of my experiences. Like Jill, Steve and I were but sixteen and eighteen – me young enough to be banned from going on the back of his motorbike, but after four years of ‘going steady’, when Steve asked my Dad for, permission to marry me his respo…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition August 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 11 months, 3 weeks ago
Aargh – busy weekend filled with grandchildren visits and attempts to add names to a 1905 photo of a Christmas celebration family history question. I’ll get to reading and deciding ASAP.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly competition August 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 12 months ago
@ Libby: Sorry not be reading an entry from you, but fully sympathise with lack of time.
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Sandra posted an update 1 year ago
Ten days left to write 500 words about a first time meeting with in-laws (and follow a link to a brilliantly vivid account of Liz Lochead’s experience)
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly competition August 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
The Woman Whose Nose Pointed North
I had already met my mother-in-law, years earlier, not that I could have known. We had moved onto a still-being-built estate, the house across from ours taken by a large family. So many children were a draw for a five-year-old girl and her brother.
The children, I remember, seemed friendly. Not so the…[Read more]
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Sandra started the topic Monthly competition August 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
As usual, I began my search for inspiration by looking through my collection of charity shop-acquired poetry books, although ‘Intimate expanses’, a collection of Scottish poems published 1978-2002, in which I found Liz Lockhead’s ‘My Rival’s house’ was a first purchase from Carcanet. It details a vivid account of a first meeting with a future…[Read more]
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly Comp – July 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Thank you, Sea, for the challenge and for the kind words. Congratulations, Sandra, your words clearly came from the heart and made you a worthy winner.
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Comp – July 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Have to say I am astonished to be chosen, Sea – and grateful, despite feeling that I fell far short of ‘enthralling’ in comparison to those far more apt which were posted, and made impressive reading. Also, following what has been something of a let-down day, this was a welcome cheering, so thank you for that. I’ll aim to post August’s…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Comp – July 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Thank you for indulging my ‘tearful’ requirement and apologies again for being so late with the results.
@Jill – Good to see you back, and thank you for diving back into the monthly comp with your tale of Lucia. I confess to knowing nothing about Vestal Virgins, but your entry has definitely piqued my curiosity and I’m sure there’s a much larger…[Read more]
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Congratulations, Sandra and fellow entrants. All excellent stories which touched me and brought tears to my eyes. Sandra’s image resonated with my own recent experience and sadness as my husband had to go home alone for nine days, tired and worried when I was in hospital. I chose not to write a personal story as enough personal emotions w…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Comp – July 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year ago
Foolishly, I thought I’d have time on my nightshift to absorb the stories and choose a winner. Ha! The salt mine overlords had other ideas.
I promise it’ll be done today…
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Comp – July 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
Okay Sea, that ‘honesty snagged my conscience:
The last time I cried was as I attempted to sleep, having earlier been admitted to hospital after my husband Steve correctly diagnosed the oddness of my being unable to control my fingers, while doing the Saturday General Knowledge as potentially a stroke. Quoting ‘FAST’, he did everything right…[Read more]
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Janette posted an update in the group
DONATIONS 1 year, 1 month agoPresuming your details haven’t changed since last time, I hope you will find my £20 donation in your bank. Hope you find the rest.
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Comp – July 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
As you know, Sandra, this prompt came about following the loss of one of our cardiologists and my subsequent inability to write anything meaningful in his Book of Condolences. Faced with Imposter Syndrome because I didn’t know him as well as some of the other nurses, I simply invalidated my feelings and wrote a stiff little sentence that had n…[Read more]
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Sandra replied to the topic Monthly Comp – July 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
<p style=”text-align: right;”>Sorry Sea, I’ve been racking my brain (while fighting off Ken Dodd and attempting to pack for some days in the Hebrides) but am totally bereft of words about tears.</p>
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Janette replied to the topic Monthly Comp – July 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
The Last Sense
Curse my tears, dissolving my bold exterior to expose the raw feeling beneath. How dare they come at a time when I needed to show courage? To offer a united support when Mum’s strength had finally crumbled?
And see how the foundations of mine gave way, leaving the sturdier ones to put on the brave faces; carry the weak link of…[Read more]
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Seagreen started the topic Monthly Comp – July 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
For July, I’d like to be enthralled by your creative endeavours inspired by the following quote:
‘There is a sacredness in tears. They are not the mark of weakness, but of power. They speak more eloquently than ten thousand tongues. They are the messengers of overwhelming grief, of deep contrition, and of unspeakable love.’ Washington Irving…[Read more]
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Seagreen replied to the topic Monthly Competition June 2025 in the forum Monthly Competition 1 year, 1 month ago
I won’t lie, I logged in last night to find out what the prompt for this month’s comp was going to be, little expecting – in the face of the other entries – that I would be setting it 😂
So thanks, Ath, for the comp and for that WTH!? moment when I got home from work 😃 and thanks to everyone else for inspiring me to try in the first place. I’l…[Read more]
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